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HI 192 - Final Paper - Writing Sample 2
HI 192 - Final Paper - Writing Sample 2
any other century. Much of the development can be attributed to Capitalism, an economic
disparity between the privileged and the underprivileged. How did this happen? Karl Marx
However, Marx’s ideas also had its own shortfalls, especially in resolving the inequality present
in the Capitalist system. As such, the paper argued to reconcile these two ideas, and reached a
Key Ideas
Self-sufficiency was necessary for Smith as man has “the desire of bettering our
condition.”1 Incidentally, the same desire also indirectly helped advance the needs and wants
of society or as Smith said in the Wealth of Nations or WN, “it is not from the benevolence of
the butcher, the brewer, or the baker, that we expect our dinner, but from their regard to their
own interest. We address ourselves, not to their humanity, but to their self-love…”2 The
interwovenness between self-reliance and the public good was the traditional interpretation of
Smith proposed that the state, in this laissez-faire system, must have as little intervention in
economic affairs.4 The state would be called a “night watchman, ” which only focused its
attention on the absolute basics such as education and peace and order.5 In the meanwhile, the
state encouraged that the market provided the most efficient way in the distribution of
1
Spiegel, Henry William. The growth of economic thought. Duke University Press, 1991, 243.
2
Smith, Adam. Wealth of Nations. Edited by Salvio Marcelo Soares,
www.ibiblio.org/ml/libri/s/SmithA_WealthNations_p.pdf. 16.
3
Sandmo, Agnar. Economics evolving: A history of economic thought. Princeton University Press, 2011, 48.
4
Ibid. 54.
5
Ibid. 55.
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resources. Again, Smith argued for the laissez-faire system due to the inefficient and centrally
planned Mercantilist system, in which the profits and gains of society were primarily for the
elites and the rich, which resulted into a great disparity in income.6
Another key idea of Smith was the efficiency of the division of labor. Grounded on
man’s “propensity to truck, barter, and exchange,” the idea regarding the division of labor
hinged on the objective that any firm maximized its production capacity through specialization
of labor. As such, the productivity of labor is maximized, and this was seen as Smith used the
example of pin making. In the factory, one man drew out the wire, one man straightened it, the
next one cut it, until at the very end of the production line, a usable pin for the consumer, but
now, through a faster and more efficient process. Three positive outcomes occurred in this
situation. The workers’ skills increased over time, while it also saved time for other productive
Marx, through his writing of Das Kapital, believed in the failure of capitalism.8 He
mentioned the failure was due to the three contradictions of the system itself.9 Firstly, any
society’s objective was the accumulation of goods. However, in a capitalist society, the
motivation for such accumulation and production was not for each one’s individual
development, but for profit. As such, as said by Bober “with such an ideal, the expansive
development of the productive forces is incompatible,” which led to conflict and eventual
disintegration of society. Secondly, even though the production of goods is for the benefit of
everyone, policies were implemented by private individuals, who had their own private
agendas. Rather than enact policy that was beneficially for society, companies would be guided
by individual agendas or as Bober said “the products resulting from the collective productive
6
Rick, Jon. “Historical Context for the Wealth of Nations.” Historical Context for the Wealth of Nations,
Columbia College, www.college.columbia.edu/core/content/wealth-nations/context.
7
Spiegel, Henry William. The growth of economic thought. Duke University Press, 1991, 245.
8
Ibid. 467.
9
Bober, Mandell Morton. Karl Marx’s Interpretation of History. Vol. 2, Cambridge Harvard University Press,
1950, 206-208.
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forces are not appropriated socially but become the property of the capitalist.” Lastly, the
factory or company, despite its order and cooperation within the production processes, led an
anarchic tone as it produced, procured, and sold goods without regard of the social
consequences involved. Anarchy among factories was present as they constantly competed to
gain market share. All three contradictions highlighted that self-reliance did not lead to social
good, but just for private gain. And in the end, the capitalist system encouraged the
accumulation of capital among the few large companies.10 These large companies tended to
“beat out” smaller companies, and a cycle emerged, in which large companies got larger.
Meanwhile, the working class, valued so little in this capitalist society, lived on subsistence
Marx lamented the capitalist system. He viewed the elites of this society, or the
bourgeoisie, as the “trustees of social wealth,” yet only looked after their own well-being, as
they not only controlled the means of production, but also benefited from the protection of the
political organizations.11 However, Marx, as mentioned above, believed that capitalism would
fall. It would start from an economic crisis or depression.12 The misery experienced by the
proletariat was the key ingredient for the changing of the guard. Once this occurs, a revolution
would occur, as the proletariat would seize the modes of production. Violence is necessary in
this situation, as the elites would resist such a chance, or as Marx said in the Communist
Manifesto, “openly declare that their ends can be attained only be the forcible overthrow of
all existing social conditions.”13 Marx believed in the inevitability of such conflict, and
understood that only through the suffering of the proletariat can they realize the inequality
10
Spiegel, Henry William. The growth of economic thought. Duke University Press, 1991, 471-472.
11
Bober, Mandell Morton. Karl Marx’s Interpretation of History. Vol. 2, Cambridge Harvard University Press,
1950, 259.
12
Ibid,. 261-262.
13
Marx, Karl. Communist Manifesto. www.marxists.org/archive/marx/works/download/pdf/Manifesto.pdf, 34.
