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Chapter II
Matthew Arnold possibly best sums up Gray’s position when he writes in his
Essays in Criticism, “he never spoke out”.1 Thomas Gray has been regarded as a poet
Like Collins, Gray was swayed by conflicting literary forces. We find a marvelous
synthesis of classicism and romanticism, of form and content in Gray’s Poetry. On the
classical side, he has Pindaric odes to his credit, which was a great imitation of the
great Greek poet Pindar, who lived before Plato and evolved the form of ode known
after his name. The Pindaric ode has three parts - strophe, anti-strophe and epode. In
every Pindaric ode, there are three strophes and three epodes, to be repeated in a
cycle. It is a tribute to a great genius that he not only imitated but also mastered
Pindaric ode and his two odes The Bard and The Progress of Poesy is a testimony to
his craftsmanship. On account of this reason, some critics feel that Gray’s genius is
primarily disciplined.
Gray's poetry, though scanty in volume, is of the highest quality. The starting
line by Matthew Arnold, that "Gray never spoke out", had hit the nail on the head,
when he further says that the scantiness of Gray's poetry results from the fact that he,
"a bom poet who fell upon on age of prose."2 What is pertinent is the quality of what
he did produce.
And any competent and impartial critic has never disputed this. Finicky^ritics
indeed pick holes in Gray's poetry on the score of its readymade diction,
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personifications and other conventions of the classical school, but they are trivial
things and only show that Gray was a poet of his times and would not or could not
shake himself entirely free from the shackles of the prevailing lashion. But that, he
was discontented with it, is clear. He avoided the couplet altogether in favour of
lyrical measures. That he was romantic in feeling is equally clear, but he expressed it
restraint that gives his poetry its unique character. Gray was a very painstaking and
conscientious artist. Everything he has written has elegance, conciseness, clarity and
artistic finesse that place him in the front rank of English poets. It is sheer pedantry,
To this extent the famous criticism of Gray by Matthew Arnold is justified: the
age could give the poet little society that was really congenial. Gray was not antisocial
in the general meaning of the term; he was a rare jewel that needed care in the setting,
a picture that would not fit into every frame. But it is doubtful if any other age could
have provided Gray with a circle of congenial friendship greater than his own. He is
by no means the only poet driven to seek solitude. But where Gray’s affections were
roused they were real and constant. His letters to Wharton, Nicholls, and even to
Mason, show how deep and unforgetful was his friendship. “Spenser was among his
favourite poets; and he told me,” says Nicholls; “he never sat down to compose poetry
But Gray’s love of solitude, of cultured seclusion, his contempt for the world
at large, did not blind him to the good in human nature. It is significant that his
sympathies with humanity are stirred by children as in his Eton Ode, or by the
humblest people as in his Elegy. “I never rightly understood Mr. Gray’s political
of the people.”4 Such was the opinion of Horace Walpole; and Gray’s poetry
corroborates the remark. Behind Gray’s cold and stiff exterior, beneath his contempt
for humanity at large, there lay hidden, but occasionally revealed, a warmth and
breadth of sympathy for his fellows, far more real than that of some much more
his temperament, and so he tried to overcome it. He wished to enter the broad stream
of humanism, which rolled through the eighteenth century like a river, broadening and
deepening and gathering force as it went along, and his letters show that the words
recognizable eighteenth century genre. He gave England some poems, which are
among the most popular in the language. Ailing and melancholy, he was led to
contrast the carefree games of the schoolboys of Eton with the varied ills, which
would befall their riper years. All these young Etonians exhibit a petulance for which
youth is the only excuse; and Gray himself writes, “It is very possible that two and
two make four, but I would not give four farthings to demonstrate this ever so
humble fate of those who were sleeping there and who were perhaps equal in virtue
and natural endowments to the heroes whose fame has filled the world; this is the
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theme of the Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard, whose quatrains live in every
English memory. To such simple theme he devoted verses lyrical in form, more
endeared himself to millions all over the world, he was a poet whose influence upon
subsequent literature was largely in excess of the volume of his published works. He
was bom in Comhill on 26th December 1716. His father, Philip Gray, was an
Exchange Broker. His mother, Dorothy Gray was a second wife to her husband. He
was educated at Eton and Peter House College, Cambridge. The poet's melancholy is
said to have been due to his mother's separation from her husband, because of his
violent and harsh temper. Young Gray became a pupil in Eton, where his mother’s
brother was a teacher, and then he proceeded to Cambridge, which he entered at the
age of eighteen. Four years later he left the university without taking a degree, and
with Horace Walpole, a fellow-student at both Eton and Cambridge, began a tour of
Gray’s father died in 1741, after having squandered nearly all his fortune.
