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PARAGRAPH 1 arise vegetation problems.

As a result, the lands


have endured more extreme soil erosion because
Linh: The first reason for this issue is that people
tree roots no longer hold the soil in place. In
move into new areas and clear land for
short, fertile lands turn to be desert stem from
agriculture by cutting down trees. To give more
tree cutting for agriculture, which leads the lands
detail, people, especially farmers clear land to
to not holding soil in the place.
grow plants or sell wood for money. Without
trees, the land will surfer from drier climate and
strong wind that breaks land's structure. Evidence
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shows that every land without trees has the rate
of drier climate rising about 15% per year. Moreover, when the tree roots do not hold the
Seriously, this fact leads to the reality that the soil in place, the topsoil will be washed away
tree roots no longer hold the soil in place. This when there is heavy rain. To be more specific, the
means most of nutrients in land will be blown function of roots is holding the soil together.
away. In brief, desertification firsly results from Once the roots are gone, the structure of the top
the reason that people clear land for agriculture, soil is broken. Then after a flood or storm, there
which puts the land into not holding soil in place. will be no soil left, which consists of organic,
nutrient-rich materials, in the top of the fertile
Kiều: The first reason is that people move into
land.
new areas andclear land for agriculture by cutting
down trees. That means, the farmers who have
no arable land cut trees to have land to cultivate.
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As a result, without trees, the tree roots no
longer hold the soil in the place. When it rains Ngọc: Because the tree roots dont hold the soild
heavily , the soil will erod and the fertile land will in place, the tosoil washes away during heavy
also be drifting. This is one of the main reason rains. You know that the trees prevent the soil
causing fertile land becomes desert. from washing away thank to thier roots holding
the soil in position. Without the forest, the
Phú: The first reason for this issue is that people
ground can be washed or be blown easily by the
move into new areas and clear land for
water and the wind whenever there are flood or
agriculture by cutting down trees. It comes as no
heavy rains. For ex, each year in VN, with 1
surprise that when people, especially ethnic
hectare of land without forest will have 173 tons
minorities, immigrants move into new areas, they
of tosoil washes away while the one covered by
are prone to clear lands by cutting down trees. In
plants only has 1 tons. As a result, if the trees
fact, tree roots anchor the soil, without trees, the
soil is free to wash or blown away, which can
countinue being cut down gradually, there is no acre per year. As a result, there is no good soil left
good soil to grow crops in. for crops to grow in.

Chi: In addition to the causes that make fertile 1st collection: P: In addition, topsoil erosion
land desert, topsoil erosion during heavy rain during heavy rains is one of the most dangerous
plays a role as well. In fact, only the first layer in process lead in fertile land becomes desert.
topsoil can provide the best growing condition for
M: Researchers have pointed out that among the
plants, because it contains a rich amount of
five layers of soil, only the first layer n topsoil can
humus and minerals. However, heavy rains has
provide the best growing condition for plants for
washed away the topsoil- the most nutrient layer.
they contain a rich amount of humus and
As a result, there is no good soil to crops grow in.
minerals.
Phượng: In addition, topsoil erosion during heavy
N: However, due to the decreasing in the number
rains is one of the most dangerous process lead in
of trees, the amount of washed-away nutrient.
fertile land becomes desert. As you know, only
the topsoil which is the most nutrient layer can (P: Cutting down many trees has caused the
provide the best growing for plants. Cutting down decline of topsoil because trees' roots holding the
many trees has caused the decline of topsoil soil in position)
because trees' roof is helpful to prevent topsoil
M: For example, the United States alone loses
from washing away. In particular, each year in
almost 3 tons of topsoil per acre per year.
VN, with 1 hectare of land without forest will
have 173 tons of tosoil washes away while the (N: In particular, each year in VN, with 1 hectare
one covered by plants only has 1 tons. As a result, of land without forest will have 173 tons of tosoil
if the trees countinue being cut down gradually, washes away while the one covered by plants
there is no good soil to grow crops in. only has 1 tons)

Minh: In addition to the chain that makes fertile M: As a result of topsoil erosion, there is no good
land dessert, topsoil erosion happens during soil left for crops to grow in.
heavy rain. Researchers have pointed out that
(N: As a result, if the trees countinue being cut
among the five layers of soil, only the first layer n
down gradually, there is no good soil to grow
topsoil can provide the best growing condition for
crops in.)
plants for they contain a rich amount of humus
and minerals. However, due to the decreasing in
the number of trees, the amount of washed-away
topsoil also increases. For example, the United
States alone loses almost 3 tons of topsoil per

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