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Criticisms of Smith and Marx
economics. As Marx pointed out in his critiques of Capitalism, the motivation to provide a
good was not for the social beneficial reasons, but to safeguard one’s well-being. As such, the
extreme to this situation, as Marx pointed out, led to abuse, as when a factory is led by profit,
and not by social responsibility, it led to treat its workers as machines, not people. For example,
the 2008 financial crisis, motivated by the banks’ desire to increase profits, crippled pensions,
trust funds, and jobs for the regular working American.14 Banks were supposed to lend money
and create growth, however, since they were motivated to earn, and not by welfare of society,
many banks used their power and leverage to gamble the money of the working American to
significant development in the last few hundred years. Even Marx himself acknowledged this,
as he said, “the bourgeoisie, during its rule of scarce one hundred years, has created more
massive and more colossal productive forces.”15 In contrast, the communist state and class
equality that Marx aspired for was an ideal, but was not pragmatic. One cannot ignore that the
most well-known communist state, the Soviet Union, collapsed due to its failure to achieve a
true classless society, or as said “while millions of citizens died of starvation, the Politubro
(elite party members) enjoyed German cars, ate French food, and slept on luxurious Italian
silk sheets.”16 Even China, a communist state, has shifted to a more mixed economy, in which
14
Reavis, Cate. "The global financial crisis of 2008: the role of greed, fear, and oligarchs." MIT Sloan
Management Review16 (2012): 10.
15
Marx, Karl. "Capital, volume I." (1867).391.
16
“Articles Master of Arts in Military History.” 5 Reasons for the Collapse of the Soviet Union | Norwich
Online Graduate Degrees, Norwich University Online, July 2016, graduate.norwich.edu/resources-
mmh/articles-mmh/exploring-5-reasons-for-the-collapse-of-the-soviet-union/.
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capitalism played a role in its ongoing development. Additionally, Marx’s solution, a violent
revolution, despite his claims, was cruel. Marx cited inhumane conditions of the proletariat,
and yet, he was also committed to inhumane acts as well to achieve his kind of liberation.
proletariat.”17 And yet, as the proletariat came into power and re-distribute the resources, was
this not another form of coercion? Granted, the bourgeoisie have amassed so much fortune,
what about the middle class who were caught in the middle? The middle class, or as Marx
referred to them as “petty bourgeoisie,” had no place for Marx in the struggle for communism.18
Marx insisted for their “proletarianization,” but people cannot work be forced to do actions
they did not want. Marx condemned factory work as a form of slavery as people are forced to
work there to live, and yet, Marx also insisted on the proletarianization of the middle class,
Vatican II, a landmark conference held from 1962-1965 by Pope John XXIII, was a
reaction to the growing inequality of the times. It encouraged the Church to look outward
through articles such as the Justice in the World (1975).19 What is the stance of the Church? In
essence, the Church took the pros of capitalism, such as the liberty for self-sustenance and
opportunity to economically grow, while condemned its cons through a Marxist analysis, albeit
without the revolution. For example, in Laborem Exercens, while man was called to develop
earth’s resources, the right to private property is secondary to the collective good.20
Additionally, Sollicitudo Rei Socialis observed that the obscenely wealthy individuals
17
Bober, Mandell Morton. Karl Marx’s Interpretation of History. Vol. 2, Cambridge Harvard University Press,
1950, 268.
18
Ibid,. 108.
19
“Justice in the World.” Cctwincities.org, www.cctwincities.org/wp-content/uploads/2015/10/Justicia-in-
Mundo.pdf.
20
John Paul II. Laborem Exercems. w2.vatican.va/content/john-paul-ii/en/encyclicals/documents/hf_jp-
ii_enc_14091981_laborem-exercens.html.
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experienced a failure of “being” as they experienced the “cult of having” in which they are
material goods for psycho-spiritual fulfillment,” which proved detrimental to not only the
The solution, for the Church, would then be reform of the current system, and not a
violent revolution. For example, in Centesimus Annus, it lauded the organization and efficiency
of the current Capitalist system, yet condemned the marginalization of the ostracized classes.22
The answer provided was to keep the market economy, yet enact pro-people laws that serviced
the common good, rather than large corporations.23 In essence, the state must adhere to the
principle of subsidiarity (its activities must not limit the self-determination of individuals),
while also adhere to the principle of solidarity (its responsibility to protect the interests of the
marginalized).24 While the Church agreed that the capitalist structure of Smith was flawed, it
Conclusion
Smith believed in the self-determination of man. Through his need to survive, he must
sustain himself, and as such, look after his own well-being. As such, he encouraged the
invisible hand ideal, which piloted the economic development and industrialization of Western
society. However, the system became excessive as the ideal of the invisible hand was flawed,
since the bourgeoisie’s actions only benefitted himself, and for the most part, proved to be
detrimental to society. Marx analyzed and critiqued the Capitalist system and argued for the
21
John Paul II. Sollicitudo Rei Socialis . w2.vatican.va/content/john-paul-ii/en/encyclicals/documents/hf_jp-
ii_enc_30121987_sollicitudo-rei-socialis.html.
22
John Paul II. Centisemus Annus. w2.vatican.va/content/john-paul-ii/en/encyclicals/documents/hf_jp-
ii_enc_01051991_centesimus-annus.html.
23
Ibid.
24
Ibid.
25
Ratzinger, Joseph Cardinal. Instruction on Certain Aspects of the "Theology of Liberation".
www.vatican.va/roman_curia/congregations/cfaith/documents/rc_con_cfaith_doc_19840806_theology-
liberation_en.html.
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complete abolishment through a violent revolution. Despite his intentions to save the worker,
he also had flaws in his critique, and this was corrected through Church social teachings. The
Church, noted into the laudable ideas of both Smith and Marx, while condemned the radical
nature of both ideas. As such, the Church promoted a middle ground, in which man still had
the opportunity for self-determination, but also protected the rights and interests of the
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