Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Part 2
Shane Quintana
12/13/19
Description of Part 2
The second part of the Vermont licensure portfolio focuses on how competent
candidates are in producing rigorous and engaging learning through thoughtful consideration of
one’s curriculum, planning, instructional strategies, and assessment. What is also critical in this
determine its efficacy. Is content accurately being taught, are students being challenged in their
and allow for subsequent adjustments, and are there meaningful connections being made to the
curriculum? This requires potential teachers to have a firm grasp on their area of content to
know what is age appropriate to teach students and what teaching methods would best convey
this knowledge; this also helps dictate the types of assessments to use to verify what students
have retained or their level of skill. Teachers must continually be cognizant of the different
students and scenarios they are involved with, which means each situation and class requires a
unique solution. To successfully address each particular circumstance, one has to reflect on
one’s own choice of curriculum, application of strategies, and forms of assessment to establish
how students will receive the most out of their time in the classroom.
The performance criteria I examine in relation to my own practice are 4.1: communicate
central concepts, 5.1: perspectives from varied disciplines, 6.1: multiple methods of
assessment, 7.1: knowledge of content area, and 8.2: applying knowledge in meaningful ways.
My unit plan on John Steinbeck’s The Pearl in addition with my lesson on foreshadowing and
ambiguity exhibit my ability to meet the standards of each of these performance criteria. I was
able to ascertain the key literary elements of The Pearl and Kate Chopin’s “The Story of an
Hour” to then teach students through an assortment of different pedagogical techniques so the
content could be accessible to each type of learner. For each lesson, I devised various forms of
formative assessments to gauge student understanding to dictate my own lesson plans and if I
need to revisit certain content. Finally, also in consideration of diverse abilities, I formulated two
summative assessments that both required students to express their learning through analyzing
the text and incorporating the concepts discussed throughout the unit.
when I taught about metaphors and similes thoroughly in my fourth lesson plan. The students I
worked with had learned about metaphors and similes before, but they only had a superficial
understanding of the concepts. They knew the basic definition that a metaphor and simile are a
comparison of two things through direct language or through the use of “like” and “as.” However,
they did not know why authors use these forms of comparisons and what their purpose is
beyond comparing two things. For my unit, we read The Pearl, by John Steinbeck, as a class,
which contains eloquent metaphors and similes to use as examples for my lesson. I did not
want to lecture students about Steinbeck’s comparisons and give them the information, so I
used an inquiry-based approach in order for students to comprehend the purpose of metaphors
and similes through their own prior knowledge and thinking. The part of the novella I focused on
was when the main character attempts to sell a valuable pearl, but the buyers try to cheat him
into selling it for a pittance. The first simile I presented to the students was when Steinbeck
compares the eyes of a pearl buyer to those of a hawk. I initiated the process by asking
students to start listing their knowledge of or associations with hawks, and I wrote down their
responses on the whiteboard under a “hawk” column. A typical contribution I heard was that
many students perceived hawks as a cool and majestic bird. I agreed with the students’
opinions, but I redirected them to the text and asked them if Steinbeck was using this same
context for his simile. One student noted that Steinbeck describes hawks eyes as “cruel,” which
gives the comparison a malicious tone. So, the students quickly realized that, although hawks
are admirable, Steinbeck is making readers focus on the menacing aspects of hawk eyes. After
a few minutes, the students ran out of ideas before getting to the significance of the simile, so I
moved on to a new metaphor, where the author then compares the pearl buyers to wolves. I got
similar responses from before, where many students admired wolves. Again, I had students look
at the context from the book, which describes the buyers as “circling” wolves. A student gave
the helpful response that wolves will circle their prey when hunting, so the circling aspect had
threatening connotations. As another guiding step, I had students consider why, out of all the
animals Steinbeck could have used, he chose a hawk and wolves, and where these animals are
in the food chain. After realizing that Steinbeck chose apex predators for his comparisons,
students were beginning to recognize that the pearl buyers were figuratively hunting prey, which
was the main character and his pearl. As a final push, I had students go back to the beginning
of the chapter, before the hawk and wolf comparisons, and read a segment that describes how
haggling over the price of a pearl was like a hunt to the buyers. With that, all the pieces came
together for the students, and they deduced that these metaphors and similes were used to
enhance the malevolence of the pearl buyers and the helplessness of the main character in that
situation. As a final test of their comprehension, I asked the students to provide an animal
comparison for the main character in this scene. They came up with a mouse, rabbit, and
squirrel, which showed me their comprehension because they were using prey comparisons to
highlight the figurative idea that the main character was the one being hunted.
