Cordova 1

Ninoshka Cordova
Professor Holly Batty
English 101
December 18th, 2019

Reflection

What I learned in this essay is how to really be able to use the necessary
information and to really be able to highlight the necessary points that the essay needs, I
had some errors in my essay but with the help of my companions and the comments of
my teacher they helped me to see that I needed to be able to better my essay.
In the first essay I learned what is the best process for me when writing an essay and how
to write it correctly, I also learned that the help and renters of other people will help you
improve your essay in many aspects. This essay also show me how difficult is to really
learn and how the process of writing needs a lot of time and effort in order to do a really
good essay.

Essay is the hardest part for me but i will put in practice all the suggestion that my
professor and my friends gave me, also the comments that my professor gave on my first
essay really help me improving my revised essay for my portfolio, getting the ideas of
what I should write and how should I do it in order to get better at writing.The idea of the
portfolio help a lot noticing my mistakes and how I can improve my essay with this
process, following the instruction and the process that many people suggest for me.
This would be a good idea to always get better and improve something in your writing