Motamed 2

Nicholas Motamed
Professor Herman
English 1S
2/6/2020
Letter To Self

To: Nicholas Motamed

To start off I want to take time to thank myself for completing his first college essay! Although
unfortunately in the beginning I end up procrastinating and not organizing my time well so I end
up getting only half of a rough draft skeleton that I send in because it would have been late. In
addition I felt challenged in grammar and accidently repeating words and phrases. Also forget
to make it specific to the audience in the pasts. However thanks to Professor Hermen my TLT
tutors patience and support help me build great paragraphs full of rich evidence that proved that
selfies damage how you view your image. I felt the grammar sheet and the Professors step by
step break down helped me improve my grammar. Looking at the final draft I feel happy that I
made a solid argument and put a great optimistic ending. I hope to continue growing in my
grammar skills, and organizing well so I do not procrastinate.

From: Nicholas Motamed