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Mascenon, Mallari  When discussing the problem make it more about the poor as the oppressed ones caught in the cross fire of the drug war and
not the drug addicts
 In the spiel at the beginning of the film make it more about how media desensitizes us, how it becomes a screen that makes
us not see the reality of how bad the situation is
 Show how you used Filipino inspirations in the design of the characters and world building
Alcazaren, Marquez, Pacampara  Pls make it clear in the beginning what the movie is about by making the intro and the rationale talk about themes that are
seen in the movie itself, funnel and narrow their possible interpretations
Remulla  Finalize paper
Ocampo, Puzon  use a different word rather than “encompassing”
 Pls make it clear in the beginning what the movie is about by making the intro and the rationale talk about themes that are
seen in the movie itself, funnel and narrow their possible interpretations
Abello, Oliver, Romero  Pls state your conclusion the favorable outcome
Cruz  Pls make the introduction of the problem short and sweet
 Spend time conceptualizing how best to show the collaterals, show the order of it’s launch (ad calendar)
 Make sure it’s more the showcase of your output and not the company A Quest
Balmes, Ramos  Spend time conceptualizing how best to show the collaterals, show the order of it’s launch (ad calendar)
 Spend time conceptualizing how best to show the collaterals, show the order of it’s launch (ad calendar)

Rivera  Streamline the presentation highlight the important parts of the book
 Make sure to make it fit the 30mins
Cellano, Garcia, Quito  Preserve the mystery of the twist make sure the presentation is 30 mins only

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Cruz, Leonardia, Quintano  Specify in design rationale that the struggle of the case studies is their immobility being confined mostly at home
Santiago, Rhys  Change title slide with your documentary title
 Make presentation focus on the idea that having a religious belief benefits mental health
 Rehearse and use note cards, make it short but sweet
Cobarubias, Paminiano, Novencido  Rehearse presentation and think of a creative way to demonstrate the product
Junio  Put captions in the pictures / summarize conclusion
Arevalo, Disoma  Pls edit to 12-15mins
 Pls illustrate with motion graphics the important points of the expert’s explanation
Ganas  Too wordy, make more visual, rely on note cards and summarize
 Work on the product demo, highlight how the planner is intended to be used, foreground its interesting features
Esquejo  Make it all seem connected, curate all the materials in such a way that they see the over arching plan

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Estorque, Obre  Revise design objectives why is it created the way it is, why is the film happening in a café?
 Why is the first webisode static in the camera’s treatment
Moran  Make a more convincing explanation as to why you are using lenticular images to show the bisexual struggle
 Pls prepare what you have to say and rehearse
Morales, Suarez  Pls emphasize what you are bringing new to the table
 Would it help to have a baby doll?
Carpio, Revita  Pls think of a way to make the demonstration of the graphic novel more interesting
 STORY 1: Sometimes you might not be aware that your apathetic
 STORY2: Apathy can be overcome with small interactions
 STORY3: Apathy is a passing phase you have
 STORY4: Apathy can be overcome through self-care
Guinto, Hidalgo, Javina  Work on the presentation of the collaterals and the sequence of the campaign
Pangan Ibanez  Work on the presentation of the collaterals and the sequence of the campaign