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1. IELTS Academic Writing Task 2
In the second part of the IELTS Academc !rtn" Test# $o% ha&e to 'rte 250 'ords.
(o% sho%)d spend 40 mn%tes on ths tas*. !rtn" Tas* 2 s 'orth more than Tas* 1# so
$o% need to do t 'e)).
+or IELTS !rtn" Tas* 2# $o% ha&e to 'rte an essa$ dsc%ssn" a topc. (o% ')) ,e
"&en an opnon- ar"%ment# dfferent ponts of &e' or a pro,)em to dsc%ss.
ost st%dents prepare phrases for ntrod%cn" and )n*n" deas. /o'e&er# not man$
st%dents prepare "ood deas and opnons for IELTS topcs.
Some hard 'or* on these areas can ma*e a ," dfference to $o%r 'rtn" score.
(o% ha&e 40 mn%tes for tas* 2# so tr$ or"ansn" $o%r tme n the fo))o'n" 'a$
irst 10 minutes
ead the %eston and ma*e s%re $o% %nderstand 'hat t s as*n" $o% to do. !rte a p)an
for a 4para"raph essa$ ntrod%cton# 2 man para"raphs# conc)%son and spend most of
the 10 mn%tes thn*n" of deas for the 2 man para"raphs.
* minutes
!rte $o%r ntrod%cton 2 sentences are eno%"h eamp)es
20 minutes
Spend 10 mn%tes on each of $o%r man ,od$ para"raphs. These are the$ most mportant
part of $o%r essa$# and the *e$ to a h"h score.
Last * minutes
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St%dents are often s%rprsed ,$ m$ 10mn%te p)annn" tme. In m$ eperence# a "ood
p)an he)ps $o% to 'rte $o%r essa$ m%ch faster than $o% thn*.
Toda$ I 'ant to sho' $o% 'hat happens n m$ ,ran 'hen I see an$ IELTS !rtn" Tas*
2 %eston.
1. I read the %est on &er$ car ef%))$# ma$,e thre e tmes. I as* m$se)f :!hats the
topc; !hat s the %eston as*n" me to 'rte a,o%t;:
2. I %nder)ne the *e$ thn" s that m%s t ,e nc)%ded n the essa$ . I a)'a$s ans'er
e&er$ part of the %eston.
3. <o' I thn* a,o%t m$ 4 para" raph str%ct%re. I can 'r te an$ t $pe of es sa$ n 4
para"raphs= I >%st need to decde 'hat to p%t n each para"raph.
4. If I need to "&e m$ opnon# I thn* :!hat s the easest opnon to ep)an; !hat
"ood &oca,%)ar$ co%)d I %se;:
5. Then I 'rte do'n some &oca,%)ar$ deas that are re)ated to the topc.
6. I tr$ to 'rt e 2 sentences for th e ntrod%cton I ntrod%ce the top c# then "&e a
smp)e ans'er nc)%dn" m$ opnon f the %eston as*s for t.
7. I 'rte short to pc sentences to start each par a"raph# then de&e)op m$ deas ,$
ep)ann" and s%pportn" 'th eamp)es.
8. I )oo* at the %eston from tme to tme n order to chec* that Im ans'ern" e&er$
part of t.
9. I *no' that I 'rte a,o%t 10 'ords per )ne= I can %c*)$ chec* the appromate
n%m,er of 'ords that I&e 'rtten.
10. If I need more 'ords t o reach 250# I epand one of m$ eamp)es n the ma n
,od$ para"raphs. If necessar$# I dra' an arro' to sho' 'here I 'ant to add the
etra 'ords.
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this
cause for indivi duals and societ y? Suggest some measures that could be taken to
reduce the impact of aging populations.
Some ad-ice:
;ro#$ems caused:
an ncrease n the n%m,er of retred peop)e 'ho ')) rece&e a penson= a sma))er
proporton of $o%n" ad%)ts= sma))er 'or*n" pop%)atons= a "reater ta ,%rden on 'or*n"
ad%)ts= demand for hea)thcare ')) rse= $o%n" ad%)ts ')) ha&e to )oo* after e)der)$
re)at&es
;ossi#$e so$utions:
peop)e ma$ ha&e to retre )ater= the state penson a"e ')) rse= medca) ad&ances and
hea)th pro"rammes m"ht a))o' e)der)$ peop)e to sta$ hea)th$ and 'or* for )on"er=
peop)e sho%)d ,e enco%ra"ed to ha&e more ch)dren= "o&ernments sho%)d enco%ra"e
mm"raton n order to ncrease the n%m,er of $o%n"er ad%)ts
+or opnon essa$s# sho%)d $o% "&e ,oth sdes of the ar"%ment or >%st one sde; The
ans'er s that $o% can do ether.
1. +rst
2. Introd%cton topc B$o%r
dea to s%pport $o%ropnon
opnon ether a"ree or dsa"ree
3. (o%r opnon
4. onc)%son ep)an that $o% %nder stand the oppos te opnon# ,%t o&era )) $o%
,e)e&e that...
Its &er$ mportant to "et the ntrod%cton r"ht. Ths sho's the eamner 'hether $o% are
"on" to "&e one sde of the ar"%ment or ,oth sdes.
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/a&e a )oo* at ths )esson to see ho' I ntrod%ce ,oth sdes essa$ str%ct%re %sn" the
'ord :'h)e:.
an$ peop)e as* me a,o%t the dfference ,et'een an ar"%ment essa$ and a dsc%sson
essa$. /eres an eas$ 'a$ to thn* a,o%t the dfference
• !hen $o% ar"%e# $o% are tr$n" to pers%ade the other person to a"ree 'th $o%r
pont of &e'. (o% m"ht e&en "et an"r$D
•
!hen $o% dsc%ss# $o% consder dfferent ponts of &e'# and no,od$ "ets an"r$.
The %eston sho%)d ma*e t &er$ c)ear 'hat t 'ants $o% to do. If t as*s $o% to
:dsc%ss:# $o% sho%)d 'rte a,o%t ad&anta"es and dsad&anta"es or t'o dfferent &e's.
If the %eston as*s 'hether $o% :a"ree or dsa"ree:# ts as*n" for your &e'. +or ths
t$pe of %eston# "&e $o%r opnon n the ntrod%cton and s%pport t n the rest of the
essa$. Tr$ to pers%ade the reader to a"ree 'th $o%.
ost dsc%sson essa$s a)so as* for $o%r opnon. Sometmes# ho'e&er# the %eston
doesnt as* for $o%r opnon. It m"ht >%st as* $o% to dsc%ss t'o dfferent &e's# or
compare the ad&anta"es and dsad&anta"es.
emem,er f the %eston doesnt as* for $o%r opnon# dont "&e t.
ompare the 2 essa$s attached ,e)o'. The$ are a)most the same# ,%t n the frst essa$ I
"&e m$ opnon c)ear)$ n se&era) p)aces# 'h)e n the second essa$ I&e remo&ed m$
opnons comp)ete)$.
/ere are some %sef%) phrases for descr,n" ca%ses and effects for IELTS !rtn" Tas* 2
and ma$,e Spea*n" art 3. I)) %se the topc of ")o,a) 'armn" to sho' ho' the
phrases 'or*.
1. a%se Effect
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2. Effect a%se
<otce the dfferent %ses of res%)t res%)ts n# s the res%)t of# as a res%)t. St%dents ma*e a
)ot of msta*es 'th these phrases.
$ sa$n" that $o% a"ree to a certan etent not comp)ete)$# $o% can no' ta)* a,o%t
,oth sdes of the ar"%ment.
E(am"$e !uestion:
eop)e &stn" other co%ntres sho%)d adapt to the c%stoms and ,eha&o%rs epected
there. The$ sho%)d not epect the host co%ntr$ to 'e)come dfferent c%stoms and
,eha&o%rs. To 'hat etent do $o% a"ree or dsa"ree;
<y introduction:
To a certan etent I a"ree that &stors to other co%ntres sho%)d respect the c%)t%re of the
host co%ntr$. /o'e&er# I a)so thn* that host co%ntres sho%)d accept &stors c%)t%ra)
dfferences.
After ths ntrod%cton# $o% can 'rte one para"raph a,o%t each &e'.
+or IELTS !rtn" Tas* 2# *eep $o%r ntrod%cton short and smp)e. ?ont 'aste tme
'rtn" a )on" ntrod%cton= the man ,od$ para"raphs are more mportant.
As comp%ters are ,en" %sed more and more n ed%caton# there ')) soon ,e no ro)e for
the teacher n the c)assroom. To 'hat etent do $o% a"ree or dsa"ree;
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%ere is my introduction$
It s tr%e that comp%ters ha&e ,ecome an essenta) too) for teachers and st%dents n a))
areas of ed%caton. /o'e&er# 'h) e comp%ters are etreme)$ %sef%)# I do not a"ree 'th
the dea that the$ co%)d soon rep)ace teachers comp)ete)$.
emem,er# do a smp)e ntrod%cton# then $o% can foc%s on the man para"raphs.
11. IELTS Writing Task 2: introductions
/ere are some eamp)e ntrod%ctons for 3 dfferent t$pes of essa$. $ techn%e s to
'rte 2 sentences
It s tr%e that ch)dren s ,eha&o%r seems to ,e "ettn" 'orse. There are &aro%s reasons
for ths# and ,oth schoo)s and parents need to 'or* to"ether to mpro&e the st%aton.
eop)e ha&e dfferent &e's a,o%t ho' ch)dren sho%)d ,e ta%"ht. !h)e there are some
"ood ar"%ments n fa&o%r of teachn" ch)dren to ,e compett&e# I ,e)e&e that t s ,etter
to enco%ra"e cooperaton.
In recent $ears t has ,ecome more common for 'omen to ret%rn to 'or* after ha&n" a
ch)d. /o'e&er# I do not a"ree that ths has ,een the ca%se of pro,)ems for $o%n" peop)e.
My advice:
Feep $o%r ntrod%cton short. an ,od$ para"raphs are more mportant.
• a*e the ntrod%cton short and do t %c*)$. The man ,od$ para"raphs are
more mportant.
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• T'o sentences are eno%"h 1 ntrod%ce the topc. 2 "&e a ,asc ans'er to the
%eston.
E(am"$e !uestion:
A)) h"h schoo) st%dents sho%)d ,e enco%ra"ed to ta*e part n comm%nt$ ser&ce
pro"rammes.
To 'hat etent do $o% a"ree or dsa"ree 'th ths statement;
<y introduction:
Some peop)e ,e)e&e that h"h schoo) st%dents 'o%)d ,eneft from don" %npad 'or* n
ther )oca) comm%ntes. I comp)ete)$ a"ree that comm%nt$ ser&ce pro"rammes for
teena"ers are a "ood dea.
Its a "ood dea to practse 'rtn" short# fast ntrod%ctons. If $o% can 'rte the
ntrod%cton %c*)$# $o% ')) ha&e more tme to foc%s on the man para"raphs these are
the *e$ to a h"h score.
