SRP

Important:
Revise essay, then outline
Essay=”SRP Outline” + History of Voting Rights Arizona Law

****Don’t forget…
1. To check Dad’s highlighted (Iden Key Words 01) for complete sentences
or the one from mimi
2. Always refer back to the article and add details (only if you have time)
3. Reference to Deshmeyer’s OUTLINE and ESSAY

Homework:

Delete the ones not in the passage but in works cited

Paraphrase and shorten it

Add some quote in Why

Thesis: In terms of political struggle, Native Americans have made a lot of progress in taking
a seat at the table from the 1990s to the present.

What research do I still need? Which particular topic do I not understand? Add them in work
cited.
Opposing viewpoints?

Tips:

Overview:
The product is an essay which has a thesis and has supporting evidence from the 6 articles
you’ve researched.

You are fine with “somewhat”, just change the thesis along if you think that there is an
inclination. You can say that these two proved that they have gone forwards, BUT … maybe
there are a lot of people who still couldn’t vote. (But Mr. Zen actually thinks that all NA
should have gained voting rights by 1990.)

In terms of “OUTLINE”, read the note card.

The thesis is usually at the END of the FIRST paragraph.
For the CONTENT, put what you feel that will absolutely prove your thesis AT THE
BEGINNING so readers will be more convinced.

All the sources today are secondary. Primary sources are the ones that really is from a
person who experienced the thing itself.
MLA format is another topic to discuss so read yellow paper.

FAQ
How can I put the google thing on articles? Just copy them into word and give it to him.

Main Point #2 needs change. Main Point 1: although they DID produce blah blah blah, they
actually didn’t…U CHANGE THE WHOLE THESIS TO MINIMAL EXTENT.
Plagiarism…who cares until you have the essay?

Jiu jiu:
First find a good title (most important)
Put WHAT for main point
Then you’ll write an OUTLINE out
Copy our research into the outline

At some point you have to stop researching and start essay. With practice you’ll be alright.