1.

Can we give the girl straight long black hair and her skin just a little bit
darker so that she could be multi-ethnicities (e.g., Hispanic)? I want her to
appeal to as wide enough ethnicities as possible.
2. The bear needs to be brown like a mountain bear (see my insert on the 6th clip)
3. Speed up the tilt to the stars at the 7 sec mark to 2x (see my edit)
4. At the 24 sec mark do the wipe transition to the auditorium and then wipe from
the auditorium to the next shot
5. The boys facing her on court (32 sec mark) should have their arms folded
6. More air-time on her flying through the air to score (42 sec mark)
7. Have her swing around the basketball pole (47 sec mark)
8. Have the bear try to copy her bouncing the ball (103 sec mark), but he leans
over, bounces the ball and it hits him in the head on the way up, causing him to be
dazed with stars circling around his head
9. Have the bear do push ups next to her, but can't push himself up and falls on
his face
10. At the 1:10 sec mark, after she throws the ball, the bear tries to catch the
ball but it hits him on the head and he falls over
11. At 1:17 sec mark the bear watches her doing star jumps, sitting in a sun chair
drinking a milkshake with sunglasses on
12. At 1:20 sec mark, add a shot of the bear trying to balance on the basketball on
one foot, then loses balance and tumbles over
13. At 1:32 sec mark add a pan from left to right of her in her muscle pose
14. At 1:50 sec mark have the goalie leap to the right of the screen (instead of
left), and have the ball hit the back of the net (like in the lyrics of the song)
15. At the 1:59 sec mark can we have the boys lip sync to 'hey girl, we're ready to
yield?' (if it's too difficult don't worry)
16. At the 2:10 sec mark, have the bear try to copy the girl by lying on his back
and tapping the ball between his two hind feet
17. With the shot of the girl at the 2:59 mark (under the stars) have her smile
18. Lengthen the shots to replace any gaps
19. With shots that are repeated, try to change them up a bit by panning, zooming
etc so they don't look exactly the same