Accordingly the next year the poet’s mother moved to the village of Stoke Pogis, in
southern Buckinghamshire, and was soon joined by her son. Here Gray wrote his first
English poems, Ode to Spring, the Eton College Ode, and the beginnings of Elegy
near his new home in Stoke Pogis. During winter of the same year, 1742, he returned
to Cambridge, took the degree of Bachelor of Civil Law, and settled down to a
dreamy life of study in the libraries of the university. In 1747, his Ode on a Distant
Prospect of Eton College was published, but it met with a little favour. The Elegy, on
From 1754 to 1757 Gray produced some few short poems, among them his
well-known Pindaric odes. Later he was offered the laureateship, an honour that he
refused. In 1768 he was given the professorship of Modem History and Modem
Languages at Cambridge, but he never delivered a lecture. In 1771 the shy, sensitive,
secluded scholar died, and was buried beside his mother in the “country churchyard”
of Stoke Pogis.
Nothing can be stated with certainty about the date when Gray began the
Elegy; which stanzas were written first; or when exactly he altered what was
originally a simple meditation among the tombs and turned it into an elegy. The data
for any assured conclusions are lacking. In his Memoir of Gray (1775), William
Mason wrote: ‘I am inclined to believe that the Elegy in a Country Churchyard has
begun, if not concluded, at this time also’7; that is, under the spur-of poetical activity
caused by the death of Richard West. On the other hand, when Gray sent the
completed poem to Horace Walpole on (2 June 1750, he wrote: ‘Having put an end to
a thing whose beginning you have seen long ago, I immediately sent it to you. You
will I hope, look upon it in the light of a thing with an end to it. You are desired to tell
me your opinion, if you can take the pains of these lines.’5 It was Walpole s
impression that the poem was posterior to West’s death at least three or four years
when he says “...lam sure that I had the twelve or more first lines from himself about
three years after that period, and it was long before he finished it”. 9 In response,
however, to a letter from Mason, he deferred to the latter s opinion. Yet his
recollection of having received ‘the twelve or more first lines some years before
1750 was probably well founded; and if so, the twelve lines may have been the
‘Epitaph’, and Gray may thus have written it after the shock he had received on
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hearing that West was dead. In that event, the bulk of the poem was written at a later
date.
succeeded so admirably that almost any one of his few poems is well worth the
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reader’s acquaintance. He was well versed in the classics, especially Greek, and all his
work was instinct with the Greek spirit. He was all considered the greatest scholar of
his days in modem European literature. His letters are among the best in the language.
Gray has left us his charming and characteristic letters and a small number of
English and Latin poems. Their quality is such as to give Gray a unique and
romantic qualities in his poetry. It is said that he is partly classical and partly
romantic, i.e., he looks back to Dryden and Pope and looks forward to Wordsworth
and Shelley, It is said that Gray has classical clothes under which a romantic heart is
beating. His discipline is classical but content is romantic. On account of this reason,
he is called a poet of transition. His subjectivity, his scholarship, and his technical
excellence, all these place him with the highest acme of literary glory.
Gray's elegy is not pastoral in the sense in which Milton’s Lycidas is pastoral,
Shelley's Adonais is pastoral and Arnold's Thyrsis & The Scholar Gipsy are pastoral.
There are certain by-pastoral touches in poem, in terms of its rustic atmosphere and
description of village Hampton, because Gray's basic passion was to narrate "simple
and short annals of the poor" (p. 129, St. 8,1. 32). It has rustic touches and against this
backdrop, which is very close to the pastoral, Gray focuses attention on futility of all
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human ejuste^^^^Se^feali26s feat the ('paths of glory but lead to the grave."(p.
