Title: Typologies and Extent of Compliance among Selected Households on the Rainwater Harvesting Ordinance of Davao City (No.
0298-09) Series of 2009
Researchers: Addie Mae S. Wong and Marcellie Angelique Jane O. Velez
Comments/ Suggestion of Panelist Actions Taken Pages where changes can be
located Title Page, Abstract, Acknowledgement Ma’am Jessa Mae B. Suico Title Page : Change the date Sir Beleno Abstract: Change paragraph 1 Changed the statement into Abstract “extent of compliance” State the problematic before Stated the problematic situation Abstract stating the Matina Aplaya Use the theory individually and Used the theory individually and Abstract not state centered. not state-centered In the third paragraph major Revised the paragraph Abstract problem should answer your questions. Chapter 1 Maam Suico Add the Typologies in the Changes were acted accordingly p. 4 background of the study Use the typology to explain the compliance. Counter the act the state intervention in terms of compliance. Going against the theory given with the situation Add the problematic situation in Changes were acted accordingly p. 4 the background and why does it lead to the study of typologies Enter the grasp of the theory. Changes were acted accordingly. p. 6 The bases of your theory Objectives of the study: Class of Changed into ”Annual Income p. 4 dwelling change to annual income Delete the conceptual Already deleted the conceptual Framework framework Sir Beleno Change will to would. Past tense. Changed the word into “would” p. 8 Change the conceptual Deleted the conceptual framework. Add the variables framework Explain the conceptual Deleted conceptual framework framework Significance: Residents of Davao Changes were acted based on the p. 7 City: What is the benefit of the suggestion given residents out of your study? Academe: Rephrase Already acted. p. 7 Scope: Delete statement 3 Changes were made p. 8 Alphabetize op. def. Alphabetized the op. def. p. 9 Chapter 2: RRL Ma’am Suico Explain the theory individually inserted Localizing norms and p. 18 importance of compliance. Explain the compliance before Inserted compliance p. 17 the synthesis. Insert norm localization Inserted norm localization p. 18 Sir Beleno Combine of Articles related in Okay madam, done. RRL National Level Insert Norm Localization Inserted norm localization p. 18 Synthesis: Make proper Changed the statements into p. 19 sentences sentences Chapter 3: Methodology Unit of analysis: change it to Changed the unit of analysis into p. 20 individual individual Ethical consideration: make it Changed into past tense p. 23 past tense Chapter 4: Sir Beleno Revise the first paragraph Revised the first paragraph p. 25 Page 30. Support your claim Changes were done accordingly. p. 31 about “none of the respondents were aware” What are your basis of the theory Changes were made. p. 32 for saying that a certain statement is coincidental or treaty-induced? Establish the question so that it Changes were made based on p. 32 will be more believable that the the suggestion of the panelist statement belongs to coincidental or treaty-induced. Discuss it in your paper. Explain how you came up with Already explained p. 32 neither. Extent of compliance: what is your definition with extent of compliance? Put Title on Table 10 Put Typologies vs. Compliance No explanation for table 11 and Explanation were already p. 37 12 provided. Table 9. no. 6 change “Always” Changed into “Often” p. 34 Ma’am Suico Explain how you were able to Changes were made P. 30 know the reasons of compliance Out of this data what does your Changes were made p. 32 theory say about it? So what does that mean is they fall on coincidental ? What does your RRL say about Yes maam p. 10 first paragraph. this situation? Do you have data in your RRL that explain the situation? Your chapter 4 lacks explanation Added explanation p. 26 on explaining the situation. For example you have identified their typologies and then what? What do we do after identifying their typologies? How do you make sense of the typology as a researcher of the study? What does it say about the compliance of the respondents? What does it say about the power of the states to the compliance? Being a coincidental compliant what does say, what are its effect in terms of the law? What does it mean if the Each table were explained well p. 26 compliance falls on the mid- according to the suggestion of level? What does it entail? How the panelist. can you say that it is moderate? Explain it well. How do you make sense of mid-level compliance? Put descriptors. Added descriptors Chapter 5 Sir Beleno Anchor chapter 5 in your theory. Changes were made p. 42 Use the results in your recommendation Maam Suico Use the results of the study to Changes were acted accordingly. recommend. Not just based on the significance.