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1. PREWRITING
Look at your responses to the survey on page 23. Then complete these additional
survey questions.
Rate these types of music from 1-9 (1 being your favorite, 9 your least favorite).
__ yes x__ no
__ CDs x
3. PEER FEEDBACK
Meet with a partner and read each otherʼs paragraph. After reading the paragraph,
complete the Peer Feedback Checklist below. Then give your partner your feedback.
Yes No
s to make it more interesting. a. _yes,because is about music and topics about music always are interesting_______________________________
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e parts that are not clear and suggest ways to make them clearer.
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s are clear______________________________________________
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ulary correctly? If no, circle the words that are used incorrectly.
time and place correctly? Underline the sentences with errors.
ncorrect punctuation?
nd the incorrect punctuation.
4. REWRITING
Tell your partner to revise his or her paragraph based on your feedback. Revise your
paragraph based on your partner's feedback.
PARAGRAPH
I like a lot the music, specially the pop and sacred music because other type of music
are very noisy, my favorite type of music is this because I can find peace and security,
this is the eart why I like listen to this type of music.