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EXT: RIVER – DAYTIME

COLD morning by the RIVER. DUCKS and SWANS SWIMMING past. CARS DRIVING
past with PEOPLE WALKING by.
ACTORS wearing black jeans with a hoody with black coat. HOLDING a brown
handbag and having HER hood up.
The ACTOR is WALKING SLOWLY across The RIVER to show that she is UPSET
and LONELY. The HOOD up will represent that SHE doesn’t want to be SEEN.
MID-SHOT of The ACTOR getting a TEXT (I wouldn’t go out today you look
like a tramp)
ZOOM IN of the ACTOR putting HER HANDS INTO HER HEAD. This is to show
that she is upset and wants to cry.
BLACK SCREEN to cause TENSION. Then a FADE IN too SLOWLY bring back in
the story.
PAN of the CAMERA following the ACTORS HAND to PICK UP a RAZOR.
FADE OUT to BLACK SCREEN
FADE IN from BLACK
SHOW picture of the ACTORS ARM
CLOSE UP of the RAZOR going onto the ACTORS ARM.
CLOSE UP of BLOOD in a SINK and the ACTOR holding the RAZOR to show that
SHE has cut herself.
FADE OUT to BLACK SCREEN
FADE IN from BLACK SCREEN
TAP RUNNING to show that the BLOOD has been CLEANED AWAY to HIDE the
fact that she has SELF-HARMED
CLOSE UP of loads of PHOTOGRAPHS of the ACTORS FRIENDS and FAMILY to
show who she would be leaving behind.
PAN of the ACTOR walking to show that she has gone to get help at the
CHURCH
MESSAGES at the end to show the ADUIENCE how MENTAL HEALTH can affect
them and people around them.