Dr.

Jane Thompson
Medical Practioner
North Fitzroy General Practice
12 Raeburn St
North Fitzroy 3124

20/05/2018

Dear Dr. Thompson,

Re: Ms Amber Watson, DOB: 25/03/1999

I am writing to refer Ms Watson , who was tested positive for chlamydia trachomatis in our facility.
Therefore, your further care and management is higly requested.

On initial visit, Ms Watson came in for a request of Pap test. Aside from that, she was also worried from
her weight gain of 10 kg in 1 year. Furthermore, she asked about different types of family planning
methods. In general, Ms Watson has no known allergies neither medical nor surgical history. She was a
smoker and an occasional drinker also.

With regards to her sexual and reproductive history, she has regular 28-day menstrual cycle. Moreover,
her LMP was recorded 7 days back and no history of STI nor pregnancies. Although she claims to have 1
partner currently, it was not sure that it was monogamous. Please note that she is on oral contraceptive Comment [Office1]: she
pills and her last sexual contact was 14 days ago. Comment [Office2]: he à “IT” an object or an animal J

On her follow up consultation, Pap test and PCR test reveals positive for chlamydia trachomatis, hence, Comment [Office3]: revealed
safer sexual practices which includes barrier protection were discussed. Consequently, azithromycin 1 gm
single dose was commenced and instructed to refrain from intercourse for 7 days of treatment. In
addition, a referral to Outline and women’s health nutritionist were recommended. Comment [Office4]: Quitline

In view of the above, kindly facilitate additional laboratory test for sexually transmitted diseases and blood
borne viruses. Finally, it would be appreciated if you can discuss further methods of contraception.

Should you have further questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely yours,
Nurse Practioner








Criteria Points
Overall Task Fulfillment 4
Appropriateness of Language 4
Comprehension of Stimulus 4
Linguistic Feature (Grammar and Cohesion) 4
Presentation Features (Spelling, punctuation and layout) 4
Total 20

Overall Comments

• Able to manage the task, but restricted in range and flexibility by lapses or errors. 


• Answer may be too long or too short. 


• Generally appropriate register, tone and lexis for the context, but errors are
noticeable 


• Generally accurate understanding of stimulus material and task instructions. 


• Omissions or irrelevancies are noticeable (i.e. includes too little or too much
information). 


• Uses a fair range of grammatical structures. 


• Inaccuracies in spelling and punctuation are sometimes intrusive. 


Grading System:

27-30. A
26-20. B
19-17 C+
16 and below C

Estimated Grade B