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Clip Time code Image description Sound Notes

1 00:00 - Walking into school Diegetic – Slow pace
00: 04 footsteps
2 00:04- Tracking scene feet Diegetic Camera in front of
00:08 characters walking
backwards
3 00:08- Front view of them Diegetic Slow pace
00:12 walking
4 00:12- Both walking away Diegetic Characters going in
00:15 from each other separate directions
5 00:15- Ben looking at Liam Diegetic Liam is with a different
00:18 confused group of friends
6 00:18- Split then comes up Diegetic Edited with text coming
00:22 and split screen going into the middle of the
into next scene screen
7 00:22- Ben walking down the Diegetic – quite No people around, shows
00:26 corridor loneliness
8 00:26- Walking in the room Diegetic Slow paced
00:28
9 00:28- Walking in the class Diegetic Slow paced, not many
00:35 from behind people in the class room
10 00:37- Long shot of ben Diegetic Muffled sound
00:39 sitting on his own
11 00:39- Liam walking in and Diegetic – Camera focuses on
0049 ignoring ben background characters eyes
sound of a
classroom
12 00:49- Long shot of Liam Diegetic – Quite scene, overhearing
00:55 sitting with Leo and muffled sound of Liam, Leo and Asa
Asa and ben on his Liam and friends talking about Ben
own talking
13 00:55- Ben being barged out Diegetic – sound Two different camera
1:05 of the door by Asa from being shots to show the effect
pushed into of ben being pushed
objects
14 1:05- Over the shoulder of Diegetic – Show the emotion on
1:09 ben looking at Asa background bens face.
noises
15 1:09- Tracking shot of ben Diegetic – Bens head down, posture
1:15 walking whilst on the footsteps will show sadness
phone
16 1:15- Over the shoulder of Diegetic – sound Tracking over the
1:20 ben texting Liam of typing shoulder
17 1:20- Close up of what the Diegetic Message will show
1:23 message says emotion
18 1:23- Tracking shot of ben Diegetic Difference in their
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1:26 and Liam walking out emotions, Liam happy
of school but confused and ben sad
19 1:26- Point of view shot of Diegetic – cars Audience made to feel
1:30 Liam seeing his mates around sorry for ben
over the road
20 1:30- Shot of ben standing Diegetic – any Bens face will show let
1:37 on his own while cars around down once again
Liam goes off with his
new mates in their car
21 1:37- End of school. Ben Diegetic – Liam is seen to be
1:45 walking out of school footsteps realising his mistakes and
alone, Liam walking trying to make ben feel
after him to find out better
what’s wrong. Liam
invites him to play
football after school.
22 1:45- Liam gets picked up Diegetic – sound Ben let down once again
1:50 by his new mates and of car driving past and all hope has been lost
drives past ben while
he’s waiting for the
bus alone
23 1:50- Montage with non- Non-diegetic - Cross cutting to show
2:00 diegetic sound (Liam sound of music two different characters
out with mates, ben at locations
home looking at old
pictures)
24 2:00- Cut to Liam hanging Diegetic – Dark setting and little
2:04 around the streets – background surroundings
mid shot to show sound of
location surroundings
25 2:04- Cut to ben waiting for Diegetic – sound Ben still wants to meet
2:08 Liam on his own – from texting Liam and hang out.
over the shoulder shot Shows his hope
of ben texting Liam
26 2:08- Cut to Liam in the car Diegetic – speech Audience see both sides.
2:11 with his new friends & quite music in Ben cares about the
reading the text but background friendship whereas it
ignoring it. seems that Liam does not
27 2:11- Close up of Liam Diegetic – Shot used to show Liam
2:14 feeling bad background feeling guilty
music
28 2:14- Close up of ben as he Diegetic – wind Ben beginning to give up
2:17 decides to leave the on the friendship due to
park Liam not showing up
29 2:17- Long shot of ben Diegetic Slow paced again shows
2:22 walking alone emotion and makes the
(slowly) audience sympathise
towards ben
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30 2:22- Ben sees Liam with Diegetic Confusion on bens face
2:25 Leo and Asa walking as he doesn’t know why
into the park Asa and Leo are there

2:25- Asa and Leo are Diegetic – Liam Ben feeling worried for
2:29 holding Liam struggling Liam’s safety
31 dragging him
32 2:29- Ben jogs towards Diegetic – sound Ben trying to help and
2:33 Liam - tracking shot of running see what’s happening
used footsteps
33 2:33- Ben sees Liam on the Diegetic – sound Ben unsure what to do to
2:37 floor getting attacked from hitting help
– low angle shot used
34 2:37- High angle shot to Diegetic – Shows Liam to be weak
2:40 clearly show Liam as background noise
the victim
35 2:40- Ben tries to help Liam Diegetic Ben confused and wants
2:44 but Asa scares him to help but can’t
away
2:44-2:47 Ben then runs to Diegetic – sound Ben trying to help despite
Liam’s house and tells from running and the let-down that he has
his mum about what out of breath received from Liam
has happened
2:47- As ben is telling Diegetic – Awkward moment
2:52 Liam’s mum about background becomes wonderful
what has happened, he sound, door because of the re-bonded
walks in the door. opening friendship that we see