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Research Essay Draft 1
Research Essay Draft 1
Carolina Mull
Prof Johnson
English 1201
July 31 2020
Teenage Depression
Have you ever wondered why so many people look back on their high school years and
strongly express how they would never want to relive it? Well, one of the reasons why could
be due to the strong emotions they felt throughout their four high school years. The stress of
schoolwork constantly being assigned and always being surrounded by peers who seem like
people worth trying to impress creates a lot of things to deal with especially for young adults
still developing and figuring out who they are and who they want to be which can oftentimes
lead to depression or some form of depression or anxiety. It is common that many teens
struggle in high school due to depression but it appears that over time different forms of
teenage depression have spiked in today’s youth especially. High school students and young
adults suffer from depression more than other age groups due to the added stress from peers,
school, and other outside factors creating a mass epidemic of teenage suicide and an unhappy
younger generation. Figuring out the root of this worldwide illness seen in kids could provide
a much better understanding of depression and help many who struggle with it while in high
school.
Depression can be caused by many different factors such as trauma, living in a toxic
home life, bullying online or in person, having a chemical imbalance in the brain, and many
other causes. Depression stemmed from bullying is often one of the most talked-about causes
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of depression in teens in high school, but not enough attention is brought to the other causes.
Many do not even know that being born with a chemical imbalance in the brain can cause
depression for some struggling teens who feel that they have no reason to feel sad and are
frustrated and confused as to why they feel the way they do. Not having a known reason for
being upset all the time due to the chemical imbalance can make the young adult even more
upset because they feel they should not feel the way they do but cannot help the fact that they
still feel sad. Disrupting the balanced chemicals in the brain by the use of drugs and self-
medicating can also create an unbalance, and teens could develop depression from that as
well. In a Government analysis published by the Office of National Drug Control Policy,
titled “Teen Marijuana Use Worsens Depression: An Analysis of Recent Data Shows “Self-
Medicating” Could Actually Make Things Worse”, published in 2008, claims that “using
marijuana can cause depression and other mental illnesses” (Office of National Drug Control
Policy 2). This document claims that depression can be caused or even worsened in teens
from drug use. Marilyn Gemino also wrote in her article titled “Early Warning Signs of
Depression and Anxiety in Children”, “To cope with these symptoms, children and teens may
sometimes develop substance abuse issues as a form of coping mechanism, reports the
Substance Abuse and Mental Health Services Administration” (Gemino). Too many teens go
down this path and end up struggling all alone because many adults or caretakers overlook the
signs of depression symptoms and the importance of getting the right treatment needed for the
2020, www.newportacademy.com/resources/well-being/loneliness-in-young-people/.
This graph from the article titled “The Facts on Loneliness in Young People” written
by Jamison Monroe shows the importance of professional treatment prescribed by doctors and
how much of a significant difference it can make to those who struggle with depression,
stress, or anxiety. The use of the right medicine prescribed to the person in need has a much
Trauma also plays a large role in the cause of depression for some teens. Many teens in
China were found to have experienced at least some form of depression, along with PTSD and
anxiety in some cases, after living through traumatic earthquakes (qtd. In Chui et al.). In
Cheryl Chui and several others, explores scientific research on PTSD and depression found in
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teens after enduring the traumatic experience of the Wenchuan earthquake that occurred in
China. “Existing studies suggest that individuals who have been exposed to a traumatic event
such as a natural disaster experience a period of intense psychological” (qtd. in Chui et al.
36). This quote from the article states the question or claim that the article is looking into and
exploring scientific data on the topic and shows that depression has a high chance of
Although depression is very common and especially so in teens, not enough people are
aware or as informed as they should be, especially parents, peers, and all faculty and staff
working in the school environment. “From 2007 to 2017, the percentage of 12-to-17-year-olds
who had experienced a major depressive episode in the previous year shot up from 8 percent
teenagers went from 2 million to 3.2 million” (Julian). This quote taken from an article
written by Julian and published by The Atlantic proves the major influx of depression seen in
high schoolers that have occurred over time. And the numbers are not failing to continue their
constant incline even though many new ways being found to help teens cure or cope with their
Tweeten, Lon, and Alice Park. “Teens Are Getting More Depressed But Using Fewer
This chart found in the article titled “Teens Are Getting More Depressed But Using
Fewer Drugs” written by Lon Tweeten and Alice Park shows the difference in the rate of
depression seen in males and female adolescents in which it shows that the female young
adults from the age range of 12-17, have a higher percentage of depression than that of the
male young adults that age from 12-17 which could be evidenced used to prove that teenage
women and girls are more open about how they actually feel deep down whereas teenage boys
may also feel that way but have not expressed those emotions to others.