In many cities, security measures, such as the use of video cameras in public places,
are being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these
measures restrict our individual freedom.
'o the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
/eres m$ short# fast ntrod%cton
It s tr%e that the sec%rt$ n man$ ctes has ,een t"htened n recent $ears. A)tho%"h I
a"ree that some sec%rt$ meas%res can fee) restrct&e# I ,e)e&e that there are more
,enefts than dra',ac*s.
(ote$
In rea)t$# t m"ht not ,e tr%e that sec%rt$ has ,een ncreased n most ctes# ,%t I thn*
'e ha&e to accept ths n order to ans'er the %eston.
The %eston "&es %s an eamp)e of ncreased sec%rt$ &deo cameras# so 'e can
defnte)$ %se that eamp)e n a para"raph a,o%t the dra',ac*s.
<otce that m$ ntrod%cton paraphrases the %eston. I&e %sed some of the 'ords from
the %eston# ,%t there are some nce chan"es too e.". t"htened# fee) restrct&e.
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Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citi)ens
and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
/ere are 3 dfferent ntrod%ctons. <otce that the opnon s c)ear n each one.
A"ree
eop)e ha&e dfferent &e's a,o%t 'hat the man p%rpose of schoo)s sho%)d ,e.
ersona))$# I a"ree that a schoo)s ro)e s to prepare ch)dren to ,e prod%ct&e mem,ers of
socet$.
?sa"ree
an$ peop)e ar"%e that the man ro)e of schoo)s s to prepare ch)dren for ther f%t%re
>o,s. /o'e&er# I ,e)e&e that the p%rpose of ed%caton sho%)d ,e to he)p ch)dren to "ro'
as nd&d%a)s.
a)anced &e'
To a certan etent I a"ree that the ro)e of schoo)s s to prepare ch)dren to ,e prod%ct&e
mem,ers of socet$. /o'e&er# I a)so ,e)e&e that the ed%caton process has a post&e
mpact on %s as nd&d%a)s.
*any people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. "his, they
argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
"o what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
In toda$s )esson I >%st 'ant to )oo* at ho' to 'rte an ntrod%cton for ths t$pe of
%eston. $ smp)e r%)es for tas* 2 ntrod%ctons are
3. ?ont sa&e an$ s%rprses for the conc)%son= "&e $o%r opnon n the ntrod%cton
f the %eston as*s for t.
It s tr%e that some peop)e *no' from an ear)$ a"e 'hat career the$ 'ant to p%rs%e# and
the$ are happ$ to spend the rest of ther )&es n the same professon. !h)e I accept that
ths ma$ s%t man$ peop)e# I ,e)e&e that others en>o$ chan"n" careers or see*n" >o,
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15. IELTS Writing Task 2: introductions and conc$usions
an$ st%dents 'aste tme 'rtn" )on" ntrod%ctons and conc)%sons. These t'o
para"raphs sho%)d ,e short and smp)e= a )on"# comp)e ntrod%cton or conc)%son '))
not "&e $o% a h"h score.
@%st ma*e $o%r ntrod%ctons and conc)%sons %c* and concse# and spend $o%r tme
'rtn" rea))$ "ood man ,od$ para"raphs.
/eres m$ ntrod%cton and conc)%son for the topc of m$ )ast t'o 'rtn" )essons
Introd%cton
There are &aro%s ,enefts and dra',ac*s of ,oo*s# rado and te)e&son as 'a$s to
con&e$ nformaton. In m$ &e'# te)e&son s defnte)$ the most effect&e of these three
meda.
onc)%son
In conc)%son# a)tho%"h ,oo*s# rado and te)e&son each ha&e ther ad&anta"es and
dsad&anta"es# t seems to me that the mpact of te)e&son s "reater.
The ans'er s ts $o%r decson. If $o% comp)ete)$ a"ree# $o% dont need to menton the
opposte &e' >%st s%pport $o%r sde of the ar"%ment. If $o% part)$ a"ree# $o% sho%)d
'rte somethn" a,o%t ,oth sdes.
Loo* at )ast 'ee*s )esson. After the frst t'o ntrod%ctons# I 'o%)d not "&e the other
pont of &e'# ,%t after the )ast ntrod%cton I 'o%)d menton ,oth sdes.
If the %eston as*s 'hether $o% a"ree or dsa"ree# ts often easer to ha&e a stron"
opnon comp)ete)$ a"ree or comp)ete)$ dsa"ree rather than tr$n" to ,e :n the
mdd)e:. /eres an eamp)e %eston
amilies who do not send their children to public schools should not be re&uired to pay
taxes that support universal education.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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I dont thn* there s a :mdd)e ans'er: to ths %eston ether $o% thn* that the parents
sho%)d not pa$ ta a"ree# or $o% thn* the$ sho%)d pa$ ta dsa"ree.
!hen $o% ha&e a stron" opnon# $o% dont need to menton the opposte &e'.
/eres m$ p)an for a 4para"raph essa$
1. Introd%cton 1 sentence to ntro d%ce the topc# 1 sente nce to ma*e $o%r opn on
c)ear e.". I comp)ete)$ dsa"ree...
2. an para"raph s%pport $o%r opnon 'th a reason
Last 'ee* I sad that ts often easer to ha&e a stron" opnon and on)$ s%pport one sde
of the ar"%ment. Toda$ Im "on" to contradct m$se)fD Lets )oo* at a ,a)anced opnon
essa$.
In the last century, the first man to walk on the moon said it was -a giant leap for
mankind. %owever, some people think it has made little difference to our daily lives.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
+or ths %eston# I 'o%)d 'rte that :I part)$ a"ree: or that :I a"ree to some etent:.
Then I 'o%)d 'rte one man para"raph a,o%t each sde of the ar"%ment
1. Introd%cton I part)$ a"ree. a*e t c)ear that $o% ha&e a ,a)anced opnon.
2. Cne sde In pra ctca) terms# sendn" a man to the moon has not chan "ed most
peop)es )&es. !e ha&e not ,enefted n terms of o%r standard of )&n"# hea)th etc.
In fact# "o&ernments ha&e 'asted a )ot of mone$ that co%)d ha&e ,een spent on
p%,)c ser&ces.
3. Cther sde Cn the other hand# p%ttn" a man on the moon 'as a h%"e
ache&ement that st)) nspres and nterests peop)e toda$. It sho'ed %s that 'e can
ache&e an$thn" 'e p%t o%r mnds to.
4. onc)%son The fact tha t man has 'a)* ed on the moon m "ht not ha &e had a
drect effect on o%r da)$ )&es# ,%t t 'as an nsprn" ache&ement.
The fo))o'n" %eston as*s for $o%r opnon. (o% can ether ha&e a stron" opnon or a
more ,a)anced opnon# ,%t ma*e t c)ear n $o%r ntrod%cton.
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/overnments should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people
because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support
him or herself.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Introd%cton
eop)e ha&e dfferent &e'smore a,o%t 'hether or not ,a)anced
"o&ernments sho%)d he)popnon
senor
ctGens. A)tho%"h I accept that 'e a)) ha&e a respons,)t$ to sa&e mone$ for retrement#
I dsa"ree 'th the dea that e)der)$ peop)e sho%)d rece&e no s%pport from the state.
(ote$
After the frst ntrod%cton# tr$ to 'rte 2 para"raphs that ,oth ep)an 'h$ $o% dsa"ree.
The second ntrod%cton a))o's $o% to dsc%ss ,oth sdes 'hch m"ht ,e easer.
Some IELTS 'rtn" tas* 2 %estons as* :?o the ad&anta"es o%t'e"h the
dsad&anta"es;: or :?o the ,enefts o%t'e"h the dra',ac*s;:
$ ad&ce for these %estons s to 'rte a para"raph a,o%t each sde# and ma*e t c)ear n
the ntrod%cton and conc)%son 'hch sde o%t'e"hs the other .e. $o%r opnon a,o%t
'hether there are more ad&anta"es or dsad&anta"es.
Ths 'as a recent eam %eston
1. Introd%ce the topc ,$ paraphrasn" the statement# then "&e a c)ear opnon a,o%t
'hether there are more ad&anta"es or dsad&anta"es.
2. Ad&anta"es e.". costs are )o' er n re"o na) areas= there s more spac e= pro&de
>o,s to ,oost depr&ed areas= a&od f%rther o&ercro'dn" n ctes.
transport
ther andpro&ders
c)ents# nfrastr%ct%re= companes
and other ,ased n re"ona) areas are f%rther from
contacts.
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21. IELTS Writing Task 2: di''icu$t !uestions
In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between e&uality
and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in
egalitarian societies. 0thers believe that high levels of personal achiev ement are
possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual
merits.
What is your view of the relationship between e&uality and personal success?
1. @a-e a strong o"inion e.". I comp)ete) $ a"ree that peop)e can ache&e more n
e"a)taran socetes. (o% can "nore the other &e'.
2. ocus on the $ast $ine o' the !uestion !hat s $o%r &e' of...;. Ths )ne s%ms
%p the 'ho)e %eston &er$ c)ear)$. @%st ans'er ths %eston.
3. se e(am"$es as the ,ass of $o%r ar"%ment e.". free %n&erst$ ed%caton ens%res
e%a)t$ of opport%nt$# and therefore a))o's nd&d%a)s to ache&e more.
If $o% tr$ 'rtn" an essa$ for ths %eston# $o% can compare $o%r essa$ 'th m$ ans'er
net !ednesda$. Im afrad I cant chec* essa$s or "&e scores.
<ote e"a)taran refers to the prncp)e that peop)e are e%a)# and deser&e e%a) r"hts
and opport%ntes.
"ip$
Cn)$ opnon#
$o%r t'o of the a,o&e
dont "&e%estons dont
t. +or the as*fo%r
other for %estons#
$o%r opnon.
$o%Ifsho%)d
the %eston doesnt
ma*e $o%r as* for
opnon
c)ear n the ntrod%cton and conc)%son.
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Answers$
<%m,ers 2 and 6 are dsc%sson %estons. ?sc%ss ,oth sdes of the ss%e# ,%t dont
"&e $o%r opnon a,o%t 'hch sde $o% a"ree 'th.
<%m,ers 1 and 5 are opnon %estons. &e $o%r opnon and s%pport t. (o% dont
need to menton the other sde of the ar"%ment.
<%m,ers 3 and 4 can ,e ca))ed dsc%sson B opnon %estons . ?sc%ss ,oth sdes and
ma*e $o%r opnon c)ear too.
Toda$ Im "on" to 'rte a para"raph a,o%t "%n contro). I)) start 'th some &oca,%)ar$
deas# then I)) ma*e them nto f%)) sentences.
3. more &o)ent crmes# crmna)s ')) %se "%ns# po)ce ')) need "%ns
/eres m$ para"raph %sn" the deas a,o&e. I&e d&ded the para"raph nto separate
sentences so that $o% can see 'hat I ha&e done more c)ear)$.
