Dear Lily Marquart,

Your citations look pretty well done. You have various sources from different places, but
you cite them how they are supposed to be and in the correct format. You could just make sure
all your capitalization in your citations are all good when finishing your final draft. In your
fourth source, I believe the citation and paragraph are connected, you may want to take a look at
that and fix whatever you feel needs be.
Each annotation contains a summary, and they are all connected in a way to Cracker Jack
so that is good. You summaries are clear of what the sources main topics were. You may want to
just make sure all your summeries flow well so it is easy for the reader to understand. Look for
grammar errors and spelling errors throughout some of your summaries. Also in your summaries
you could explain the authors if you know anything about them, this just helps establish their
credibility. The lengths look to be good for each of your sources, as they are enough for your
summaries to be clear.
Your annotations seem to be credible, through the citations and summaries that are given
the information does seem credible. You could use information from the source and use an in text
citation to use evidence give your source more credibility. The only source that could have some
questioning about credibility would be your first source so make sure you can establish its
credibility in your summary. Your paper is good so far and your citations are also well done.

Sincerely,

Ricardo E. Corona