Perez 1

Andrea Perez

Professor Ditch

English 113B

11 May 2020

Comments From Project Text

1. Check mark

2. Thoughtful title

3. Italicize

4. For

5. Needs MLA format

6. Yes, but even more so he doesn’t want her to marry a man like Mark

7. Well, that’s hard to say. He doesn’t officially come out, but his dear ones know.

8. Add a transition

9. MLA format?

10. Theres too much going on in this paragraph. Focus on one area and analyze it. Then start

a new paragraph for a new point.

11. Same here. Break up the analysis into separate paragraphs- organization issue.

12. Check mark