3. The$ a)so ar" %e that the n%m, er of &o)ent cr mes ncreases 'hen "%ns are
a&a)a,)e# and that po)ce are forced to %se "%ns to com,at armed crmna)s.
4. +%rthermore# s%cde rates ha&e ,een sho'n to rse n p)aces 'here "%ns are )e"a).
5. A)) n a))# "%n cont ro) ad&ocates ,e)e&e that "%ns crea te &o)ent socetes 'th
h"h m%rder rates.
Cf co%rse# n the IELTS eam $o% 'o%)d pro,a,)$ ha&e to ep)an the opposte &e' the
ar"%ments n fa&o%r of "%n o'nershp.
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Some people think that museums should be en1oyable places to entertain people, while
others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
'iscuss both views and give you own opinion.
Lets for"et a,o%t the 'ho)e %eston. @%st tr$ to )st some 'ords that are re)ated to the 3
man deas.
%se%ms
• eh,ton# eh,t &er,# )*e sho'# an eh,t no%n# tem# artfact# o,>ect#
co))ecton# hstor$# scence# art# c%)t%re# &stors# mem,ers of the p%,)c# p%,)c
&e'n"...
Entertan
Ed%cate
a*n" )sts of re)ated 'ords s a "ood 'a$ to "enerate deas. (o% m"ht not ha&e tme to
do ths n the eam# ,%t ts a %sef%) st%d$ techn%e.
25. IELTS Writing Task 2: idea3 e("$ain3 e(am"$e
(ote$
!hats the topc of the para"raph a,o&e; !hat do $o% thn* the %eston 'as;
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26. IELTS Writing Task 2: #and "aragra"h
e)o' s a ,and 9 para"raph a,o%t the ,enefts of Goos. I too* the &oca,%)ar$ deas from
ths )esson c)c* here and or"ansed them n the fo))o'n" 'a$
Hoos ha&e se&era) ,enefts. The man ,eneft s that Goos p)a$ an mportant ro)e n
')d)fe conser&aton. The$ he)p to protect endan"ered speces# s%ch as pandas or rhnos#
and a))o' scentsts to st%d$ anma) ,eha&o%r. Ano ther ad&anta"e of Goos s that the$
emp)o$ )ar"e n%m,ers of peop)e# therefore pro&dn" >o, opport%ntes and ncome for the
)oca) area. A)so# the mone$ that Goos ma*e can ,e %sed for conser&aton pro>ects. +rom a
persona) pont of &e'# Goos are nterestn"# ed%catona) and f%n. The$ are entertann"
for fam)es# and teach ch)dren to apprecate ')d)fe and nat%re.
!hen 'rtn" man ,od$ para" raphs for IELTS 'rtn" tas* 2# tr$ to am for f&e
sentences. +or eamp)e
3. Eamp)e
4. Second reason
5. Thrd reason
Another eamp)e
4. Eamp)e
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efore $o% start 'rtn" ts a "ood dea to ma*e some notes. Tr$ to or"anse $o%r notes
accordn" to ths 5sentence para"raph str%ct%re.
/eres a 5sentence para"raph %sn" the second p)an from )ast 'ee*s )esson
an$ peop)e ,e)e&e that sports professona)s earn too m%ch mone$. The$ ar"%e that
sport s a form of entertanment rather than a &ta) p%,)c ser&ce. !e co%)d eas)$ )&e
'tho%t sportspeop)e# $et other professona)s 'ho contr,%te m%ch more to socet$ are
%nder&a)%ed and %nderpad. +or eamp)e# foot,a)) p)a$ers can earn enormo%s sa)ares ,$
smp)$ *c*n" a ,a))# 'h)e doctors# n%rses and teachers earn a fracton of the mone$
despte ,en" essenta) for o%r hea)th and prospert$. +rom ths perspect&e# sports stars
do not deser&e the sa)ares the$ c%rrent)$ earn.
As $o% can see# the para"raph ep)ans the &e' that sportspeop)e earn too m%ch mone$.
Ths came from a dsc%ss ,oth &e's %eston.
efore $o% start 'rtn" $o%r tas* 2 essa$# $o% need a p)an
1. +rst# thn* a,o%t ho' $o% co%)d 'r te 2 man ,od$ para "raphs. !hat 'o% )d ,e
the man dea-topc of each one;
2. Then ma*e some notes for the f rst man para"raph. (o%r notes co%)d fo))o' ths
form%)a Idea# Ep)an# Eamp)e.
2eople nowadays work hard to buy more things. "his has made our lives generally
more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a
pity.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
1. I can see t'o c)e ar deas n ths %e ston 1 ,%$ n" thn"s has ma de o%r )&e s
more comforta,)e. 2 tradtona) &a)%es and c%stoms ha&e ,een )ost. I a"ree 'th
,oth of these ponts# so I)) 'rte one para"raph ep)ann" 'h$ I a"ree 'th the
frst pont# and another para"raph ep)ann" the second pont.
2. Idea ,%$n" thn"s has made )fe more comforta,)e. Ep)a n-Eamp)es 'e ,%$
app)ances )*e mcro'a&e o&ens and dsh'ashers= 'e %se comp%ters to shop
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shops dsappear and are rep)aced 'th on)ne shoppn"= peop)e are more
ndependent# ,%t )ac* a sense of comm%nt$.
/ere are m$ 2 man ,od$ para"raphs for )ast 'ee*s %eston. I tred to %se an :Idea#
Ep)an# Eamp)e: str%ct%re for the frst para"raph# and a :+rst)$# Second)$# +na))$:
str%ct%re for the second.
Cn the one hand# ha&n" a defned career path can certan)$ )ead to a satsf$n" 'or*n"
)fe. an$ peop)e decde as $o%n" ch)dren 'hat the$ 'ant to do as ad%)ts# and t "&es
them a "reat sense of satsfacton to 'or* to'ards ther "oa)s and "rad%a))$ ache&e them.
+or eamp)e# man$ ch)dren dream of ,ecomn" doctors# ,%t to rea)se ths am,ton the$
need to "an the re)e&ant %a)fcatons and %nderta*e $ears of trann". In m$ eperence#
&er$ fe' peop)e 'ho ha&e %a)fed as doctors choose to chan"e career ,eca%se the$ fnd
ther 'or* so re'ardn"# and ,eca%se the$ ha&e n&ested so m%ch tme and effort to reach
ther "oa).
Cn the other hand# peop)e fnd happness n ther 'or*n" )&es n dfferent 'a$s. +rst)$#
not e&er$one dreams of don" a partc%)ar >o,# and t can ,e e%a))$ re'ardn" to tr$ a
&aret$ of professons= startn" o%t on a comp)ete)$ ne' career path can ,e a
ren&"oratn" eperence. Second)$# some peop)e see ther >o,s as smp)$ a means of
earnn" mone$# and the$ are happ$ f ther sa)ar$ s h"h eno%"h to a))o' them to en>o$
)fe o%tsde 'or*. +na))$# >o, satsfacton s often the res%)t of 'or*n" condtons# rather
than the career tse)f. +or eamp)e# a post&e 'or*n" atmosphere# enth%sastc
co))ea"%es# and an nspratona) ,oss can ma*e 'or*n" )fe m%ch more satsf$n"#
re"ard)ess of the professon.
Se&era) peop)e ha&e as*ed me a,o%t conc)%sons for IELTS !rtn" Tas* 2. The man
,od$ para"raphs are m%ch more mportant# so dont 'orr$ too m%ch a,o%t the
conc)%son= ma*e t short# smp)e and fast.
/ere are some eamp)e conc)%son phrases for dfferent t$pes of %eston
1. ?"inion
+or the reasons mentoned a,o&e# I ,e)e&e that... B repeat $o%r opnon.
In conc)%son# I 'o%)d ar"%e that the ,enefts of... topc o%t'e"h the dra',ac*s.
In conc)%son# t s c)ear that there are &aro%s reasons for... topc# and steps need to ,e
ta*en to tac*)e ths pro,)em.
Toda$ Id )*e to sho' $o% a "ood essa$ ,$ one of m$ st%dents. Ths s the essa$
%eston
"raffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many ma1or cities. Suggest some
measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.
I "a&e the st%dents essa$ a ,and 7# man)$ ,eca%se t contans some rea))$ "ood topc
&oca,%)ar$. Cpen the f)e ,e)o' to see the f%)) essa$# "rammar correctons and m$
comments.
?o'n)oad Essa$
/opef%))$ $o% can see that the st%dent has fo))o'ed m$ ad&ce. /e foc%ses on ans'ern"
the %eston# there s a c)ear str%ct%re# and there s eno%"h ,and 7 &oca,%)ar$.
Toda$ I as*ed m$ st%dents a,o%t the &e"etaransm topc. The$ fo%nd t %te dffc%)t to
"&e ,oth sdes of the ar"%ment. Its mportant to ,e a,)e to dsc%ss ,oth sdes of an ss%e#
e&en f there are ponts that $o% dont a"ree 'th.
@ere is a summary o' the arguments in 'a-our o' a -egetarian diet3 according to the
s"eaker in yesterday+s -ideo:
• eef prod%cton %ses 100 tmes the amo%nt of 'ater that &e"eta,)e prod%cton
re%res.
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• A &e"etaran det s cheaper.
So# ,asca))$ he s sa$n" that a &e"etaran det s hea)ther# *nder to anma)s# ,etter for
the en&ronment and cheaper.
Dow you need to think a#out the o""osite argument. ee$ 'ree to discuss your ideas
in the comments area.
• r&ate hea)thcare s %nfar ,eca%se on)$ 'ea)th$ peop)e can afford t.
• The <atona) /ea)th Ser&ce n the F pro&des free hea)thcare for e&er$
resdent. %se ths as an eamp)e
(ote$
(o% can %se the ad&anta"es of state hea)thcare 'hen dsc%ssn" the dsad&anta"es of
pr&ate hea)thcare.
!hat pro,)ems do ch)dren face n toda$s 'or)d; !hat sho%)d 'e do to address or so)&e
these pro,)ems;
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/ere are some deas from m$ e,oo* to "et $o% thn*n" a,o%t ths topc
• +rends# te)e&son and the Internet ha&e ,ecome the man nf)%ences on ch)drenJs
,eha&o%r.
an $o% thn* of an$ more pro,)ems that ch)dren face# or s%""est other so)%tons; Is t
the respons,)t$ of parents# schoo)s or "o&ernments to tac*)e these pro,)ems;
@ere is a "aragra"h gi-ing some o' the economic #ene'its o' immigration:
sometmes )ac*
enco%ra"ed. *e$ 'or*ers
Imm"rants )*e'or*
'ho fnd doctors and n%rses#
contr,%te and mm"raton
to the econom$ s co%ntr$
of ther ne' therefore
'th the s*))s the$ ,rn" and the taes the$ pa$. At the same tme# man$ mm"rants send
mone$ to he)p fam)$ mem,ers n ther home co%ntr$# therefore he)pn" to ,oost that
econom$ too.
an you think o' any socia$ #ene'its o' immigration Are there any economic or
socia$ disad-antages
Sometmes# the ,est 'a$ to thn* of deas for an essa$ s to start 'th an eamp)e. Cne
"ood eamp)e can "&e $o% eno%"h deas for a f%)) para"raph.