Reflection
In reflection of this experience, I believe I had a firm grasp on students’ prior knowledge
in order to know what concepts to teach. Furthermore, I felt that I was able to accurately
educate students about essential concepts within the discipline of English language arts.
However, due to the expansive amount of content that English and literature encompass, the
organization of my lessons seemed slightly isolated and, therefore, sporadic. One day we would
talk about character traits, the next day we would examine metaphors, and then we would jump
to considering the topic of greed. Although Steinbeck’s novella acted as a nice backbone for
these lessons, I still felt like there was a lack of cohesion between these independent ideas
which resulted in less captivating meaning for the students. I determine that these scattered
lessons came from the way I approached my unit. Because I wanted my unit to align with my
mentor teachers syllabus, I chose to teach The Pearl from the course list, and then I selected
concepts drawn from the novella. To avoid this in my future practice, I plan on knowing what
concepts I want to teach first, and then I will decide on a text to teach based on the ideas I want
to convey. Through this new process, the association between content will already be in place
and the text I will choose will merge into and highlight the cohesion of content.
The first time I blended the literary content I was teaching with another discipline was in
my first lesson of the unit. The Pearl is a story set in an historical context and another culture, so
I utilized a social studies perspective to make the content more accessible and to stress
prominent aspects of the story. One of the main conflicts in the novella is the tension between
the impoverished main characters and the affluent antagonist. To prepare the students for this
element, I gave a short lecture about European colonization. I made use of students’ prior
knowledge about English settlers and their clashes with Native Americans to highlight the same
antagonism between Spanish settlers and Native Mexicans, which students were quick to
recognize. A useful idea I discussed was how English settlers established large, deforested
cities, and Native Americans lived in tribes outside of these cities; this parallels the setting of
The Pearl, where the main character is a Native Mexican living in an impoverished brush village,
outside of a large, European-established town. To further exemplify the setting of 1920s Mexico,
with the students, I explored the culture of pearl diving. To make a livelihood and support their
families, many Native Mexicans partook in pearl diving and would sell their loot in the larger
towns to wealthy customers. Adding these historical and cultural contexts to The Pearl acted as
scaffolding information for when students began reading so they would have an easier time of
was during my class discussion on greed. Here, we examined the characters, their
development, and their motivations through a psychological perspective. I first showed students
a TedTalk video called “The science of greed.” The presenter talked about his own personal
research and prior research on how wealth can distort someone's personality, usually in a
negative manner. He demonstrated that people with wealth are more likely to cheat others, act
unethically, and demonstrate lower levels of empathy and compassion. From these findings,
students were asked to make connections to the text by independently writing how certain
characters embodied these negative attributes due to riches. We concluded the class by deeply
analyzing whether the main character was greedy based on the ideas addressed in the video
Reflection
content in reality for some students. For adolescents, it can be hard to realize the importance of
literature in society and why one should read. By discussing The Pearl in a historical context,
my hope was to engage students who prefer the topic of social studies. I wanted to highlight that
not all literature is irrelevant entertainment. Many authors, like Steinbeck, use writing as a
reflection of societies which allows the reader to either learn about the culture or at least view it
in a novel perspective. My class discussion was also an attempt to make the content more
meaningful. Presenting the students with research about greed and its effects on people
revealed how literature can accurately express human nature. Through this lesson, the students
learned that, even though fictional, characters can still embody the mindset and personalities of
humans, which can teach us a lesson about how we should live our lives. My plan for the future
is to collaborate and coordinate with colleagues about what they are teaching to make a unit in
tandem with theirs. Because literature is an omnipresent part of advanced culture, it can be
used as a tool for greater insight into a specific time period, civilization, or mentality. Creating
something of a multidisciplinary unit will help with scaffolding knowledge and extend student
learning. An example would be the commonly taught topic of the American Revolution. I could
link my own unit to this social studies topic by having students read excerpts of the Declaration
of Independence, or various writings of the founding fathers. Creating units like this would be
service teacher was to provide the students with different forms of assessments so all students
had the opportunity to demonstrate their understanding of the content through a method they
were comfortable with and capable of performing. The main form of formative assessments I
utilized was graphic organizers. The graphic organizer I created for character traits doubled as a
way for students to arrange their interpretations of characters and a way for me to evaluate if
students are drawing proper conclusions based on relevant evidence from the text. I created a
three columned T-chart to cover the three main characters that are introduced. Under each
column, students listed the attributes they found in each character, and on the back, where the
columns continue, they recorded quotes as evidence for each trait. I had this activity and
assessment in place because properly identifying the personalities of the characters is central to
recognizing the themes of the novella. The characteristics that students noted on the sheet
illustrated to me their comprehension of character development or lack of, and if I should devote
more class time to discussing certain elements and actions of a character. The character traits
organizer was also implemented to allow students with lower writing abilities to still express their
apprehension of the characters because I required them to use direct quotes from the text as
evidence instead of having them describe characters and actions in their own words.
