Q: Collages and universities must do a better job preparing students for their workplace.

Agree/Disagree

ANSWER:
Some people think that all collages must spend money only on studying program. However, in my
opinion, colleges should pay more money for students such as making a better place to work. The
reasons are that students can get various experience and their works will be better.

First of all, workplace is really important especially for collage students, it is like home for them.
That is because they do many assignments and projects in there. So, through working, they can
gain so many experience. I believe experience is one of the most essential factors of success in
this world. Imagine people only have textbook knowledge, their views will be so narrow. By working
at a good workplace, students can not only gain diverse experience but also broaden their horizon
of the world. For example, in my brother’s case, his collage had perfect facilities for student’s
workplace and he worked so many various works in there. Through a lot of trial and error, he got
diverse experience and he finally can do his work perfectly.

In addition, thanks to a good workplace, students can do a way better at their works so they can
get a good grade. Imagine students do not have any appropriate place to work. Would it be
possible that they can make great works? Absolutely not. Through working at workshop and getting
enough experience, they can be more creative. For instance, a study was conducted by the Seoul
University in Korea to determine whether workplace could affect student’s grade. There were two
groups monitored. The first group was formed of people who work at home. They were asked to
finish the project that professor gave. The other group consisted of people who conduct at
workplace and were given the same direction. The outcomes were intriguing. The group who work
at workshop were given a better grade. This study demonstrates that workplace helps students to
get a good score.

In a nut shell, taking gaining a lot of experience and getting a good score into consideration, the
advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. In this regard, I firmly believe that workplace is the
most important place for students, so collages should invest money in that.