Should governments make decisions about people+s lifestyle, or should people make
their own decisions?
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Ths %eston seems dffc%)t# ,%t f $o% ta*e :smo*n": as an eamp)e of a )fest$)e
choce# t ,ecomes a )ot easer. /eres m$ para"raph
In some cases# "o&ernments can he)p peop)e to ma*e ,etter )fest$)e choces. In the F#
for eamp)e# smo*n" s no' ,anned n a)) 'or*p)aces# and t s e&en proh,ted for
peop)e to smo*e n resta%rants# ,ars and p%,s. As a res%)t# man$ peop)e 'ho %sed to
smo*e soca))$ ha&e no' "&en %p. At the same tme# the "o&ernment has ens%red that
c"arette prces *eep "on" %p# and there ha&e ,een se&era) campa"ns to h"h)"ht the
hea)th rs*s of smo*n". These meas%res ha&e a)so he)ped to red%ce the n%m,er of
smo*ers n ths co%ntr$.
!o%)d $o% ,e a,)e to dsc%ss the ad&anta"es and dsad&anta"es of "enetc en"neern";
/ere are some deas from m$ e,oo*
*any people believe that parents are not as close to their children as they used to be.
Suggest some reasons why this could be true.
arents and ther ch)dren seem to ,e )ess c)ose no'ada$s. erhaps the man reason for
ths s that ,oth parents often 'or* f%))tme and therefore spend )ess tme 'th ther
ch)dren. !hereas 'omen tradtona))$ sta$ed at home to coo*# c)ean and )oo* after
ch)dren# man$ mothers no' choose to 'or* or are forced to do so. Ths means that
ch)dren ma$ ,e )eft a)one# or 'th nannes or ,a,$stters. %s$ parents ha&e )ess contact
'th ther ch)dren and )ess ener"$ to en>o$ fam)$ act&tes. an$ fam)es no )on"er eat
mea)s to"ether# and ch)d ren are "&en the freed om to "o o%t 'th frends# 'atch
te)e&son or chat on the Internet for ho%rs.
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2lease note$
A f%)) IELTS %eston 'o%)d a)so as* $o% to s%""est ho' fam)es co%)d ,ecome c)oser.
After $o% ntrod%cton see )ast 'ee*s )esson $o% need to 'rte 2 or 3 man ,od$
para"raphs. Ths s the most mportant part of $o%r essa$.
If $o% ha&e ,een fo))o'n" ths ,)o" for a 'h)e# or f $o% ha&e ,o%"ht m$ e,oo*# $o%
ma$ ha&e seen toda$s para"raph ,efore. /o'e&er# Im re%sn" t for 2 reasons
1. Its a "reat eamp)e of ho' to 'rte an :ad&an ta"es: para"raph %sn" a :frst)$#
second)$# fna))$: str%ct%re.
2. There are some ece))ent comments from st%dents ,e)o' ths )esson. If $o% read
them caref%))$# $o% ')) )earn a )ot.
There are se&era) ad&anta"es to %sn" comp%ters n ed%caton. +rst)$# st%dents )earn ne'
s*))s 'hch ')) ,e etreme)$ %sef%) for ther f%t%re >o,s. +or eamp)e# the$ )earn to
'rte reports or other doc%ments %sn" a 'ord processor# and the$ can practse don"
spo*en presentatons %sn" o'eront s)des. Second)$# techno)o"$ s a po'erf%) too) to
en"a"e st%dents. The %se of 'e,stes or on)ne &deos can ma*e )essons m%ch more
nterestn"# and man$ st%dents are more mot&ated to do home'or* or research %sn"
on)ne reso%rces. +na))$# f each st%dent has a comp%ter to 'or* on# the$ can st%d$ at
ther o'n pace.
s%a))$ I s%""est 'rtn" 4 para"raphs for tas* 2. /o'e&er# sometmes t m"ht ,e ,etter
to 'rte 5 para"raphs. The fo))o'n" essa$ %eston has three parts# so I&e 'rtten three
man ,od$ para"raphs 5 para"raphs n tota).
xplain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can
governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
/%mans are respons,)e for a &aret$ of en&ronmenta) pro,)ems# ,%t 'e can a)so ta*e
steps to red%ce the dama"e that 'e are ca%sn" to the p)anet. Ths essa$ ')) dsc%ss
en&ronmenta) pro,)ems and the meas%res that "o&ernment s and nd&d%a)s can ta*e to
address these pro,)ems.
T'o of the ,""est threats to the en&ronment are ar po))%ton and 'aste. as emssons
from factores and eha%st f%mes from &ehc)es )ead to ")o,a) 'armn"# 'hch ma$ ha&e
a de&astatn" effect on the p)anet n the f%t%re. As the h%man pop%)aton ncreases# 'e are
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a)so prod%cn" e&er "reater %anttes of 'aste# 'hch contamnates the earth and po))%tes
r&ers and oceans.
o&ernments co%)d certan)$ ma*e more effort to red%ce ar po))%ton. The$ co%)d
ntrod%ce )a's to )mt emssons from factores or to force companes to %se rene'a,)e
ener"$ from so)ar# 'nd or 'ater po'er. The$ co%)d a)so mpose K"reen taesJ on dr&ers
and ar)ne companes. In ths 'a$# peop)e 'o%)d ,e enco%ra"ed to %se p%,)c transport
and to ta*e fe'er f)"hts a,road# therefore red%cn" emssons.
Ind&d%a)s sho%)d a)so ta*e respons,)t$ for the mpact the$ ha&e on the en&ronment.
In conc)%son# ,oth natona) "o&ernments and nd&d%a)s m%st p)a$ ther part n )oo*n"
after the en&ronment.
(ote$
Ths essa$ s eact)$ 250 'ords )on". I&e tred to ma*e t as smp)e as poss,)e# ,%t ts
st)) "ood eno%"h to "et a ,and 9.
*ore and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign
country. 'o the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
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• The )an"%a"e ,arrer can ca%se dffc%)tes.
!hch of the 'ords or phrases a,o&e do $o% thn* 'o%)d ,e consdered ,and 7 or h"her;
42. 5and / 6oca#u$ary
!hen I sa$ :,and 7 &oca,%)ar$:# Im rea))$ ta)*n" a,o%t &oca,%)ar$ that co%)d he)p $o%
to "et a ,and 7 or higher. Eamners are )oo*n" for :)ess common: 'ords and phrases#
correct and re)e&ant co))ocatons# and ma$,e some domatc )an"%a"e.
I&e 'rtten the fo))o'n" para"raph %sn" some of the deas from the )esson ,e)o'. I&e
%nder)ned the ,and 7 or h"her &oca,%)ar$.
an$ st%de nts choose to st%d$ a,road ,eca%se there are "reater opport%ntes n a
partc%)ar fore"n co%ntr$. +ore"n %n&erstes ma$ offer ,etter fac)tes or co%rses. The$
ma$ a)so ,e more prest"o%s than %n&erstes n the st%dentJs o'n co%ntr$ and ha&e
teachers 'ho are eperts n ther fe)ds. There fore# ,$ st%d$n" a,road# st%dents can
epand ther *no')ed"e and "an %a)fcatons that open the door to ,etter >o,
opport%ntes. A perod of st%d$ a,road can a)so ,roaden st%dentsJ horGons. In the ne'
co%ntr$# the$ ')) ha&e to )&e and 'or* 'th other st%dents of &aro%s natona)tes. Th%s#
o&erseas st%dents are eposed to dfferent c%)t%res# c%stoms and ponts of &e'.
106 'ords
*any criminals re7offend after they have been punished. Why do some people
continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be
taken to tackle this problem?
• The man ca%ses of crme are po&ert$# %nemp)o$ment and )ac* of ed%caton.
• eop)e 'ho commt crmes often ha&e no other 'a$ of ma*n" a )&n".
•
It ma*es offenders %sef%) n ther )oca) comm%ntes.
• The$ m"ht ,e re%red to ta)* to schoo) "ro%ps or c)ean p%,)c areas.
• Cffenders a)so need he)p 'hen )oo*n" for accommodaton and 'or*.
Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in )oos, while others think that
)oos are both entertaining and ecologically important. 'iscuss both views.
/ere are some ,and 7 or h"her &oca,%)ar$ deas. I&e or"ansed the &oca,% )ar$
accordn" to dfferent perspect&es.
1. conser&aton.
En-ironmenta$ The$"ers"ect
he)p to i-e: Hoos
protect p)a$ anspeces.
endan"ered mportant ro)e scentsts
The$ a))o' n ')d)fe
to
st%d$ anma) ,eha&o%r.
2. Economic "ers"ecti-e: Hoos emp)o$ )ar"e n%m,ers of peop)e. The$ pro&de >o,
opport%ntes and ncome for the )oca) area. The mone$ rased can ,e %sed for
conser&aton pro>ects.
3. ;ersona$ "ers"ecti-e: Hoos are nterestn"# ed%catona) and f%n. The$ ma*e a
"reat da$ o%t for fam)es. h)dren )earn to apprecate ')d)fe and nat%re.
<e"at&es of Goos
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Thn*n" a,o%t topcs from dfferent perspect&es s a %sef%) techn%e. It he)ps $o% to
"enerate a &aret$ of nterestn" deas. I %sed ths techn%e 'hen thn*n" of deas for
m$ e,oo*# and I enco%ra"e m$ st%dents to %se t 'hen p)annn" ther essa$s.
45. IELTS Writing Task 2: education % "ractica$ ski$$s
Se&era) st%dents ha&e as*ed me to he)p them 'th ths IELTS %eston
Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car
maintenance or bank account management along with the academic sub1ects at school.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
4. onc$usion
epeat the dea that schoo)s are a)rea d$ don" a "ood >o, teachn" the trad tona)
academc s%,>ects. If the$ start to teach practca) s*))s# the st%d$ of mportant academc
s%,>ects ')) s%ffer.
It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no
boundaries to trade and communication. 'o the benefits of globalisation outweigh the
drawbacks?
(esterda$s &deo contaned some %sef%) deas# ,%t here are some more deas from m$
e,oo*
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ost&es of ")o,a)saton
(ote$
The Amercan En")sh spe))n" s ")o,a)Gaton. (o% can %se ether spe))n" n the IELTS
test.
47. IELTS Writing Task 2: ad-ertising to"ic
Ad&ertsn" s a &er$ common topc n ,oth the IELTS 'rtn" and spea*n" tests. /ere
are some deas from m$ e,oo* that $o% co%)d )earn.
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• h)dren can ,e eas)$ nf)%enced ,$ ad&ertsements.
?"inions:
•
C&era))# ad&ertsn" s necessar$ ,%t t needs to ,e contro))ed.