Another graphic organizer I employed was a 3-2-1 sheet. I used this form of assessment
for a pivotal chapter in the novella. The sheet contains a 2x3 matrix; the left column has the
numbers three, two, and one in descending order, and the right column is blank for students to
fill out. For this chapter, I asked students to write three important actions that developed the plot
or characters, two things they found personally interesting, and one question they had about the
chapter or overall story. After students turned in their work, I was able to gauge whether the
students were reading and whether they were able to identify the essential aspects of the text,
or whether they were reading at a superficial level. Also, having students write a question they
had about the story gave me direct information about any confusion that I could immediately
The two summative assessments I designed are also examples of my ability to create
for the final assignment was to have students exhibit their understanding of The Pearl by writing
about a theme. One summative assessment was a five-paragraph essay elaborating on what
they found to be the major moral lesson of the novella. This was in place for the advanced
learners to practice their ability to identify, analyze, explain, and support a central idea in
thorough detail. It was also a way for them to work on now organizing what was discussed in
previous lessons and their own interpretations into a cohesive paper. The final results not only
highlighted their knowledge of a theme, but also the literary processes authors use to create
themes.
Because my classes had students that struggled with concisely explaining their
thoughts, I wanted to give an alternative means of showing what they learned. Although this
summative assessment was intended for this type of learner, I allowed any student to choose
this assignment. Instead of a five-paragraph essay, I gave the option of doing a creative writing
piece, where students took a theme from The Pearl and created their own short-story based on
this theme. Through this method, students were given the opportunity to demonstrate their
grasp of the content in an imaginative and metaphorical manner instead of a literal one. Another
clear theme in their short-stories, the students had to use the same literary techniques we
covered in class. So, instead of explicitly articulating these concepts as evidence in a five-
paragraph essay, students could use the concept to show their understanding of its important
elements and its effects on storytelling. The final products of students made great use of
character development, imagery, similes, conflict, resolution, and also covered meaningful
Reflection
assessments. When I used the character traits organizer and 3-2-1 sheet, I assigned it as
homework, and reviewed their work the next day. This led to me assessing their knowledge a
day after the lesson, and would then have to correct misconceptions or confusion in the
moment, with minimal preparation. By creating exit-tickets, I will have an immediate picture of
where students are with the curriculum and can make the necessary adjustments to my plans
for the next day. In relation to summative writing assessments, I will have students write in a
Google document and have them share it with me. During my time student teaching, I did make
sure to check in with students while they were writing in class, but this strategy only allowed me
to see one stage of their writing process and only meet with as many students as time dictated.
By having my future students write in a Google document and share it with me, I will be
connected to all stages of their writing process and be able to continually make suggestions
until the final draft. In addition, because my comments will be written down and permanently
stored on Google, students will not forget or lose these critical notes. Finally, shared Google
documents also solves the problem of not being able to review all student drafts because of
limited class time; I will be able to observe every students’ work because I will have perpetual
learning goals is the lesson I prepared on the literary devices foreshadowing and ambiguity.
Simply understanding and identifying these concepts can be difficult to begin with. When initially
teaching these ideas through direct-instruction, I tried to make them more accessible by
presenting them through content students had previously covered and mediums students were
most likely to be familiar with. For foreshadowing, I had students consider two short-stories they
had read a few classes before called “The Interlopers” and “Harrison Bergeron.” I illustrated how
these two stories made use of foreshadowing by making subtle hints early in the text about how
the narrative concludes. As extension examples and also forms of engagement, I expressed
how the Disney movies The Incredibles and The Lion King also make great use of
foreshadowing. Not only did students respond well to these examples, but it seemed that they
were effective in instilling comprehension. When moving onto the subject of ambiguity, I
followed the same pattern as before. I gave students a concrete definition of ambiguity followed
by two example sentences and two example videos. The example sentences--“I have never
tasted cake like that before,” and “the chicken is ready to eat”--were a demonstration of how
ambiguity can be expressed through language, and the students were quick to discern the
intentional confusion and lack of clarity. The videos I showed proved to be a little more
challenging for students to understand. The one in particular was the end scene of The
Graduate where the audience is left puzzled about whether the romantically involved main
characters end up happy or with regret. I believe the complication with this scene was that it
relied on students to make inferences based on visual cues instead of verbal cues. Finally to
piece these literary devices together, I had students read Kate Chopin’s “The Story of an Hour,”
while considering what I just taught. The succinct and complex language used in the story made
this task a challenge to complete, yet one I knew students would be able to achieve with the
proper time, thinking, and guidance. As part of this guidance--aside from me doing individual
check-ins--I formed five questions for students to focus on while they read, with a focus on
foreshadowing and ambiguity in the text. To further student thinking and incorporate social
elements, students participated in Think-Pair-Share when they had completed their answers,
which proved to be helpful for those that struggled with pinpointing these concepts. As a final
assessment and act of clarification, these pairs shared their talking points to the rest of the
class, and I was able to clarify or extend significant aspects when necessary. By the end of
these activities, students had achieved the rigorous goaI of apprehending foreshadowing and
independent analysis.
