WRITING ASSIGNMENT – INGLES I

JAIRO ALBERTO VILLAMIZAR GELVEZ

CÓDIGO: 1090436515

TUTOR:
LUZ DARY GUZMAN PEREZ
INGLES I
GRUPO: 90008_48

UNIVERSIDAD NACIONAL ABIERTA Y A DISTANCIA

ESCUELA DE CIENCIAS AGRÍCOLAS PECUARIAS Y DEL MEDIO AMBIENTE
PROGRAMA DE INGENIERÍA AMBIENTAL
CEAD BUCARAMANGA
JULIO DE 2017
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Individual Postcard

Hello Dear friend!

I hope you have a great day, I want to tell you about my favorite place and I hope you visit me
as we had planned.

This is my favorite place, it´s the town of San Juan de Girón in Santander, it´s a very nice place,
calm and with a colonial architecture very visited throughout the year. This is a tourist place of
Santander, where visitors can walk along it`s old streets and to see wonderful landscapes. The
town has a beautiful church, big and with a unique architecture, also there is restaurants where
the food is delicious and economical. I enjoy this place but the visitors are generating solid
waste that to remove beauty to the town, So it´s necessay to have more environmental
conscience to protect beautiful places like this.

Dear friend, I wish you can understand the beauty of this place and the reason why I want you
to see it.

Jairo Alberto Villamizar Gelvez

Phone: 3115974841
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Postales propuestas

My name is Jairo and in this picture I am in the town of giron in Santander. I am wearing a black
shirt with jeans and sports shoes. The town is a very nice place, calm and with a colonial
architecture very visited throughout the year. This is a tourist place of Santander, where visitors
can walk along it`s old streets and to see wonderful landscapes. The town has a beautiful
church, big and with a unique architecture, also there is restaurants where the food is delicious
and economical. I enjoy this place but the visitors are generating solid waste that to remove
beauty to the town, So it´s necessay to have more environmental conscience to protect beautiful
places like this.

Retroalimentación de las postales propuestas

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Sneyder Moreno Ardila:

Aporte 1: The postcard is very beautiful and well elaborated, which meets the requirements of
the activity guide.

Aporte 2: Uses structures appropriately and apostrophes

Aporte 3: I recommend using a darker color for the letter, that way it will look better

Gloria Ximena Quintero:

Aporte 1: The postcard is very beautiful and well elaborated, which meets the requirements of
the activity guide.

Aporte 2: The structures used are very good

Aporte 3: The expression it is a lovely place, quiet and where you can have a family day out,
you can adjust it to a lovely place, quiet and where you can have a family day, to eliminate the
expression out.

María Fernanda Aparicio:

Aporte: Comrade your postcard is very well elaborated and also integrates all the necessary
structures to describe this wonderful place, congratulations.

Joan Sebastian Sierra:

Aporte: Companion your postcard is well elaborated, it complies with the requirements of the
guide, I would only advise you to review the structures It`s better, since the postcard appears
ITS, it would also be better not to work all in capital letters, thank you.

Propuesta de oraciones

Desccription of the place

 It is a beautiful place called Cabo San Juan in the National Park Tayrona and is very
tourist.
 It is a place with wonderful beaches, nice islands and crystal clear waters.
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Referencias Bibliográficas

Universidad Nacional Abierta y a Distancia - UNAD. (2017) Syllabus del Curso Ingles I.
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