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Dear Linda,

I am writing today to tell you more about advantages and disadvantages of living
in the country side or in a city. If you live in the country side you need to be a
hardworking person, in my opinion, because you need to do some house work
around the house. If you have space you can have a small ranch. On the other hand,
you can relax on the terrace, admire the view and enjoy fresh air. The country side
is not crowded, but you need a car to get to the job, the bus is not a good solution.
If you work in town you need to travel distances/commute each day. Life in the
country side can be boring; there are not enough activities that you can do. All
cities have become crowded in the last years and the pollution is higher. A city has
many places to enjoy: park, clubs and other entertainment places. The city is also
more convenient for your job.

I am waiting for your opinion. Please write me back.

Love,

Florin