All high schools should provide more support for their students and give them the
resources that so many teens need but cannot get, but also, more importantly, communities
and adults who are around teens should become more unrestrained from having open
discussions with teens about depression and make the topic easier to address for the kids who
feel uncomfortable or scared to talk about how they feel. Jamison Monroe highlights in his
article titled “The Facts About Loneliness in Young People”, how the majority of the younger
generations feel the most alone. “73 percent of Generation Z sometimes or always feel alone”
(Monroe). Often teens feel like they have no one to talk to about how they feel causing them
to feel like they are all on their own. That feeling of isolation from everyone including friends
and family is what causes so many young adults to feel hopeless and utterly alone all while
trying to cope with a mental illness that they have almost no control over and is something
that could ultimately take full control over their lives and in the way they live day to day and
Without adult attention and support for the young adults struggling with depression,
these teens feel they have no way out of the sadness or numbness that they feel that is caused
by their depression, which can cause them to resort to self-harm and suicide. Many people
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who do not know how it feels like to be in the situation that young adults or really any person
understand why they would even consider such things which can lead to the teens going
through that to feel even more alone. Suicide, especially teenage or young adult suicide is far
worse than most people would have believed, and the number of suicides for the younger
generation is seen to be continuing to have a steady incline. In the article titled Teen
Depression”, written by Amita Shroff, the author states that “adolescent suicide is the second
leading cause of death, following accidents, among youth and young adults in the U.S. It is
estimated that 500,000 teens attempt suicide every year with 5,000 succeeding” (Shroff). The
author highlights how teen suicide is far more common than most people would think. This
article discusses and answers questions regarding teen depression, such as knowing the signs,
the effects, and causes that could be vital for some teen’s safety and well-being. Depression is
the leading cause of suicides in all age groups, but teen depression causes more suicides than
adults who experience depression and suicidal thoughts. Not enough people being informed
on the importance of making sure that teens are doing well mentally is a part of the huge
Doupnik, Stephanie. “I Treat Teens Who Attempted Suicide. Here's What They Told
mental-health-suicidal-thoughts-teens.
This graph from the article titled “I Treat Teens Who Attempted Suicide” written by
Stephanie Doupnik, published by Vox, shows the major increase in young adult suicides due
to depression that has increased drastically over the years. In 2017 this graph shows the peak
of the sharp incline of young adult suicides, proving the point that depression causes more and
more deaths, especially over the years, than most people would even take into consideration.
Making this fact, shown above in the graph that the teen suicide rates are still continuing to
skyrocket, a more publicized topic would increase the amount of attention and urgency of
action that this topic of depression would receive and decrease the numbers of deaths because
more people could reach out to others, such as family, friends, or other adults, to help them to
get the right treatment needed to prevent any more deaths from depression in the younger
generation and the older generation that deals with depression as well.
Depression can be caused in many different ways and comes with many different
symptoms but teens and adults alike who are struggling with it all deserve to receive help and
treatment for their depression. The school system and the adults in teenager’s lives should
become more aware of depression as a mental illness and not just them feeling down so their
school systems and work life rules and regulations can adapt and change to better things for
the young adults having to cope with their depression or anxiety so the number of teen suicide
cases do not continue to rise. With more and more people becoming fully aware or as much
aware as they can of the symptoms and causes, this new awareness could create a much safer
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and healthier environment for the young adults battling depression in today’s society and
social norms.
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Works Cited
Chui, Cheryl H. K., et al. “Predictive Factors of Depression Symptoms among Adolescents in the
18-Month Follow-up after Wenchuan Earthquake in China.” Journal of Mental Health,
vol. 26, no. 1, Feb. 2017, pp. 36–42. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1080/09638237.2016.1276542.
Doupnik, Stephanie. “I Treat Teens Who Attempted Suicide. Here's What They Told
Me.” Vox, Vox, 30 Oct. 2019, www.vox.com/the-highlight/2019/10/30/20936636/suicide-
mental-health-suicidal-thoughts-teens.
Gemino, Marilyn. Early Warning Signs of Depression and Anxiety in Children. 1 May 2019,
www.gardenoflife.com/content/early-warning-signs-depression-anxiety-children/?
mc_cid=2614657b69.
Teen Marijuana Use Worsens Depression [Electronic Resource] : An Analysis of Recent Data
Shows “Self-Medicating” Could Actually Make Things Worse. Washington, D.C. : Office
of National Drug Control Policy, 2008, 2008. EBSCOhost,
search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?
direct=true&db=edsgpr&AN=edsgpr.ocn469694837&site=eds-live.
Tweeten, Lon, and Alice Park. “Teens Are Getting More Depressed But Using Fewer
Drugs.” Time, Time, 12 June 2017, time.com/4811761/teens-depression-drug-abuse/.