We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can’t trust the

journalist. What do you think? And what do you think is the important qualities
that a journalist should have?
It is true that in the light of proliferation of information, accuracy tops all.
There is no doubt that news has a considerable bearing on our daily basis.
However, the mass remains devised over whether or not believing the news in
this day and age. Some people argue that news can provide us a host of
awareness the world over. While this is valid to a certain extent, I would argue the
press offers far more benefits and journalist should rest with the information
published.
On the one hand, it is understandable why people subscribe to the view
that reading news broaden our horizon. The key rationale in favor of this view is
that a whole latest trends and events taking place all over the world are always
recorded immediately and informed to the public, which enable the mass to grasp
the news instantaneously and have a fair and comprehensive outlook on world
situation. For example, in terms of stock market, all companies in relation to this
field always connect to the particular Web momently to follow the market-driven
economy and arrange their stock price. This is a testament to demonstrate how
the news empowers reader to be informed in tandem with rapid integration of
economic, political, cultural problems and to name but a few.
Turning to the side, nowadays, accurate information is not totally
guaranteed as some of journalists are insufficient utmost caution and inspection
prior to widespread the news. This results in abundant of damage in the
perception of individuals and organization due to having a biased prospective and
instill a twisted thought over the given information. Therefore, the ginger or
genuine deposition is indispensable attached to journalist to pursue their careers
in long term. If their temperaments are adverse, a number of damages can be
spawned attributed to material or mental value, even occurring violence among
hostile firms. It could be said that journalist or publishing company is instrumental
in the accuracy of news.
In conclusion, reading press brings people a wealth of knowledge and
benefits but journalist also have an adept competence good quality to take
charge of information published.
Cheers,
- Em có một điểm cộng là include được nhiều từ vựng nâng cao vào bài của mình.
- Chị đồng ý là dùng từ lv cao là cần thiết; tuy nhiên, việc dùng từ quá khó và thi
thoảng chưa đúng hoàn cảnh (collocation chưa đúng) khiến bài viết hơi khó đọc
và khó hiểu (lose your coherence).
Điều em có thể làm bây giờ: simplify your vocabulary, try to find the correct
collocation for each sentence, and explicit more on idea rather than using
advanced lexis.
Em thử viết lại bài này với từ vựng đơn giản hơn, ý tưởng rành mạch hơn và gửi
lại cho chị nhé. Cố lên!
Thân mến,
C Trà.