Fugue

Bar 4 – Be careful of the minor slip

Bar 17 – 18 played the notes correctly, however be careful with the wavering speed – Practice this
then record again. If the speed is still wavering. Keep repeating until you’re confident. Make sure
your next recording has this line with you playing it confidently

Bar 22 – Notes F# which you fixed. If you are recording. You need to restart the recording again, if
you are making a minor mistake like this

Bar 25 – Watch out for the wrong note.

Overall, needs better execution as it’s a recording. You can record multiple times and review it
yourself to see what mistakes you’re making. Record more takes until you get one which is more
accurate

Larghetto –

Bar 8. Can’t hear the B at the start of the ornament – Restart recording if you are making small
mistakes like this

Bar 15 and 19 are too indecisive. Kind of waiting too long. Sounds like you’re unsure?

Careful with bar 27, playing the right hand too early.

Bar 38 Slip up on the left hand

Bar 43 . Wrong note on beat one. Should be a D not a C . Restart

Prelude – Bar 12 left hand . Should be an A not a C – Should restart recording

Bar 27 – too much hesitation – Should restart recording

Bar 32 – notes B instead of Bb - fine to keep going sounded like a slip up

Sonata

Bar 1 turn was too rushed – Restart

Bar 12

Bar 17 – Turn is not clear enough

Bar 42 – from the Gsharp to the D was a bit too rushed

Bar 68 The stacatissimo parts were not played

Bar 79 You need to count. Be patient. When you go from the left hand to the right hand it’s too
rushed (comes too early). Review this and count this in the recording and see how you need to
correct this.
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Bar 22 run wrong – restart

Bar 27 notes in the run were wrong – restart

Bar 34 hitting wrong notes - restart

Same with bar 82 – restart

Tuplets were great.

Allegro

Bar 2 – Early slip up. Must restart

Bar 12 – played the right notes. Execution should be more relaxed and more of you in control of your
fingers

Bar 31: Loosing a bit of your pacing here - Bar 39 Started to get way way way faster  This and
the lead up to the trill part sped you up more. This caused the next lines to be far too strained on
your wrists which threw your pacing off

Bar 45 was a good recovery in pacing

69 -72 . Listen to your pacing. Did you speed up? Isolate and practice

Bar 102 and 104 appoggiatura, you might be playing it as an acciaccatura instead?

137 – 145 – Listen to your pacing and focus on the control of your fingers. Are you in control? Or is
ths momentum causing you to be not in control and speeding you up in reaction

Bar 141 – Same thing as previous

Bar 146 to 156 – More of a relaxed and control – Focus on this part heavily when you are practicing
this piece.

The ending bars were fine, pretty good, however watch out for the speed of the trill. You are making
it too fast which affects your pacing of the next notes.