Dear Sir/Madam!

Thank you for sending your business plan to us! We have looked it through
and found out a few embarrassing issues. First of all, are you sure that the
idea with Japanese system, where CEO gets lower salary than employee is
really effective in your case? Secondly, I’m not really agree that investment
in advertising is applicable for your business plan because it is risky and
there is no guarantee that campaign would work.
If you are ready to rethink these points, we are glad to offer you an
agreement.
Waiting for your response.

Sincerely,
Daria Kirilenko