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What will happen in your story?

Me and my friends are camping in my backyard but hear a scream in the middle of the night and
decide to go check. But we find out something horrible.

Who is the main character?

Me and three of my best friends. The villain of the story is the crazy person from the town.

Where does it take place?

The story begins in my backyard but ends in the cemetery.

When does it all take place?

In the middle of the night.

Why did the main character end up in the scary situation?

Because they decided to go look when they heard a scream.

Which details will be in your story?

Descriptive adjectives.

How does the story end?

It’s a surprise.

Bloody camping night.


Susanne, Pleun, Abby and Noortje are camping in Susanne’s backyard. They’re having a lot of fun and
can’t stop laughing. Until they hear a high-pitched scream, coming from the streets. The four girls look at
each other and then nod. Noortje opens their tent and walks in front. They have a hard time looking
because it’s all foggy and dark, but when Abby steps in a dark, sticky puddle, the girls have the scare of
their lives. With a flashlight they shine on the puddle, only to discover it is a large puddle of blood.
‘Maybe it’s from the girl we heard.’ Says Pleun. Susanne nods her head, ‘Don’t think like that, it could be
an animal as well.’ They look over to the other side of the road and see a whole trail of blood, leading to
the entrance of the cemetery. After a short period of doubt they decide to go take a look. Before they
make it to the cemetery they hear a deep laugh, almost out of a horror movie. A couple of seconds later
they hear a hard bang sound. When they finally arrive to the cemetery they see a big man, bend over a
body. The girls decide to split up in two, and one group walks all across the side of the cemetery, so the
man won’t notice them. Susanne and Abby go together and sneak up behind the man, and when they
get close they see that the body is a women, but there isn’t much left over. The man is humming a song
and digging a hole. Suddenly one of the girls make a noise and the man turns around and notices them.
The girls decide to scream, so Noortje and Pleun know somethings up. ‘Well what do we have here,
some intruders. ‘I can’t have some little girls who’ve seen what I have done. Do you girls understand
what that means?’ The man comes closer and grabbed his knife, that is still covered in blood. He begins
to softly scrape Abby’s skin and she loses a lot of blood. But then out of nowhere, Pleun and Noortje
show up and hit the man on the head with the shovel he left on the ground. He’s unconscious. Susanne
calls the cops and an ambulance for Abby. The man goes to jail and the girls get psychological help after
the incident. Abby has to stay in the hospital for a few days to recover form her wounds. But after all,
they live happily ever after.

THE END

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