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129, St. 9,1. 36). It would be an interesting aspect to highlight the composition of the
elegy as Gray took ten years in writing this poem. This throws light on his
Poetically, the first and the third line echo and the second and the fourth line have the
same pattern. This has been uniformly followed throughout the poem. For instance,
Gray’s contribution, however, lies mainly in anticipating the romantic age and ,
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in this respect his Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard is a great watershed in the 1
becomes clearly perceptible which were to blossom later in the poetry of Wordsworth, \
Shelley, Keats, Coleridge and others. This poem has been classed as his greatest
achievement and it is believed that if he had not written anything else, he would have
the new upsurge of self- confidence and the abounding energy, which was evident in
the works of the poets writing at the end of 18th and the beginning of the 19th century.
Broadly speaking ‘Romantic’ poet looked to himself, rather than to the world around
him, for his subject matter. The Romantics discovered the creative function of the
Elizabethan poets. For the Romantics, the rediscovery of what Coleridge called “the
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shaping spirit of imagination”11 offered a whole new dynamic concept of the poetry.
One amongst them was Thomas Gray, whose Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard
- of which the first nine stanzas is seen as an ‘intermediary’ stage, a bridge between
the restrained ‘classicism’ of Pope and Johnson and the effusive ‘Romanticism’ of
Wordsworth and his confreres. We will quote the stanzas first and then interpret them
The poem’s rhythm is emphatically iambic. From the opening line, the
alternately stressed syllables ring out loud and clear in imitation of the steady intoning
of the curfew bell, the image that ushers in the poem. This bell, with its note of
sustained melancholy, establishes the tone of the poem. To the poet’s mind it is a
‘knell’, or a parting tribute, tolling for the day that is dying. This reflection puts the
poet into a meditative frame of mind and launches him on the course of rumination
churchyard’; and from the poem’s title and the funeral note of the opening line it is
clear that death will be the dominant theme of the poet’s speculation.
For such a theme the structure that Gray has chosen is most apt. He does not
measured pace, unfolding each image of the departing day and the approaching night-
and the thoughts they inspire in the poet - in a simple, uncomplicated way. The poet
is in no rush; the whole night stretches before him and he luxuriates in the prospect of
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being free to allow his thoughts to range wherever they will, even if they gravitate
towards the dark topography of death. For though the corpse in its clayey resting -
place is the nucleus around which the poet’s fancies soon come to revolve, such a
topic does not lead him to despair but rather towards an acceptance of the evident
truth that ‘the paths of glory but lead to grave’ (p. 129, St. 9,1. 36). The rhythm of the
poem points to the universal but undemonstrative rhythm of life. The first stanza
affirms this, with its gong - like bell, its herd of cattle taking its meandering course
‘slowly’ across the meadow and its farm labourers, homeward- bound, planting their
tired feet with the same ‘plodding’ regularity, and at the same unhurried pace, as the
poem itself.
These initial images create the appropriate atmosphere for the meditation that
is to follow. Having observed his fellow men obeying the summons of the ‘curfew’
and retiring behind their doors and shutters for the night, the poet is left alone. In the
first stanza the focus narrows down from the world around him to the final ‘me’, the
‘egoistical sublime’ that Keats would detect at the centre of Wordsworth’s verse. Yet,
since he is not a full-fledged ‘Romantic’, Gray does not see his position of solitude at
this point of gathering dusk as an opportunity to plunge within him and drag forth
some long- buried psychic treasure into the light of poetic consciousness. Instead, the
poem continues as before, registering the impressions that come to the poet from both
outside and within, while he himself remains uninvolved. A Romantic poet, on the
contrary, would have actively engaged his mind in the images that come to it,
imaginatively fusing a unified vision, or ‘higher reality’, out of the disparate elements.
Gray, by contrast, remains a somewhat dry observer, cataloguing what he sees around
him without attempting to relate the phenomena of external nature too intimately to
Nature, which figures frequently in the poetry of the Romantics, serves them
chiefly as a stimulus to wider-ranging inquiry, either inward through the chasms and
caverns of the poet’s own soul or outward towards explorations of the heavens and a
definition of man’s part in the universal scheme of things. The ‘pre- Romantic’ poet,
on the other hand, is much more restrained in his reflexes to the animal and the
vegetable kingdoms. It is the ‘external ’ reality of nature that strikes him, rather than
its ‘internal’ essence or hidden meaning; and he goes about the task of tabulating its
phenomena dutifully, with a detached and dispassionate eye. Thus, while Gray differs
from the bulk of his contemporaries in considering the natural scene at all, he
undertakes his peregrination through the nocturnal world of bestial sights and sounds
with the imperturbable aplomb and exactly measured gait of the village policeman.
