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Jackson Wright
Ms. Reed
English 9
12 February 2020
All or Nothing
It was at that swim meet in which I learned you have to give something your all if you
want to succeed, and if you give anything less, you will lose.
We were at a swim meet for the Galloway swim team, where we had warmed up and
were now waiting for the meet to start. After we saluted the flag, we had to wait another twenty
As we walked to the block, we passed all the other teams, whose teams were much bigger
Once we had arrived at the block, we waited for each other to swim since we are all in
different heats, which are the different levels of skill in an event. The higher the heat you are in,
the faster you are and the faster the people are that you are racing against. Ethan and Harry, two
of my friends, had heats that were below me, so I waited with them in their lanes and watched
them swim.
“Great job,” I said as they got out of the water, “you got third and you did well too
Harry.”
They both said, “Thanks.” And as I walked to my lane to swim, they both said, “Good
luck, Jackson.”
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I finally made it to my lane and waited. I then looked around to see what the competition
would be like and all I saw were people who were older, bigger, and more muscular than me. I
thought that I would most likely not get in the top three and maybe not even the top five.
As I was thinking this, the long, shrill whistle, telling swimmers to step up on the block,
pierced my thoughts. Hurriedly, I got on the block and waited for the signal of three short
Once the three short whistles had been blown, I put myself in the position to dive off the
block, in which my butt is up and my head and chest are down. Then the wait began for the long
whistle that would tell us to dive and swim for it. It seemed like an eternity, but finally, it came
I jumped, pointed myself like an arrow, and I hit the water at an angle that would make it
so I didn’t dive too deep, but also where I wouldn’t belly flop. As I was submerged in water it
shocked me how cold it was, but I pushed past it, glided through the water and made it to the
surface, where I started to move my arms in the motion for freestyle, to propel me forward. I was
kicking, but barely. You see, I hate kicking while swimming, it is just weird and I am already
I soon neared the end of the pool, where I would do my flip turn. I started to calculate in
my head the distance to the wall while I was still swimming towards it. I had to get this perfect if
I didn’t want to come in last place. I reached, flipped, and then pushed off the wall as hard as I
I had no idea where I was at in the race, so I did a quick glance to the side and saw that
It was at that moment that I knew I would have to give a hundred percent if I wanted to
win. I would need to use my legs. So I began to pump my legs up and down in the water as hard
as I could, turning the water white with bubbles, while still going just as fast with my arms.
I was going faster now. So much faster. The end of the race was near, for I was only ten
feet from the wall. I pushed myself even further and before I knew it I was slamming my hand
against the pad on the wall that would determine my place in the race.
I began to tread water and catch my breath. Once I finally had enough oxygen, I turned
around, looked at the board, and smiled as I could now see that I had gotten first place.
Now that I had seen my score, I pulled myself out of the water and started walked over to
my team which sadly was on the other side of the room, so I was so cold since I had just been
When I got to my team, I got high-fives and heard my friends say, “Good Job.”
My coach then came over and said, “Jackson, if you swim and push yourself like that,
For the rest of the night, I got only one more first place. However, I was the only one