/ere are some deas. I&e or"ansed the &oca,%)ar$ accordn" to dfferent perspect&es
dfferent 'a$s of )oo*n" at ths ss%e.
ost&es of to%rsm
<e"at&es of to%rsm
3. u$tura$ "ers"ecti-e: Loca) tradtons ma$ ,e )ost. Tradtona) >o,s and s*))s de
o%t e.". farmn"# fshn". Loca) peop)e are forced to 'or* n the to%rst nd%str$.
Thn*n" a,o%t topcs from dfferent perspect&es can he)p $o% to "enerate ,etter deas.
Ths techn%e snt perfect for e&er$ topc# ,%t t can ,e rea))$ %sef%).
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49. IELTS Writing Task 2: what is ha""iness
an$ st%dents fnd the fo))o'n" %eston dffc%)t am,rd"e IELTS 4# pa"e 55
•
/appness means dfferent thn"s to dfferent peop)e.
• It can ,e descr,ed as a fee)n" of p)eas%re or en>o$ment.
• The$ need to fee) that the$ are don" somethn" %sef%) 'th ther )&es.
Tr$ epandn" on these dea to 'rte a f%)) essa$. emem,er to %se eamp)es from $o%r
eperence= ths s the ,est 'a$ to de&e)op an dea.
The spea*e r n $esterda$s &deo "a&e the post &es of En")sh as a ")o,a) second
)an"%a"e. /ere s a para"raph 'th ar"%ments a"anst ths &e'.
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Try to ana$yse this "aragra"h
Is there a topc sentence; !hat reasons and eamp)es are "&en; !hat )n*n"
epressons are %sed; !hat ,and 7 &oca,%)ar$ s %sed; an $o% fnd some condtona)
sentences;
!rte the man deas for the ")o,a) )an"%a"e topc post&es and ne"at&es n $o%r
note,oo*.
Some deas
Techno)o"$ co%)d ncrease the "ap ,et'een rch and poor. ch peop)e ha&e smartphones#
)aptops# 're)ess ,road,and Internet etc. eop)e n de&e)oped co%ntres can no' 'or*
from home or from an$'here n the 'or)d. The$ can do ther shoppn" on)ne and ha&e
thn"s de)&ered to ther homes. Techno)o"$ mpro&es ther %a)t$ of )fe.
Cn the other hand# man$ peop)e n poorer co%ntres# 'ho dd not ha&e norma) te)ephones#
no' ha&e mo,)e phones. A)so# the Internet s spreadn" to a)) parts of the 'or)d. In the
past# on)$ peop)e n de&e)oped co%ntres had access to 'or)dc)ass ),rares# ,%t no' the
Internet "&es e&er$one access to the same nformaton. Ths ')) )ead to "reater e%a)t$.
*ore and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can
be extremely difficult. xplain some of the difficulties of living in a city. %ow can
governments make urban life better for everyone?
/ere are some ,and 7 &oca,%)ar$ deas from m$ e,oo* for descr,n" ct$ pro,)ems
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• The cost of )&n" s h"her than n r%ra) areas.
•
tes )ac* a sense of comm%nt$.
an $o% s%""est an$ so)%tons to these pro,)ems; !atch $esterda$s &deo for some
deas.
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A )ot of IELTS !rtn" %estons as* $o% to "&e opnons a,o%t 'hat "o&ernments
sho%)d do n re)aton to an ss%e. o&ernments can ha&e an nf)%ence on a)most
e&er$thn" en&ronment# crme# te)e&son# ad&ertsn"# 'or* etc.
As part of $o%r IELTS preparaton# $o% sho%)d thn* a,o%t 'hat "o&ernments can do n
re)aton to IELTS topcs. /ere are some deas from m$ e,oo*
• The$ can s%pport peop)e 'ho are )&n" n po&ert$ or %na,)e to 'or*.
So# f the %eston as*s $o% to s%""est 'hat "o&ernments sho%)d do to red%ce o,est$#
$o% co%)d 'rte ths
:In m$ opnon# "o&ernments sho%)d spend mone$ on campa"ns to ed%cate peop)e a,o%t
the mportance of re"%)ar eercse and a hea)th$ det. erhaps the$ sho%)d a)so ntrod%ce
ne' )a's to ,an the ad&ertsn" of >%n* food to ch)dren.:
Thn* a,o%t some other IELTS topcs. !hat do $o% thn* "o&ernments sho%)d do;
Lfest$)e s a ma>or ca%se of poor hea)th n de&e)oped co%ntres. ost peop)e no' tra&e)
,$ car rather than 'a)*n"# and machnes no' perform man$ tradtona) man%a) >o,s. As
a res%)t# peop)e tend to 'or* n offces 'here )tt)e ph$sca) act&t$ s re%red. At home#
peop)e are a)so )ess act&e= most ad%)ts re)a ,$ 'atchn" te)e&son# 'h)e ch)dren p)a$
&deo "ames rather than don" o%tdoor sports. Te chno)o"$ has therefore made o%r )&es
more comforta,)e ,%t perhaps )ess hea)th$.
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56. IELTS Writing Task 2: go-ernment s"ending
As $esterda$s )stenn" eercse 'as a,o%t space pro"rammes# )ets )oo* at the fo))o'n"
'rtn" %eston
"he money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital
public services such as schools and hospitals. "o what extent do you agree or disagree?
1. +rst $o% need to decde 'hat $o%r opnon s. !)) $o% a"ree# dsa"ree# or tr$ to
present a ,a)anced opnon; !hch 'o%)d ,e easer;
2. Then $o% need to dec de ho' to or"a nse the essa $. /o' man$ par a"raphs '))
$o% 'rte# and 'hat ')) each para"raph ,e a,o%t;
3. +na))$# $o% need to p)an some deas "ood &oca,%)ar$ to s%pport $o%r opnon.
+ee) free to dsc%ss $o%r deas n the :comments: area ,e)o'. Im afrad I cant chec*
essa$s# ,%t I)) ,e happ$ to ma*e "enera) comments a,o%t $o%r deas.
Water is a natural resource that should always be free. /overnments should ban the
sale of bottled water.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
• Cther peop)e ,e)e&e that 'e sho%)d cons%me )ess ,ott)ed 'ater.
• o&ernments sho%)d ens%re that e&er$one has access to c)ean tap 'ater.
/ere
these are some
deas &oca,%)ar$
to 'rte deas for the topc of mone$ and cons%mersm. (o% co%)d %se
an essa$
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*any people say that we now live in +consumer societies+ where money and
possessions are given too much importance. 0thers believe that consumer culture has
played a vital role in improving our lives.
'iscuss both views and give your opinion.
enera$ ideas:
a cons%mer socet$# matera)stc# earn mone$# ma*e mone$# ma*e a proft# s%ccess#
matera) possessons# connect 'ea)th 'th happness# stat%s s$m,o)s# the po'er of
ad&ertsn".
emp)o$ment# ncome# sa)ares# prod%cts that 'e need# red%ce po&ert$# ,etter standard of
)&n"# %a)t$ of )fe# creat&t$ and nno&aton# trade ,et'een co%ntres.
Degati-es:
create 'aste# %se nat%ra) reso%rces # dama"e to the en&ronment# thro'a'a$ c%)t%re#
peop)e ,ecome "reed$# se)fsh# mone$ does not ma*e %s happ$# )oss of tradtona) &a)%es.
&o#e !eo!le believe that there should be ixed !unish#ents or each ty!e o cri#e.
'thers, however, argue that the circu#stances o an individual cri#e, and the #otivation
or co##itting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the !unish#ent.
(iscuss both these views and give your own o!inion.
/ere s m$ s%""ested essa$ o%t)ne
eop)e ha&e dfferent &e's a,o%t 'hether p%nshments for crmes sho%)d ,e fed.
A)tho%"h there are some ad&anta"es of fed p%nshments# I ,e)e&e that t s ,etter to
>%d"e each crme nd&d%a))$.
There are some "ood ar"%ments for ha&n" one set p%nshment for each crme.
I?EAS eas$# far >%stce s$stem= e&er$one s a'are of the p%nshment for each crme=
fed p%nshments co%)d deter crmna)s.
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/o'e&er# I 'o%)d ar"%e that the crc%mstances of a crme and the crmna)Js mot&aton
sho%)d ha&e an nf)%ence on the p%nshment.
I?EAS >%d"e can decde the ,est response= a more h%mane s$stem= eamp)e stea)n" to
feed a fam)$ compared to stea)n" for proft.
0nline shopping is increasing dramatically. %ow could this trend affect our
environment and the kinds of 1obs re&uired?
A fe' peop)e ha&e as*ed me ho' to %se the e,oo*. Cne 'a$ s to practse 'rtn"
para"raphs %sn" the e,oo* deas.
Some ideas 'rom the e#ook a#out the #ene'its o' mo#i$e "hones:
•
The mo,)e phone s the most pop%)ar "ad"et n toda$Js 'or)d.
• !e can sta$ n to%ch 'th fam)$# frends and co))ea"%es 'here&er 'e are.
• sers can send tet messa"es# s%rf the Internet# ta*e photos and )sten to m%sc.
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• o,)es ha&e a)so ,ecome fashon accessores.
5y $inking these ideas &and adding a 'ew things) I can write a "aragra"h:
The mo,)e phone has ,ecome the most pop%)ar "ad"et n toda$Js 'or)d. The reason for
ths s that t s porta,)e and &ersat)e. o,)e phones are no' carred at a)) tmes ,$ most
peop)e# a))o'n" %s to sta$ n to%ch 'th fam)$# frends and co))ea"%es 'here&er 'e are.
+%rthermore# the$ no' ha&e man$ more f%nctons than a standard te)ephone= mo,)e
phone %sers can send tet messa"es# s%rf the Internet# ta*e photos and )sten to m%sc# as
'e)) as ma*n" ca))s. o,)es ha&e ,ecome fashon accessores# and the$ ha&e
re&o)%tonsed the 'a$ 'e comm%ncate.
*arriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the
case? Is it a positive or negative development?
+ee) free to ans'er these %estons n the comments area. I)) "&e $o% m$ ans'ers
tomorro'# and I)) tr$ to 'rte a f%)) essa$ for net 'ee*.
(ote$
)ease dont send me f%)) essa$s. I cant chec* them or "&e $o% a score.
'espite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road
accidents. xplain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures
that could be taken to address the problem.
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auses:
So$utions:
• The %se of phones 'h)e dr&n" has ,een ,anned n man$ co%ntres.
•
Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability, but
others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together. 'iscuss both
views and give your opinion.
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Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while
others argue that robots might have negative effects on society.
'iscuss both views and give your opinion.
Toda$ m$ st%dents p)anned an essa$ for ths topc. The photo ,e)o' sho's the deas the$
had n the )esson
Women should have an e&ual role alongside men in both police and armed forces. "o
what extent do you agree or disagree?
