Name: Gửi anh Hiệu – 5.

5
Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Good!
Những từ sử dụng tốt Located in
In love with
Broaden my horizon
Let my hair down
A big fan of
Really into
Comfortable
Confide in
2 Fluency and coherence Good!
3 Grammatical range and I usually walking the coffee
accuracy Keep in my safe???
My friend and I chứ k nói là I and my friend
4 Pronunciation Family /l/
Absolutely /l/
Important trọng âm 2
Tra lại cách đọc từ Cement
Like không thêm âm đuôi s

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Name: Gửi em Đức – 4.5

Marking criteria
1 Lexical resources
2 Fluency and coherence
3 Grammatical range and
accuracy
4 Pronunciation
Comments
Good job!
Leisure time
On good terms with
I’m really into
Chill
All – time favorite
The heart of Hanoi
Let my hair down
Good
The bigger screen, the better quality it has
It doesn’t matter .., it is about ….
Convenient chữ.o âm ơ nhé em
Name: Tùng – 4.0
Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Favorite chưa parapharse
I like
No/ yes

2 Fluency and coherence Good

3 Grammatical range and Câu trả lời ngắn

accuracy THE staffs are, thiếu âm the

4 Pronunciation Because
Convenient
Delicious
Choice

Hiểu sai câu hỏi: DO you get on well with your family? => Trả lời sai
Name: My 5.5
Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Really into
All time favorite
Break a bank
Forté
I suppose
Coastal
Acquire reputation for
Up to the ear
Nerve – rạcking
Breath – taking
Crystal – clear
A variety of
2 Fluency and coherence Good
3 Grammatical range and Good
accuracy
4 Pronunciation Beach
Wonderful
Cuisine
Name: Thảo 5.0
Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources I’m a big fan/ I’m really into
Absolutely
Let my hair down
Forté
All – time favorite
Blow off some steams
Para: In my free time
2 Fluency and coherence Cần có thêm fluency, hay mất thời gian nghĩ
Good: On top of that
3 Grammatical range and I feel so stressed  Stressful (a)
accuracy Located ON nvc street
Which IS in the heart of
ON a regular basis
Tên địa điểm thì k cần The ( The highland)
4 Pronunciation Whích is âm đuôi
Basis âm đuôi s
Freeze âm đuôi

Name: Duyên 5.0

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources In the heart of
Go – to hobby
Let my hair down
Tiring day
A big fan of
Blow off some steams
Boiling – hot
Hospitable
2 Fluency and coherence Hay ầm ừ, chưa có từ thừa
3 Grammatical range and Good!
accuracy In June, not on June
4 Pronunciation Good!
Atmosphere âm s
Relative /e/
Memorable
Facebook âm đuôi s
Renowned trọng âm
Name: Tô Châu 5.0
Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Electronic bike
I suppose
Protect the environment
Certainly
Confide in
Go – to
On a daily basis
2 Fluency and coherence Ngập ngừng nhiều, phải nghĩ nhiều
Phần 2 hơi bị off – topic ( my mother cook for us)
3 Grammatical range and Good!
accuracy
4 Pronunciation Hamburger trọng âm 1

Name: Huyền 5.5

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Well,
Rural areas
Moutainous
Absolutely
Hectic schedule
Thrilling
Roughly 2 hours
Diversity of floral and fauna
In the heart of
Cup of tea
2 Fluency and coherence Good!
3 Grammatical range and We always had a wonderful time in here  We always have
accuracy a wonderful time there
4 Pronunciation Stunning thiếu âm s
Access trọng âm đầu
Province trọng âm 2
Back âm e bẹt

MỞ BÀI chưa nói về

Name: Đức Anh 5.0

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Well, You know
Must – have items
Cement the relationship
Memorable
Lanscape
Well – preserved
Relic
Para: Popular
2 Fluency and coherence Good!
3 Grammatical range and One or two in a year  Once or twice
accuracy ON special theater
4 Pronunciation Cement
Package tour
Trip âm đuôi
South east asia
Foreigners

