Purpose for the lesson – why are we writing today?
We are writing to make sense of the world around us right now
• We are using a model to guide writers LEARNING FOCUS
WHAT ARE WE LEARNING
TODAY? We are learning to recognize a structure in a piece & what impact deliberate structure can have.
We are learning to use a model text
and ‘piggyback’ ideas to make sense of our lockdown experience - What are some of your favourite words or sentences? WHAT DID YOU DO IN YOUR BUBBLE? VERBS ARE DOING WORDS…. WRITE (JOT DOWN) 5 OR MORE THINGS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY DID.
THESE CAN BE WORDS OR SENTENCES.
WRITING TIME… JOT YOUR IDEAS DOWN THIS IS YOUR FIRST DRAFT What do you notice about the structure of the poem… how is it written? And we stayed home And created And we stayed home And chattered And we met our pets again And adapted And we found our toys again We learnt new skills, made up new And paid for less, but spent more time games, laughed, cried together. We experimented, exercised and played Sometimes we questioned when it would like only kids do end. Sometimes we argued, but then made Sometimes we wondered if we wanted it to, up Sometimes the days went fast and And we promised to remember what we had other times slow learned We found our new families way of life When the world became small. We will get through this together. Greig Stephen Jennie Sands
What are some of your favourite words or sentences?
WRITING TIME… Success criteria – I will have... • 4-5 verbs that tell us about your lockdown
• a poem written in the past
tense
• Showed personal voice
throughout the writing & loosely followed the structure SHARE YOUR POEM Check the success criteria….