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Writing Practice Summary Writing Practice (Making Visual Text and
Emotional Appeals, Narrative
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Subject Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Remarks
17th April 18th April 19th April 20th April 21st April
CCE/ Sexuality NA CCE 205 (Hall) NA CCE 205 (Classroom) NA
Ed / PWE Lower Secondary CW Lesson 4: About
Assembly the Cyberworld 2 –
[Safety and Handling Online
Graciousness Talk] Content and
Behaviour
Reflective questions, Reactions As you look at the students’ works, what concerns/pleases you?
How did you feel as you were . . . ?
R As you reflect on the lessons, what was exciting, surprising, or frustrating
What about the “What”? about . . . ?
Reflective Which activities/actions do you think fostered high engagement?
Interpretive questions, critical thinking: What could you have done/could you do to increase . . .?
What could you have done/could you do to minimize the undesirable . . . .?
I What other ways could you check for students understanding?
So What? What did you learn about yourself through this experience?
Interpretive
My Reflections
For this week’s reflection, I will be penning down some thoughts on my Lesson Observation with the Yunnan
Principals during one of my EL lessons with 205 in the media centre (at the Cybrary).
In terms of classroom management, I knew that holding lessons in the media centre warranted some re-jigging in
terms of their seating arrangement. This was when I devised a plan to structure the seating dynamic in a manner
that was most conducive for class (grouping a mixture of quieter and more vocal students together at the same
table for 4). I indexed this, by placing their journal books at their specific seats one period before the class started.
This worked brilliantly! As students streamed into the room, they were rather excited to find out where they were
going to sit. Of course, not all students were satisfied with where they were allocated, but with some urging and
coaxing, everyone took their places and class was ready to begin.
I began the lesson by playing a thought-provoking video titled “Can we auto-correct humanity”? I chose this video
as it spoke about technology and this is an issue that is close to most, if not all, teenagers’ hearts. The style of the
video featured a man verbalising a rhyme in a “rap” style with fascinating visuals and rather dramatic music in
accompaniment. My students from 205 were very engaged in viewing the video.
This was followed up with a class discussion on some words that they caught during the video. Students
responded with “self-worth”, “digital insanity”, “Anti-social network” and even abbreviations like “srs, lol and
smh”. This was fodder for rich discussion as I quizzed students on what these words meant to them and whether
they agreed or disagreed with the sentiments presented in the video.
The Yunnan principals left after about 15 minutes and class continued with a journal writing activity. Subsequently,
I received feedback that the principals found the lesson very engaging and smooth-going. They were also rather
taken with how comfortable the students were even as they were being observed. They were also impressed with
the standard of English that we have here in Singapore and were marvelling at how we manage to acquire both
English and Mandarin (for Chinese students).
In an online periodical on education, a feature article by Riedel (2014), titled “10 Major Technology Trends in
Education” ranked ‘Use for Videos for Classwork’ as number 3 out of 10 new tech trends. I was then acquainted
with the term “Khan Academy Effect” (coined by professionals working in Pixar animation film studios). This
described how the use of videos by teachers would inspire students to search up videos of similar content on their
own. This was quite insightful for me, as the power of motion pictures do indeed bear much significance in the
teaching and learning of the English Language. It also does much to spur self-directed learning in students.
The EL syllabus comprises skills such as viewing, listening, speaking and writing etc , with the former 2 skills
being receptive skills. I will endeavour to continue using videos as a teaching tool and will hone my craft in the
appropriate selection and editing of constructive videos to accrue the most beneficial learning outcomes for my
students.
The link to the aforementioned video and a screenshot is appended below for easy reference.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dRl8EIhrQjQ
Date: _______________________