Name: Thu 4.5

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Live on a tight budget
Confide
Cement the relationship
Conveniently located
Hectic schedule
Have a reputation for
Pay attention to
Supportive
I’m really into
Let my hair down
2 Fluency and coherence
3 Grammatical range and The most???
accuracy
4 Pronunciation Because

Name: Trang 4.0

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Cần sử dụng nhiều từ vựng hơn
Let my hair down
Really into
2 Fluency and coherence Cần cải thiện hơn
3 Grammatical range and My favorite hobby is play badmintons  Playing
accuracy It is bored => Boring
It is at Ecopark town  It is located in …..
4 Pronunciation Weekend
Delicious

Name: Phượng 4.5

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Let my hair down
In my spare time
Unwind
Blow off some steams
A wide range of
Renowned
Big fan of
2 Fluency and coherence Good!
3 Grammatical range and Good
accuracy Who is talent like his  Who is talentED like HIM
4 Pronunciation Hay thêm âm s ở đuối, phải
Spare
Drama
Usually thành âm n
Certainly âm l thành n âm
Evening
Broadcast
Scene – stealer
Sense of humor

Name: Dương 4.5

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources In the outskirt of
Hectic schedule
Not my forté
Boiling hot
Attentive
On a tight budget
2 Fluency and coherence Hay à ờ
3 Grammatical range and After I graduating => In the future, when I graduate
accuracy After a exam => After the exam
It iS
4 Pronunciation Graduate
Post âm ơu
Is âm đuôi
Name: Hiền 4.5
Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Unwind
Absolutely
Certainly
I vividly remember
Bustling
Let my hair down
2 Fluency and coherence À ờ nhiều
3 Grammatical range and I come from in Hanoi
accuracy Beautiful decorate  decoration
4 Pronunciation Good!

Name: Tuyên 5.0

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Movie goer
Let my hair down
To be honest
Protect the environment
Busy as a bee
Not really
All-time favorite
In the heart of the city
Live on a tight budget
Artificial
Inspirational sayings
Incredibly good
Afforable
Cosy
2 Fluency and coherence Good! Cần thêm up and down
3 Grammatical range and For me AS A student
accuracy Feel LIKE home
4 Pronunciation Weekend
Because
Best âm đuôi
Think
Price âm đuôi
Atmosphere

Name: Linh 4.5

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Well
 Really into
Cement the relationship
My cup of tea
Journey
Boiling hot
Blow off some steams
2 Fluency and coherence Good! Còn chút ngắc ngứ
3 Grammatical range and I usually go shopping with MY mom
accuracy IT took me …. ( thiếu chủ ngữ IT của cô nhé)
4 Pronunciation Good
Off khác of

Name: Ngân 5.0

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Really into
On.a regular basis
Go to
Keep fit
Function
Occupied with my work
In comparison to …
Broaden my horizon
Blow off some steams
Confide in
Cement the relationship
Uniques
2 Fluency and coherence Good
3 Grammatical range and However, I do realize that => Good
accuracy I get stress => Stressful
Come back TO Thailand
4 Pronunciation Function âm s nặng
Journey
Similarities
Cheap âm đuôi
Hospitable

Name: Thiện 4.5

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources On good terms with
Well
Really Into
My cup of tea
Eye – catching
 Make my mouth watering
2 Fluency and coherence Good!
3 Grammatical range and I don’t have MUCH time
accuracy Support ME not for me
I would like to talk ABOUT
locateED on
4 Pronunciation Not at all khônhg nói sang âm n
Five minutes
Relax âm đuôi
Delicious
Such as âm đuôi
Orange juice
Juice
Staff âm đuôi

Name: Long 4.0

Marking criteria Comments
1 Lexical resources Let my hair down
Really into
All time favorite
Hectic schedule
Live on tight budget
It makes me mouth – watering
2 Fluency and coherence Nói nhỏ, còn ngập ngừng, nghĩ nhiều
3 Grammatical range and My hometown IS in Halong
accuracy One day a week  Once a week
4 Pronunciation Sure âm s nặng
Place âm đuôi s
Shop âm s nặng
Pretty âm i