The second stanza dearly illustrates how Gray conceived his role as a passive
receptacle of the impressions that came to his senses. The effects that the ‘glimmering
landscape’ and the ‘droning beetle’ make on the sight and the hearing are duly
registered but the poet himself remains disengaged with his passion undisturbed. The
‘solemn stillness’ that governs all around him reigns in his own soul. When his
intuitive emotional reaction but rather a carefully weighed, deliberate and, above all,
rational reflection. This is not to say that Gray’s more ‘reasonable’ attitude to the
suggest that for Gray the instinctive reaction to life’s phenomena is not to be trusted:
it must be filtered still through the funnel of reason before finding an expression in
diction and a metre intended to tranquillize rather than agitate. Gray, like his
contemporaries* believed in keeping nature at arm’s length; the day had not yet
arrived when he might have said, as John Keats was to say more than half a century
later, ‘ if a sparrow come before my window I take part in its existence and pick about
the gravel’.12
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The 18th century, with its love of the landscaped garden and its preference for
the ‘picturesque’ in art, desired nature to be ‘tame’: something that the mind could
cope with. Gray’s poem shows where his predilection lies: in the direction of the
nature that is neither unruly nor unpredictable. Thus the images that come to him
during his vigil are those he is predisposed to receive. The evening contains no
surprises. So, in stanza 2, the beetle ‘wheels’ in ‘droning flight’, the monotonous
‘droning’ sound encourages a relaxation towards sleep. The sheep in their folds are
suggesting that Gray, intent on having all the natural phenomena in consonance with
on the sheep’s behavior than in any independent observation of the habits of such
animals. Creation of the initial mood is Gray’s first task: he must establish a relaxed,
sleepy atmosphere so that he may proceed to meditate aloud. Thus he projects onto
The third stanza shows more clearly how Gray credits nature with human
feelings and intentions. The one creature that is stirring at this crepuscular hour is the
interprets the bird in a fanciful ‘humanized’ way, without doing violence to its actual
behavior; the owl’s whooping call, he claims, is a sulky moan of protest leveled
against the poet who dares to disturb, at this untoward hour of the night,
‘her...solitary reign’. The bird’s human dimension is suggested by the use of ‘her’
rather than ‘its’, just as when referring to the beetle the poet mentions ‘his’ droning
The poet’s primary aim, the evocation of those moments before slumber when
the mind, on the threshold of sleep, is relaxed and reflective, is attained. Gray selects
those elements in animal life, which assist this purpose, excluding those that might
behave too chaotically: there has to be a reason for the owl’s weird, unearthly cry, and
the poet duly supplies it. Nor is the darkness permitted to become too overwhelming:
stanza III. It is comfortable rather than a disquieting obscurity: a vapour rather than a
void.
In stanza IV Gray approaches the main preoccupation of his elegy: the passing
from life of the former inhabitants of this small village (the ‘forefather of the
Hamlet’). His thoughts are guided in this direction by the encompassing darkness and
by his awareness of the trees in the churchyard, shading the graves of the villagers.
These ‘rude’ people, uneducated’ but honest, are now imprisoned ‘forever’ in a
‘narrow cell’. Yet some of the claustrophobic horror of death is lessened by Gray’s
euphemistic assertion that the cemetery gives ‘sleep’ to these worn-out peasants and
not utter annihilation; an impression which is furthered by his depiction of the trees
standing guard over the beds of the ‘sleepers’ and the turf that covers them ‘heaving’
like blankets tossed about by a slumberer. It appears that the hamlet’s forefathers
might at some future time shake off their present hibernation. The tone of the poem,
though solemn, is not morbid. The graves’ tenants may have departed ‘forever’ from
this world but they are at the same time resting prior to their journey next.
The freshness of the ‘incense-breathing’ morning and the sweet odours from
its opening flowers can make no impression on the olfactory organs of the grave-
dwellers. Nor can the swallow’s ‘twittering’ reach their ears. Their senses, along with
their bodies, are stilled and ‘mouldering’ with the turf. They will be equally heedless
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of the cockerel’s reveille and the hunter’s horn. Only the Judgement-Day trumpet now
has the power to reach them and ‘rouse them from their lowly bed’.