Reflection
In hindsight, I regard this lesson as one of my better ones. What I found to be successful
was connecting the content to something the students were familiar with. It was a persuasive
way of communicating to students that what was being taught could be used during their
recreational time when watching movies, and that it does not only apply to literature and English
class. This was also effective because, even with students who had not seen the movies, they
acted as crucial forms of engagement by showing these clips and adding a visual element to the
lesson. This was made possible by my knowledge of literature and how it can be presented in a
plethora of mediums. To augment this in the future, I will make a point to learn the specific
books, movies, and television shows students are interested in so I can directly draw from their
preferences. With this lesson, I was gambling whether the students had seen the Disney movies
or not, and I figured before-hand that they would not know The Graduate since it is a movie from
1967. By knowing what my students are interested in, I will not have to guess at what they are
familiar with, and I will be able to assimilate what they enjoy and appreciate into my lessons.
The main method I used to apply what I was teaching in a meaningful way was having
students consider the moral lesson of The Pearl in real life. A specific example of this is the
aforementioned class discussion on greed. After our initial discussion about how the information
from the video applied to the characters from the text, we closely examined what it means to be
greedy through the main character. At first, many students were quick to say that he was being
greedy because he was chasing after things that he did not actually need in his life to be
content. So, I had them scrutinize this idea more by considering his motivations. Soon, students
shifted their responses because they realized that the main character was only pursuing a better
life for the sake of his family, which made his commitment justified. The students then compared
the character, his personality, and actions before he found the pearl to after he found the pearl.
Students agreed that the main character’s values changed once he found the pearl; in the
beginning, his family and village were most important to him, but he later turns on his family for
the sake of selling the pearl. Ultimately, the students summarized that striving for a better life for
oneself or family does not constitute greed, only when someone changes their core morals and
acts unethically is it considered greed. I proceeded to ask a few more probing questions for
them evaluate greed in real-life scenarios. They produced mature ideas such as the fact that
being wealthy does not inherently make one greedy, and pursuing a better life, even when one
is already affluent, also does not classify as being greedy. On the other hand, the fact that
someone is poor does not mean they cannot act in a greedy manner. The final consensus was
that greed is a matter of ethics and if one is choosing to ignore the well-being of others for
material gain. My hope from this discussion is that the students will be able to use this moral
Each text I choose to teach will have deliberate information or moral lessons that each student
will be able to adopt in their own lives for their development. What I will do in the future that
differs from my time as a pre-service teacher will be to draw on information and lessons on
ethics that students can utilize in their immediate lives. When I taught The Pearl, even though
students were capable of identifying these teachings, it did not create the most traction with
students. This is because of their lack of real world experience, where they personally have not
been involved with situations related to wealth and how it can change the character of a person.
I will make sure to select books or expository writing that convey advice that my students can
use immediately after the lesson. At one point, I asked the students I worked with about topics
that they would like to analyze through literature, and the common answers were friendship,
happiness, anger, and isolation. With these suggestions, I will look for adolescent oriented
books that encompass these ideas, and hopefully provide students with guidance on how to
navigate through social interactions and the emotions associated with it so that they will conduct
One of the difficult tasks as a teacher is figuring out how to engage students to learn
content that adolescents typically find boring. My strength as a pre-service teacher was my
ability to adapt my lessons so that students would find meaning in their work. Part of the
process that incited these imperative changes was creating formative assessments that not only
determined what students learned, but also what students wanted to discover about the text.
Students could grasp the literary devices I taught, but this did not help them understand the
purpose of the novella. So, the latter portion of my unit was dedicated to having students make
real-life connections and extracting the themes of The Pearl. I have come to understand that the
rigor of education is not having students understand the what of content, but understanding the
why. This is why I will continually make my discipline accessible and meaningful for my students
so that they can comprehend how it will benefit their lives and influence their futures. The only
way I can succeed in this goal is by assessing my own plans to make sure that I use a broad
range of pedagogical approaches so that content can be reached by all types of learners and