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In the next 15 years, I might work for the biggest design company and soon after that I hanker to open and own a company. I will live in one of
the biggest cities in Indonesia, Bandung, which has friendly peopled and a wintertime ambiance. I will have my own corporation and can
regulate myself and I will have employees so that I can welfare in this business and be able to thrive in this world of competition. I will not have
debt considering it can affect life difficult and I don't hanker to have debt for the reason that I know that debt is difficult personally, and for my
family. I will not disappoint my parents, I will try to be a more advantageous person because in this lecture I'm still financed by my parents, for
now, I have not opened a business because I'm still focused on college
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In the next 15 years, I might work for the biggest design company and soon after that I hanker to open
and own a company. I will live in one of the biggest cities in Indonesia, Bandung, which has friendly
peopled and a wintertime ambiance. I will have my own corporation and can regulate myself and I will
have employees so that I can welfare in this business and be able to thrive in this world of competition. I
will not have debt considering it can affect life difficult and I don't hanker to have debt for the reason
that I know that debt is difficult personally, and for my family. I will not disappoint my parents, I will try
to be a more advantageous person because in this lecture I'm still financed by my parents, for now, I
have not opened a business because I'm still focused on college

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Usage of Bad Phrases

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Usage of Transitional Phrases

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and, for now

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She didn't like the pudding and, consequently, threw it all away.

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Sentence Length Info

Total Sentences: 5
Avg. Length: 30.0 words
Short Sentences (< 17 words): 0 (0%)
Long Sentences (> 35 words): 1 (20%)
Sentence Variation: 7.5 words (std deviation)

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Sentence Beginnings
Simple Sentence Starts: 0%
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a simple noun phrase followed by a verb. This does NOT mean that all sentences should begin with
prepositional phrases, transitions, or adverbial phrases, but it does mean that you should be certain to pay
attention to sentence starts and deliberately edit for variety if necessary. Starts by Part of Speech:

Adjective: 0%
Adverb: 0%
Article: 0%
Conjunction: 0%
Noun: 0%
Preposition: 20%
Pronoun: 80%
Verb: 0%
Other: 0%

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Vocabulary Words

Usage of Academic Vocabulary

Vocabulary Score: 186.4
This score is based on the quantity and quality of scholarly vocab words found in the text. You did equal
or better than 44% of the people in your education level.

Vocabulary Word Count: 4

Percentage of Vocab Words: 4.41%
Vocab Words in this Paper (top 20):
regulate, advantageous, financed, welfare

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level of your audience and adjust your vocabulary accordingly. It is worthwhile to constantly work at
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3. Analyze yor written text by answering the following questions:

a). What kinds of active sentences did you write? Give the xamples

I might work for the biggest design company

b). What kinds of passive sentences did you write? Give the xamples!

c). What kinds of transitional phrases did u use? Give the xamples!

And for now

d).how did you start your sentences? Based on your current text , give the examples of sentences which begin from adjective , adverb , article ,
conjuntion , noun , preposition , & verb?

Adjective : -

Adverb : -

Article : -

Conjunction :

And for family

For now I have not openned a business because I’m still focused on college

Noun :
I might work for the biggest design company

I will have my own corporation

I will live in one of the biggest cities in indonesia

Preposition : -

Verb : -
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