Gray has begun now to celebrate the life that the dead ones have left: the
exhilarating scents of the fields, the chattering activity of the birds, the excitement of
the fox hunt, the health and vigour of the countryside where nothing exists. He
develops this in stanza VI with an avocation of the domestic joys that are perforce a
thing of the past for the churchyard’s tenants. The welcoming warmth of the fire, the
offspring, all serving to compensate the workman at the end of a day’s hard labour,
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are treasures all the more precious for their inevitable impermanence. Gray’s tone
here is one of the nostalgia and regret, not of despair: the regular measure of the
iambic feet, if nothing else, reassures us. With so much love evident in the earthly
cottage, how impossible that such love should not be magnified a thousand fold in the
heavenly mansion.
In stanza VII Gray pays tribute to the physical energy of these late harvesters,
‘rugged’ as the elms, which now watch over their remains. The ‘yielding’ of the
harvest crop suggests that the com only surrendered after a tough struggle; and the
peasant must have developed military virtues in himself to combat the ‘stubborn
glebe’ and wrest subsistence from it. He had to fight nature and to dominate it; and in
the end even the trees of the forest ‘bowed’ down before him, acknowledging him as
master. But for the labourers who now lie beneath Gray’s feet, demobilized by death,
the glory of such physical power is departed. The harvesters have themselves been
harvested and the earth over which they had hitherto reigned supreme now rests on
top of them. Yet there is something so ‘natural’ about this cycle of the events that
Gray goes on to justify his calling the attention of his literate middle and upper
class readers to the humble lives and deaths of the illiterate peasantry. Death, the great
leveler, does not recognize social class, physical beauty or cultured accomplishment;
all such superfluities must be deposited at the entrance to the ‘narrow cell’ that awaits
The poem has its roots evidently well embedded in the 18th - century poetry of
moral tutelage. Yet its tone is not as dryly didactic as, for example, a poem on a
similar theme by Johnson might have been. The graveyard atmosphere anticipates the
terrors called forth later in the century by similar settings in the Gothic novels of Ann
Radciiff and M.G. ‘Monk’ Lewis. There is in Gray, however, a passive acceptance of
the known facts of life and death, which is notably absent from the more febrile
writing of the Gothic novelist and Romantic, poets who were to follow in his wake.
There are, however, two aspects at least, in which Gray foreshadows those
writers of a more turbulent epoch and for which he is sometimes dubbed ‘pre-
Romantic’. Firstly, he has forsaken the city streets to seek stimulus from the rural
trigger off human emotions and musings, even though neither nature nor the thoughts
it inspires are allowed to trespass beyond the limits preimposed by the poet. Secondly,
the poem seems to map out, at the end of its opening stanza, ‘leaves the world to
darkness and to me’ (p. 128, St. I, 1. 4), a subjective terrain that, in the event, is left
unexplored. Having indicated his own place in the panorama, Gray turns his gaze
outward and keeps it there. The self-examination, which the first stanza seems to
promise, is not forthcoming. “Neither chaos from the inner world nor turmoil from
outside is allowed to intrude to the point of disturbing the even flow of perfectly
weighed aphorism.”13
This stanza evokes the memory of the King’s College Chapel where the fate
decrees fortune and the students adorned with the trophies under the majestically
carved tomb with golden fire roof and the fan-tracery of its ‘vault’. The college has
been described as the Temple of Fame with Tong-sounded isles, and intermingled
graves’. The varied hymns lift the rising soul. Gray may have decided that there was
something ludicrous about ‘swaying’ reins or have wished to avoid echoing ‘Proud
Knowledge, one hand being chained up by poverty to misery, folly and ignorance, and
one foot weighted down with despair. The image is like a scroll, rich with the spoil of
nature.