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1. Introduction: to"ic C res"onse
Introd%ce the topc e.". :Increasn" n%m,ers of 'omen are choosn" to...:
espond to the %eston e.". :I comp)ete)$ a"ree that 'omen sho%)d ,e a,)e...:
A)so# I 'o%)d
st%aton ar"%e that po)ce'omen#
,$ comm%ncatn" for eamp)e#
more effect&e)$. ma$m)tar$
o)ce and ,e ,etter'or*
at contro))n" a
re%res more
than >%st ph$sca) stren"th. Team'or*# )eadershp and comm%ncaton can ,e m%ch more
mportant.
Toda$# Id )*e to share a ,and 9 samp)e essa$ for the %eston ,e)o'.
Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small
numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on
saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.
'iscuss both these views and give your opinion.
It s tr%e that some mnort$ )an"%a"es ma$ dsappear n the near f%t%re. A)tho%"h t can
,e ar"%ed that "o&ernments co%)d sa&e mone$ ,$ a))o'n" ths to happen# I ,e)e&e that
these )an"%a"es sho%)d ,e protected and preser&ed.
There are se&era) reasons 'h$ sa&n" mnort$ )an"%a"es co%)d ,e seen as a 'aste of
mone$. +rst)$# f a )an"%a"e s on)$ spo*en ,$ a sma)) n%m,er of peop)e# epens&e
ed%caton pro"rammes ')) ,e needed to ma*e s%re that more peop)e )earn t# and the
state ')) ha&e to pa$ for fac)tes# teachers and mar*etn". Ths mone$ m"ht ,e ,etter
spent on other p%,)c ser&ces. Second)$# t 'o%)d ,e m%ch cheaper and more effcent for
co%ntres to ha&e >%st one )an"%a"e. o&ernments co%)d c%t a)) *nds of costs re)ated to
comm%ncatn" 'th each mnort$ "ro%p.
?espte the a,o&e ar"%ments# I ,e)e&e that "o&ernments sho%)d tr$ to preser&e )an"%a"es
that are )ess 'de)$ spo*en. A )an"%a"e s m%ch more than smp)$ a means of
comm%ncaton= t has a &ta) connecton 'th the c%)t%ra) dentt$ of the peop)e 'ho
spea* t. If a )an"%a"e dsappears# a 'ho)e 'a$ of )fe ')) dsappear 'th t# and 'e '))
)ose the rch c%)t%ra) d&erst$ that ma*es socetes more nterestn". $ spendn" mone$
to protect mnort$ )an"%a"es# "o&ernments can a)so preser&e tradtons# c%stoms and
,eha&o%rs that are part of a co%ntr$Js hstor$.
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In conc)%son# t ma$ sa&e mone$ n the short term f 'e a))o' mnort$ )an"%a"es to
dsappear# ,%t n the )on" term ths 'o%)d ha&e an etreme)$ ne"at&e mpact on o%r
c%)t%ra) herta"e.
258 'ords
The fo))o'n" %eston 'as %sed n se&era) co%ntres )ast Sat%rda$. I&e )sted some deas
,e)o'.
Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each
other, while others think that people are now more independent.
'iscuss both views and give your own opinion.
• Lfe s more dffc%)t and epens&e# and 'e are )ess se)fs%ffcent
• (o%n" peop)e re)$ on ther parents for )on"er
• C%r >o,s are m%ch more speca)sed# and 'e need to 'or* n teams
$ )n*n" these ponts to"ether and s%pportn" them 'th eamp)es# $o% co%)d eas)$
'rte t'o "ood para"raphs.
As most people spend a ma1or part of their adult life at work, 1ob satisfaction is an
important element of individual well7being.
What factors contribute to 1ob satisfaction?
%ow realistic is the expectation of 1ob satisfaction for all workers?
The fo))o'n" para"raph ans'ers the second part of the %eston /o' rea)stc..
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It s dffc%)t to ma"ne a 'or)d n 'hch e&er$one s tr%)$ satsfed 'th ther >o,. ost
peop)e 'or* n order to earn a sa)ar$# and the$ 'o%)d pro,a,)$ not choose to spend e"ht
or more ho%rs each da$ don" ther >o,s f the$ dd not need the mone$. The need to earn
mone$ to pa$ mort"a"es# ,))s and e&er$da$ )&n" costs s of m%ch "reater concern than
>o, satsfacton. In fact# I 'o%)d ar"%e that the ma>ort$ of peop)e ds)*e ther >o,s and
are %nhapp$ a,o%t ther sa)ares# 'or*n" ho%rs# 'or*)oads# or ther ,osses.
95 'ords
(ote$
!hat :,and 7 &oca,%)ar$: can $o% fnd n the para"raph a,o&e;
70. IELTS Writing Task 2: sam"$e discussion essay
/eres an eamp)e of ho' I 'rte a 4para"raph essa$ for :dsc%ss and "&e $o%r opnon:
%estons. <otce that I "&e m$ opnon n 3 p)aces ntrod%cton# para"raph 3#
conc)%son.
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a
successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a 1ob straight after school.
'iscuss both views and give your opinion.
!hen the$ fnsh schoo)# teena"ers face the d)emma of 'hether to "et a >o, or contn%e
ther ed%caton. !h)e there are some ,enefts to "ettn" a >o, stra"ht after schoo)# I
'o%)d ar"%e that t s ,etter to "o to co))e"e or %n&erst$.
The opton to start 'or* stra"ht after schoo) s attract&e for se&era) reasons. an$
$o%n" peop)e 'ant to start earnn" mone$ as soon as poss,)e. In ths 'a$# the$ can
,ecome ndependent# and the$ ')) ,e a,)e to afford ther o'n ho%se or start a fam)$. In
terms of ther career# $o%n" peop)e 'ho decde to fnd 'or*# rather than contn%e ther
st%des# ma$ pro"ress more %c*)$. The$ ')) ha&e the chance to "an rea) eperence
and )earn practca) s*))s re)ated to ther chosen professon. Ths ma$ )ead to promotons
and a s%ccessf%) career.
Cn the other hand# I ,e)e&e that t s more ,enefca) for st%dents to contn%e ther
st%des. +rst)$# academc %a)fcatons are re%red n man$ professons. +or eamp)e# t
s mposs,)e to ,ecome a doctor# teacher or )a'$er 'tho%t ha&n" the re)e&ant de"ree.
As a res%)t# %n&erst$ "rad%ates ha&e access to more and ,etter >o, opport%ntes# and
the$ tend to earn h"her sa)ares than those 'th fe'er %a)fcatons. Second)$# the >o,
mar*et s ,ecomn" ncreasn")$ compett&e# and sometmes there are h%ndreds of
app)cants for one poston n a compan$. (o%n" peop)e 'ho do not ha&e %a)fcatons
from a %n&erst$ or co))e"e ')) not ,e a,)e to compete.
+or the reasons mentoned a,o&e# t seems to me that st%dents are more )*e)$ to ,e
s%ccessf%) n ther careers f the$ contn%e ther st%des ,e$ond schoo) )e&e).
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271 'ords# ,and 9
Some people think that museums should be en1oyable places to entertain people, while
others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
'iscuss both views and give you own opinion.
eop)e ha&e dfferent &e's a,o%t the ro)e and f%ncton of m%se%ms. In m$ opnon#
m%se%ms can and sho%)d ,e ,oth entertann" and ed%catona).
Cn the one hand# t can ,e ar"%ed that the man ro)e of a m%se%m s to entertan.
%se%ms are to%rst attractons# and ther am s to eh,t a co))ecton of nterestn"
o,>ects that man$ peop)e ')) 'ant to see. The a&era"e &stor ma$ ,ecome ,ored f he or
she has to read or )sten to too m%ch ed%catona) content# so m%se%ms often p%t more of
an emphass on en>o$ment rather than )earnn". Ths t$pe of m%se%m s des"ned to ,e
&s%a))$ spectac%)ar# and ma$ ha&e nteract&e act&tes or e&en "ames as part of ts
eh,tons.
Cn the other hand# some peop)e ar"%e that m%se%ms sho%)d foc%s on ed%caton. The am
of an$ eh,ton sho%)d ,e to teach &stors somethn" that the$ dd not pre&o%s)$ *no'.
s%a))$ ths means that the hstor$ ,ehnd the m%se%mJs eh,ts needs to ,e ep)aned#
and ths can ,e done n &aro%s 'a$s. Some m%se%ms emp)o$ professona) "%des to ta)*
to ther &stors# 'h)e other m%se%ms offer headsets so that &stors can )sten to deta)ed
commentar$ a,o%t the eh,ton. In ths 'a$# m%se%ms can p)a$ an mportant ro)e n
teachn" peop)e a,o%t hstor$# c%)t%re# scence and man$ other aspects of )fe.
As I&e sad ,efore# $o% cant "et a h"h score for IELTS 'rtn" tas* 2 f $o% dont ha&e
"ood deas a,o%t the %eston topc. /ere are some deas from m$ e,oo* a,o%t the
fo))o'n" %eston
Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high,
while others argue that sports salaries are fair.
'iscuss both views and give your opinion.
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• Sports professona)s earn too m%ch mone$.
• The$ do not pro&de a &ta) ser&ce.
•
It s far that the ,est sportspeop)e earn a )ot of mone$.
• Sport s a m%)tm))onpo%nd nd%str$.
"he money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich
countries should give other types of help instead.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
1. Introd%cton ntrod%ce the topc of he)pn" poor co%ntres# and a"ree that "&n"
mone$ s not the ,est 'a$ to he)p.
2. ara"raph ep)ann" 'h$ "&n" mone$ s a ,ad dea.
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74. IELTS Writing Task 2: +gender and uni-ersity+ to"ic
A fe' peop)e ha&e as*ed me a,o%t ths %eston from am,rd"e IELTS 5
8niversities should accept e&ual numbers of male and female students in every sub1ect.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
I dd a )esson a,o%t ths %eston 'th m$ st%dents. /ere are o%r deas
3. ara"raph 3 Ano ther reas on 'e dsa"reed s tha t t 'o%) d not ,e far to ,ase
admsson to co%rses on "ender. n&erstes sho%)d se)ect canddates ,ased on
ther %a)fcatons# s*))s# eperence etc.
4. onc)%son epeat the dea that se)ectn" accordn" to "ender s not the ,est 'a$
to ens%re e%a) opport%ntes for men and 'omen at %n&erst$.
I)) p%t a f%)) eamp)e essa$ on the ste net 'ee*. (o% are 'e)come to share $o%r o'n
deas# ,%t Im afrad I cant "&e feed,ac*# scores or correctons.
8niversities should accept e&ual numbers of male and female students in every sub1ect.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
In m$ opnon# men and 'omen sho%)d ha&e the same ed%catona) opport%ntes.
/o'e&er# I do not a"ree 'th the dea of acceptn" e%a) proportons of each "ender n
e&er$ %n&erst$ s%,>ect.
/a&n" the same n%m,er of men and 'omen on a)) de"ree co%rses s smp)$ %nrea)stc.
