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I feel happy when the things I want go well for me, because that means I am doing things the

right way. I am also happy when I share time with the people I love, like my family and

friends. I am happy with them because it is nice to live with the people who support you and

appreciate you, and give you their love without anything in return. Also, I am happy when

they do well and they are well, there is no greater happiness than seeing the people you love

well. In the same way I am happy when my mom cooks my favorite food, when it rains, when

I see the starry sky, things that make me feel that I am alive.

NOTE: NO MORE THAN THREE COMMAS IN A PARAGRAPH.

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