Writing Assessment
Teacher’s name:
Name: Baltazar Alexander Vasquez Alor Date: 08/04/2020
Do you agree with the statement below?
We have more free time than ever before, but we spend most of it in front of
the television
Brainstorming:
why we have more free time than in the past
How people spend / waste their free time.
In the present text, we will talk about people's hobbies, taking for granted
the fact that in the past technology was not a good shared by all human
beings, for which reason it was only developed with greater precision in
1st world countries, for which Many of the hobbies were developed
through the interaction between people, giving like them games where all
the participants were involved, among them we have soccer, volleyball,
board games, etc.
We have a great difference between the distribution of the times we
develop on a daily basis, which is why many of the people have a
tendency to carry out a single activity throughout the day, currently in the
21st century, we can observe the great technological evolution , through
which we have televisions, cell phones, laptops, as well as we have
tendencies to new activities which are categorized as leisure, for example,
Play Station, Nintendo wi, online pc games, etc.
That is why I have just finished this text, it can be concluded that
technology in our century advances in an accelerated way, so it can be
beneficial but at the same time it can harm the fact of how life is carried
out on a daily basis.
Organization / 5 Content / 5 Language use / 5 Communicative Score / 20
Achievement / 5