St%dent n%m,ers on an$ co%rse depend on the app)catons that the nstt%ton rece&es. If
a %n&erst$ decded to f)) co%rses 'th e%a) n%m,ers of ma)es and fema)es# t 'o%)d
need eno%"h app)cants of each "ender. In rea)t$# man$ co%rses are more pop%)ar 'th
one "ender than the other# and t 'o%)d not ,e practca) to am for e%a) proportons. +or
eamp)e# n%rsn" co%rses tend to attract more fema)e app)cants# and t 'o%)d ,e dffc%)t
to f)) these co%rses f fft$ per cent of the p)aces needed to "o to ma)es.
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Apart from the practca) concerns epressed a,o&e# I a)so ,e)e&e that t 'o%)d ,e %nfar
to ,ase admsson to %n&erst$ co%rses on "ender. n&erstes sho%)d contn%e to se)ect
the ,est canddates for each co%rse accordn" to ther %a)fcatons. In ths 'a$# ,oth
men and 'omen ha&e the same opport%ntes# and app)cants *no' that the$ ')) ,e
s%ccessf%) f the$ 'or* hard to ache&e "ood "rades at schoo). If a fema)e st%dent s the
,est canddate for a p)ace on a co%rse# t 'o%)d ,e 'ron" to re>ect her n fa&o%r of a ma)e
st%dent 'th )o'er "rades or fe'er %a)fcatons.
In conc)%son# the se)ecton of %n&erst$ st%dents sho%)d ,e ,ased on mert# and t 'o%)d
,e ,oth mpractca) and %nfar to chan"e to a se)ecton proced%re ,ased on "ender.
arly technological developments helped ordinary people and changed their lives more
than recent developments.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
1. Introd%cton 'e dsa"ree ,eca%se 'e thn* that ear) $ and recent techno)o"es
ha&e had an e&ually s"nfcant mpact on o%r )&es.
2. ara"raph a,o%t ho' ear)$ techno)o"es he)ped peop)e.
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77.
IELTS Writing Task 2: the +2 "art+ !uestion
The fo))o'n" %eston conf%ses man$ st%dents ,eca%se t doesnt seem to ,e one of the 3
norma) t$pes opnon# dsc%sson# pro,)em-so)%ton.
I ca)) ths a :2 part: %eston# and ts easer than $o% thn*. @%st ans'er the frst %eston
n para"raph 2# and the second %eston n para"raph 3
Some deas
st%aton can Ep)an
ma*e onethat happness
person happ$means dfferent
,%t another thn"s
person to dfferent
sad-,ored peop)e=
etc. &e the same
eamp)es of
'hat ma*es dfferent peop)e happ$ mone$# s%ccess# fam)$# frends# ho,,es. &e an
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eamp)e from $o%r eperence e.". a ho,,$ that ma*es $o% happ$ ,%t that $o%r frend
hates.
Some deas Tr$ to or"anse $o%r deas )o"ca))$ $o% co%)d ,e"n 'th h%mans ,asc
needs n order to ,e happ$ 'e need to ,e hea)th$ and ha&e some'here to )&e# food to
eat etc. then ta)* a,o%t the mportance of fam)$ and frends. (o% co%)d then 'rte a,o%t
career# mone$# s%ccess# stat%s etc. ma$,e $o% co%)d ep)an that these thn"s mean
nothn" f 'e do not ha&e fam)$ and frends to share o%r eperences 'th. &e an
eamp)e from $o%r o'n )fe 'hat ')) ma*e $o% happer than $o% are no';
4. onc$usion F re"eat%summarise the main ideas
Ths 'as the IELTS 'rtn" tas* 2 %eston t'o 'ee*s a"o n the F
It is right that university graduates should earn more money than less well educated
people, but they should pay the full cost of their education.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
1 Introd%cton ntrod%ce the topc and respond to ,oth parts of the %eston. !e decded
to a"ree that "rad%ates deser&e "ood sa)ares# ,%t 'e dsa"ree 'th the dea that the$
sho%)d pa$ the f%)) cost of ther de"ree co%rses.
2 ara"raph ep)ann " 'h$ "rad%ates sho%)d earn "ood sa)ares the$ ha&e n&ested
tme and effort nto "ann" ther %a)fcatons= the$ ha&e *no')ed"e# s*))s and trann"
re%red for mportant >o,s= the$ are an asset to socet$.
3 ara"raph ep)ann" 'h$ "rad%ates sho%)d not ha&e to pa$ the f%)) cost of ed%caton
ths ')) ,e too epens&e and ')) deter man$ $o%n" peop)e from "on" to %n&erst$=
st%dents ')) ha&e h%"e de,ts= "rad%ates contr,%te ,$ pa$n" taes 'hen the$ 'or*.
'ifferences between countries become less evident each year. (owadays, all over the
world people share the same fashio ns, advertising, brands, eating habits and "9
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channels.
'o the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?
Introduction
It s tr%e that man$ aspects of c%)t%re are ,ecomn" ncreasn")$ sm)ar thro%"ho%t the
'or)d. A)tho%"h ths trend has some ,enefts# I 'o%)d ar"%e that there are more
dra',ac*s.
onc$usion
In conc)%son# t seems to me that the dra',ac*s of ")o,a)saton# n terms of c%)t%ra)
ha,ts s%ch as the c)othes 'e 'ear or the foods 'e eat# do o%t'e"h the ,enefts.
Ad&ertsn" has ,een the topc of IELTS 'rtn" tas* 2 se&era) tmes ths $ear. Its a
pop%)ar topc# so $o% need some deas and opnons a,o%t t.
• o&ernments sho%)d on)$ PPPPPP fa)se nformaton or prod%cts that are harmf%).
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Ad&ertsn" s the name of the nd%str$# act&t$ or professon )*e mar*etn". An
ad&ertsement or ad&ertsements s 'hat $o% see on TO# n the street# n ne'spapers
etc.
I&e notced that the more essa$ prac tce I do 'th m$ st%dents# the more defined m$
'rtn" method ,ecomes.
+or eamp)e# I no' *no' that m$ 250'ord essa$s %s%a))$ contan 13 to 15 sentences 2
for the ntrod%cton# 5 to 6 for each man para"raph and 1 sentence for the conc)%son. It
ta*es me 10 mn%tes to 'rte a "ood p)an# 5 mn%tes to 'rte an ntrod%cton# I ha&e 2
man 'a$s of 'rtn" man para"raphs etc. etc.
The %eston s ?o $o% ha&e a c)ear)$ defned method; ?o $o% repeated)$ practse
'rtn" essa$s n the same 'a$;
6ehaviour in schools is getting worse. xplain the causes and effects of this problem,
and suggest some possible solutions.
;ossi#$e so$utions:
A "ood 'a$ to practse $o%r 'rtn" s to tr$ ma*n" f%)) sentences 'th these deas e.".
'ne reason or bad behaviour is the lack o disci!line in #any schools .
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S. If $o% ha&e m$ e,oo*# $o%)) fnd ths topc n the ed%caton chapter.
/opef%))$ $esterda$s &deo "a&e $o% some "ood &oca,%)ar$ deas for the fo))o'n"
%eston.
;hildhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. xplain the m ain
causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
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84. IELTS Writing Task 2: higher education
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a
successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a 1ob straight after school.
'iscuss both views and give your opinion.
/eres m$ f%)) ntrod%cton and conc)%son# as 'e)) as some deas for the man ,od$
para"raphs
Introduction
!hen the$ fnsh schoo)# teena"ers face the d)emma of 'hether to "et a >o, or contn%e
ther ed%caton. !h)e there are some ,enefts to "ettn" a >o, stra"ht after schoo)# I
'o%)d ar"%e that t s ,etter to "o to co))e"e or %n&erst$.
onc$usion
+or the reasons mentoned a,o&e# t seems to me that st%dents are more )*e)$ to ,e
s%ccessf%) n ther )&es f the$ contn%e ther st%des ,e$ond schoo) )e&e).
In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between e&uality
and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in
egalitarian societies. 0thers believe that high levels of personal achiev ement are
possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual
merits.
What is your view of the relationship between e&uality and personal success?
In m$ opnon# an e"a)taran socet$ s one n 'hch e&er$one has the same r"hts and the
same opport%ntes. I comp)ete)$ a"ree that peop)e can ache&e more n ths *nd of
socet$.
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Ed%caton s an mportant factor 'th re"ard to persona) s%ccess n )fe. I ,e)e&e that a))
ch)dren sho%)d ha&e access to free schoo)n"# and h"her ed%caton sho%)d ,e ether free
or afforda,)e for a)) those 'ho chose to p%rs%e a %n&erst$ de"ree. In a socet$ 'tho%t
free schoo)n" or afforda,)e h"her ed%caton# on)$ ch)dren and $o%n" ad%)ts from
'ea)ther fam)es 'o%)d ha&e access to the ,est )earnn" opport%ntes# and the$ 'o%)d
therefore ,e ,etter prepared for the >o, mar*et. Ths *nd of ne%a)t$ 'o%)d ens%re the
s%ccess of some ,%t harm the prospects of others.
I 'o%)d ar"%e that e%a) r"hts and opport%ntes are not n conf)ct 'th peop)eJs freedom
to s%cceed or fa). In other 'ords# e%a)t$ does not mean that peop)e )ose ther
mot&aton
most peop)eto'o%)d
s%cceed#
fee)ormore
that mot&ated
the$ are not
toa))o'ed to fa).
'or* hard and Cn thether
reach contrar$# I ,e)e&e
potenta) that
f the$
tho%"ht that the$ )&ed n a far socet$. Those 'ho dd not ma*e the same effort 'o%)d
*no' that the$ had 'asted ther opport%nt$. Ine%a)t$# on the other hand# 'o%)d ,e
more )*e)$ to demot&ate peop)e ,eca%se the$ 'o%)d *no' that the odds of s%ccess 'ere
stac*ed n fa&o%r of those from pr&)e"ed ,ac*"ro%nds.
260 'ords
(ote$
Im not s%re that ths 'as a rea) IELTS %eston ma$,e the st%dent 'ho sent t to me
remem,ered t 'ron")$ ,eca%se t s a ,t conf%sn" t seems stran"e to me to mp)$ that
:e"a)taran-e%a)t$: s the opposte of :free to s%cceed or fa):. An$'a$# I hope $o% st))
We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned
with our own communities and countries.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
1. Introd%cton I dont thn* th ere s a :mdd)e: opnon for ths %eston. (o% ether
a"ree that 'e sho%)d only ,e 'orred a,o%t o%r o'n comm%ntes and co%ntres#
or $o% thn* that 'e sho%)d also he)p those o%tsde o%r o'n co%ntres. The ,est
response m"ht ,e to disagree then $o% can sa$ that 'e sho%)d tr$ to he)p
e&er$one.
2. ara"raph 2 I a"ree that t s mportant to he) p o%r ne "h,o%rs and fe))o'
ctGens. Ep)an ths dea
3. ara"raph 3 At the same tme# I ,e)e&e that 'e ha&e an o,)"aton to he)p those
'ho )&e ,e$ond o%r natona) ,orders. Ep)an
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4. onc)%son epeat the dea that 'e can he)p peop)e ,oth at home and a,road.
