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A Critic at Large
Drive, He Wrote
By Louis Menand
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Holmes thought that Beats were optimists, risk-takers, seekers—young people with
“a desperate craving for belief.” (US quote-style punctuation) Writer John Clellon Holmes
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Writer John Clellon Holmes, disillusioned by the Cold War and fascinated to the point of
obsession with how his generation should be living their lives, saw the Beats as ‘optimists,
risk-takers, seekers—young people with “a desperate craving for belief”’ (Menand 2007).
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In fact, the characters in “On the Road” spend as short a time on the road as they can.
They’re not interested in exploring rural or small-town America. Speed is essential. The men
rarely even have time to chase after the women they run into, because they’re always in a
hurry to get to a city. A lot of the book takes place in cities, particularly New York, Denver,
and San Francisco, but also Los Angeles, New Orleans, and Mexico City. Even there, the
characters are always rushing around. They are
The characters in Jack Kerouac’s novel On the road are not interested in exploring the
scenery or countryside they are driving through; they scarcely seem to have the time or
inclination to chat up the women they meet. They are always in a hurry to get back on the
road and move on to the next city and the next city (Menand 2007).
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Louis Menand (2007), critic for The New Yorker, explains that the characters in Jack
Kerouac’s novel On the Road are not interested in exploring the scenery or countryside they
are driving through; they scarcely seem to have the time or inclination to chat up the
women they meet. They are always in a hurry to get back on the road and move on to the
next city and the next city.
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Cassady was an uncanny cross between James Dean and W. C. Fields—a screwup with a
profile, a stud with an endless supply of goofy gab. There is sufficient testimony concerning
his sexual endowment to overcome the skepticism normally advisable on that topic. Some
people who knew and liked him called him a con man (and many people, including
Burroughs, disliked and avoided him), but this seems misleading. Cassady was a serial
seducer, and, therefore, inveterately untrustworthy.
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Cassady was an uncanny cross between James Dean and W. C. Fields—a screwup with a
profile, a stud with an endless supply of goofy gab ... Some people who knew and liked him
called him a con man ... but this seems misleading. Cassady was a serial seducer, and,
therefore, inveterately untrustworthy. (Menand 2007)
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Menand, Louis 2007, ‘Drive, he wrote: What the Beats were about’, The New Yorker, 1
October, viewed May 31, 2017, <http://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2007/10/01/drive-
he-wrote >.
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