Dear Sir

Many thanks for your email and paper.

In my iPad I can not go through it thoroughly, but
with a quick glance I can offer some advice. Firstly,
it is essential that you include up to date references,
ie 2018 and 2019 at the latest. Stating the novelty in
your work is also vital. What is different in your work
compared with what has been done before. Also,
please avoid unnecessary capitalisation.

I can provide more focussed advice when I return to

the uk.

Unless you revise your paper in the meantime.

All the best

Clive