Last 'ee* I 'rote a p)an for the %eston ,e)o'. <o' $o% can read m$ f%)) essa$.
We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned
with our own communities and countries.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some peop)e
pro,)ems ,e)e&e
n o%r o'n that 'e sho%)d
socet$. not he)p
I dsa"ree 'thpeop)e n other
ths &e' co%ntres
,eca%se as )on"
I ,e)e&e thatas'e
there are
sho%)d
tr$ to he)p as man$ peop)e as poss,)e.
Cn the one hand# I accept that t s mportant to he)p o%r ne"h,o%rs and fe))o' ctGens.
In most comm%ntes there are peop)e 'ho are mpo&ershed or dsad&anta"ed n some
'a$. It s poss,)e to fnd home)ess peop)e# for eamp)e# n e&en the 'ea)thest of ctes#
and for those 'ho are concerned a,o%t ths pro,)em# there are %s%a))$ opport%ntes to
&o)%nteer tme or "&e mone$ to s%pport these peop)e. In the F# peop)e can he)p n a
&aret$ of 'a$s# from donatn" c)othn" to ser&n" free food n a so%p *tchen. As the
pro,)ems are on o%r doorstep# and there are o,&o%s 'a$s to he)p# I can %nderstand 'h$
some peop)e fee) that 'e sho%)d prortse )oca) chart$.
At the same tme# I ,e)e&e that 'e ha&e an o,)"aton to he)p those 'ho )&e ,e$ond o%r
natona) ,orders. In some co%ntres the pro,)ems that peop)e face are m%ch more sero%s
than those n o%r o'n comm%ntes# and t s often e&en easer to he)p. +or eamp)e# 'hen
In conc)%son# t s tr%e that 'e cannot he)p e&er$one# ,%t n m$ opnon natona)
,o%ndares sho%)d not stop %s from he)pn" those 'ho are n need.
If the %eston as*s $o% to ep)an a pro,)em re)ated to the en&ronment# $o% co%)d 'rte
a,o%t ")o,a) 'armn".
erhaps the most sero%s pro,)em facn" the en&ronment s ")o,a) 'armn". ases s%ch
as car,on dode trap heat from the s%n 'thn the earthJs atmosphere# and ths ca%ses
")o,a) temperat%res to rse. Ths process s *no'n as the "reenho%se effect# and h%man
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act&t$ s a ma>or factor n the rse of the "reenho%se "ases 'hch ca%se t. +or eamp)e#
factores and &ehc)es prod%ce emssons and eha%st f%mes. As man$ de&e)opn"
co%ntres are ,ecomn" nd%stra)sed# emssons from factores are epected to ncrease.
+%rthermore# the n%m,er of cars on o%r streets s "ro'n" a)) the tme# and cheap ar
tra&e) s ma*n" f)$n" access,)e to more and more peop)e. onse%ent)$# the amo%nt of
"reenho%se "ases re)eased nto the atmosphere sho's no s"ns of decreasn".
(o% can )earn a )ot from ths para"raph f $o% ana)$se t
2. /o' man$ sentences are there; !hat doe s each sentence do; e.". The frst
3. sentence ntrod%ces
an $o% fnd the topc
some :,and 7 &oca,%)ar$:;
4. Loo* at ho' the deas are )n*ed. an $o% see that the 'ord :ths: s an mportant
)n*n" 'ord;
There are se&era) ,enefts to ,%)dn" more n%c)ear po'er statons. +rst)$# n%c)ear po'er
s a re)at&e)$ s%stana,)e ener"$ so%rce# meann" that t can ,e %sed to prod%ce
e)ectrct$ 'tho%t 'astn" )mted nat%ra) reso%rces )*e coa)# o) or "as. Second)$#
n%c)ear po'er statons are c)eaner than foss) f%e) po'er statons# and co%)d he)p to
red%ce car,on emssons that ca%se ")o,a) 'armn". !th mpro&ements n n%c)ear
techno)o"$# n%c)ear
consdern" the rs*spo'er
of accdents are ,en"
as a so)%ton red%ced.
to h"h As"as
o) and a res%)t#
prces#man$ co%ntres
ncreasn" are no'
demand for
e)ectrct$# and 'orres a,o%t po))%ton and c)mate chan"e.
• /o' man$ sentences are there# and 'hat does each sentence do;
• <ote the man deas and co))ocatons e.". s%stana,)e ener"$ so%rce.
As an eeamner# m$ ad&ce s that $o% shou$d %se phrases )*e :I ,e)e&e: or :n m$
opnon: 'hen the %eston as*s for your o"inion e." To 'hat etent do you a"ree or
dsa"ree;
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Some teachers te)) st%dents not to %se :I: n academc essa$s# ,%t ths ad&ce s rea))$ for
%n&erst$ academc 'rtn"# not IELTS.
Toda$ Im attachn" the f%)) essa$ c)c* here that 'e&e ,een 'or*n" on for the )ast 2
'ee*s. /ere are some ponts to notce
• There s a c)ear 4para"raph str%ct%re# and the essa$ s eas$ to read ,eca%se the
deas are de&e)oped n a )o"ca) 'a$.
•
The ntrod%cton s short# ,%t t co&ers e&er$thn" that the %eston as*s $o%
a,o%t.
• The man para"raphs ma*e %p aro%nd 70Q of the essa$. These para"raphs are the
*e$ to a h"h score.
• The conc)%son s &er$ short# and smp)$ s%mmarses 'hat I had a)read$ 'rtten.
<e&er p%t an$ ne' deas n the conc)%son.
• I foc%s on epressn" m$ deas 'e))# %sn" a ran"e of re)e&ant 'ords and phrases.
Im not thn*n" a,o%t comp)e "rammar or )n*n" phrases.
Dote:
I 'ent a ,t :o&er the top: 'th ths essa$. Its 310 'ords )on"# and more than "ood
eno%"h for ,and 9. (o% m"ht not ,e a,)e to 'rte )*e ths# ,%t hopef%))$ $o% can )earn
somethn" from t.
/ere are m$ man ,od$ para"raphs for )ast 'ee*s %est on. <otce that ts poss,)e to
p%t ad&anta"es and dsad&anta"es to"ether n the same para"raph. A)so# $o% need to ,e
caref%) not to 'rte too m%chD
The man ad&anta"e of ,oo*s s that the$ are %s%a))$ consdered to ,e re)a,)e so%rces of
nformaton. eop)e tend to refer to ,oo*s 'hen the$ 'ant to research a s%,>ect n depth#
and for ths reason the$ contn%e to p)a$ an mportant ro)e n ed%caton. Cn the other
hand# ,oo*s %c*)$ "o o%t of date# and therefore the$ are not the ,est med%m for
comm%ncatn" ne's stores.
ado s a m%ch more effect&e med%m than ,oo*s for the comm%ncaton of %ptodate
nformaton. !e can )sten to ne's ,roadcasts a,o%t e&ents as the$ happen# and a *e$
,eneft of rado s that 'e can )sten to t 'h)e don" other act&tes# s%ch as dr&n" or
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'or*n". The man dra',ac* of rado# 'hen compared to ,oo*s or te)e&son# s that
there s no &s%a) e)ement= 'e cannot see 'hat the ,roadcaster s descr,n".
In m$ opnon# te)e&son s the most effect&e of these three meda ,eca%se t ,rn"s %s
c)oser to rea)t$ than a ,oo* or rado pro"ramme e&er can. +or eamp)e# 'e can 'atch
e&ents as the$ ta*e p)ace on the other sde of the 'or)d# or 'e can see the ,od$ )an"%a"e
of a po)tcan 'ho s ,en" nter&e'ed. The dsad&anta"es of te)e&son are that
pro"rammes tend to ,e short and nterr%pted ,$ ad&ertsements# meann" that nformaton
"hese days people pay more attention to artists 3writers, painters and so on5 and give
less importance to science and technology.
"o what extent do you agree or disagree?
Ths seems to me to ,e a perfect %eston for a :,a)anced opnon: ans'er .e. ,oth art
and scence are "&en e%a) mportance. /o'e&er# notce that $o% need to disagree 'th
the %eston statement n order to "&e ths ,a)anced response.
1. Introd%cton 'e co%)d accept that artsts are pop%)ar no'ada$s# ,%t dsa"ree that
scence and techno)o"$ are treated as )ess mportant.
2. an para"raph a,o%t th e pop%)art$ of artsts. Id %se eam p)es as the ,ass for
ths para"raph. If $o% dont *no' an$ 'rters or panters# $o% can ta)* a,o%t
actors and m%scans.
3. an para"raph a,o%t the mpo rtance of scence and techno)o"$. Id 'rte a,o%t
the pop%)art$ of mo,)e phones# comp%ters and ta,)ets. a$,e Id %se Ste&e @o,s
or )) ates as eamp)es of peop)e 'ho are famo%s for the techno)o"es the$
created.
Se&era) peop)e ha&e as*ed me a,o%t ths %eston from am,rd"e IELTS 8. I 'rote the
essa$ ,e)o' 'th the he)p of some of m$ st%dents. A fe' smp)e )n*n" feat%res are
h"h)"hted.
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(owadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? %as
this been a positive or negative development?
It s tr%e that ne' techno)o"es ha&e had an nf)%ence on comm%ncaton ,et'een peop)e.
Techno)o"$ has affected re)atonshps n &aro%s 'a$s# and n m$ opnon there are ,oth
post&e and ne"at&e effects.
Techno)o"$ has had an mpact on re)atonshps n ,%sness# ed%caton and soca) )fe.
+rst)$#
'tho%t te)ephones
e&er meetn"andeach
the Internet a))o' ,%sness
other. Second)$# peop)e
ser&ces )*e n dfferent
S*$pe co%ntres
create to nteract
ne' poss,)tes
for re)atonshps ,et'een st%dents and teachers. +or eamp)e# a st%dent can no' ta*e
&deo )essons 'th a teacher n a dfferent ct$ or co%ntr$. +na))$# man$ peop)e %se soca)
net'or*s# )*e +ace,oo*# to ma*e ne' fren ds and fnd peop)e 'ho share common
nterests# and the$ nteract thro%"h ther comp%ters rather than face to face.
Cn the one hand# these de&e)opments can ,e etreme)$ post&e. ooperaton ,et'een
peop)e n dfferent co%ntres 'as m%ch more dffc%)t 'hen comm%ncaton 'as )mted
to 'rtten )etters or te)e"rams. <o'ada$s# nteractons ,$ ema)# phone or &deo are
a)most as "ood as facetoface meetn"s# and man$ of %s ,eneft from these nteractons#
ether n 'or* or soca) contets. Cn the other hand# the a&a)a,)t$ of ne'
comm%ncaton techno)o"es can a)so ha&e the res%)t of so)atn" peop)e and dsco%ra"n"
rea) nteracton. +or eamp)e# man$ $o%n" peop)e choose to ma*e frends on)ne rather
than mn" 'th ther peers n the rea) 'or)d# and these K&rt%a)J re)atonshps are a poor
s%,stt%te for rea) frendshps.
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