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Creative Writing
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Problem Statement
Proofread the provided text and identify the errors if any.
Tasks:
Read the following paragraph carefully. Read the paragraph more than once.
Identify errors in spelling, punctuation and verb forms.
Note down errors in the table provided below. Some sample errors have been given below for
your reference.
Avalanches
An avalanche ocurrs when a layer of snow becomes unstable, collapses and slides downhill. Avalanchs
can cause extensive damage to things in it’s path. There is several things that can cause a avalanche; a
steep slope, a week layer in the snow cover, or a trigger such as an earthquake or animal movment.
Did you know that avalanches can reach speeds of 250 miles per hour. Just seconds after an avalanche, the
snow quickly turn into ice and freezes hard as concrete.
The united states ranks fifth in the world when it comes to avalanche danger. One of the deadliest
avalanches in american history took place in Washington’s Cascade Mountains. In march, 1910, an
avalanche sweeped away trains and killed 96 people.
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