There is many a rich stone laid up in the bowels of the earth, many a fair pearl
in the bosom of the sea that never was seen, nor never shall be beneath the dark,
unfathomed caves of the ocean, like woodland flowers, which paint the desert glades,
As when in tumults rises the ignoble crowd, mad in their motions, and loud in
their tongues, leaving the road of strife and treading the pleasing, silent path of life. It
Stanza XXI is probably the weakest in the Elegy. The ‘unletter’d Muse’ is the
them (but ‘strew’ is the rhyme to ‘muse’); ‘many a holy text’ is singular, and therefore
line 84 should therefore be read: ‘That teaches... to die’? Gray’s editors have not
commented on these defects, whether because they have not noticed them or because
the text of the Elegy is too sacred to be questioned. We observe even among the
vulgar, how fond they are to have an inscription over their grave. It requires little
philosophy to discover and observe that there is no intrinsic value in all this; the real
Man’s reluctance to be forgotten after death could have caused either the
inscription on the grave to teach those still living how to consider death. Those
thoughts that wander through eternity, to perish rather, swallowed up and lost in the
wide womb of uncreated night, devoid of sense and motion. The spirit of dead would
have gone forth to its native air, pious tears would have wet their breast, and the
One suspects, however, that Gray was diverting attention from his real
sources, which was surely Chaucer’s ‘Yet in our ashes cold is fire yreken’. Similarly,
with reference to the verse in the ‘Epitaph’ - ‘There they alike in trembling hope
repose’ (p. 132, St. XXXII, 1. 127). He had been annoyed and disappointed that few
readers had understood the many allusions in the Pindaric odes, and in response to
Walpole’s urging he agreed to annotate them, and also the Elegy. Cultured readers
should have been able to recognize the many phrases he had taken from Latin and
comfortable and prosperous age, with servants to wait upon them, had time to indulge
of Gray who wrote exactly the kind of poetry, which the public expected; only, he
wrote it better than anyone previously. He worked over the stanzas again and again,
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annexing other men’s thoughts in memorable lines. The modem reader probably
prefers a more astringent pessimism; or, by contrast, the simple gaiety which is his
The bulk of the Elegy, that is the first 92 lines, mingles thoughts and
expressions known to be those of his friend with certain of his own; but for the most
part the borrowing is from Latin, Italian and English poets. The principle ideas could
easily have been conveyed in fewer stanzas. The theme is simple enough. Here in the
churchyard lie the forefathers of the hamlet; no more will they know the joys of the
home and the health of country life. Some might have been great poets, statesmen or
soldiers: yet if something prevented their rise to greatness, it also excluded the crimes,
which often accompany it. Better, perhaps, that they should live ‘far from the
madding crowd’s ignoble strife’ (p. 130, St. XIX, 1. 73)r Gray added, as an
afterthought, two stanzas on the sorrow despite the above comfortable reflection of
the ‘parting soul’ who leaves ‘the warm precincts of the cheerful day’ (p. 130, St.
XXIII, 1. 87). Dr. Johnson, no doubt, warmly praised this part of the poem because it
expressed his own morbid apprehension of death. ‘On some fond breast the parting
soul relies’ is no doubt true of many dying men and women. Hamlet had uttered the
(.Hamlet by Shakespeare)
But to suppose that the old, worn out with pain and weary life, with its bitter
taste of tears, feel anything but relief in escaping from it - unless they leave those
whom they love- is probably untrue. Gray is merely expressing his own dread of the
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end; and Ketton- Creamer is without doubt right in saying that Gray told his readers
himself as a corpse lying among, and conversing with other corpses. It was much later
that the churchyard at Stoke Pogis was assumed, no doubt rightly, to be the scene of
the poem. Various details in the description point to Stoke; and by this time the
Lord Lytton observed that “ornament is less the accessory grace than the
essential merit of his designs.” 16A reading of the poem bears out this view. Compare
the Elegy first with the bare simplicity of the sepulchral epigrams in the Greek
Anthology; or, again, with Wordsworth ‘Lucy’ poems which, in a few strokes, create
the most poignant sense of grief; and then study the details of Gray’s poem. The first
six and seven stanzas are the best in the entire poem. The remainders are studded with
The next following stanza (verses 93 - 6) the poet clearly addresses himself, in
spite of the shift to the second person. But the view has recently been fashionable that
Gray was either referring to a ‘village poet’ other than himself or, specifically, to the
Muse responsible for the rhymes and inscriptions on the gravestones mentioned
earlier.
From the branches filled with mellifluous dews, the morning arrives with the
freshness of breaths, and the dash of trembling drops. From the bent bushes, like the
verdant maze, the poet pursues his walk. The poet omits the evening scene, which he
used it in the opening lines and drifts towards morning walk and noontide repose.
Some mention of woods was necessary according to the poet, which turned
hard because of cottage chimney smoke. The wayward fancies, like the scornful
smile, and thousand like this are the creation of the idle brain.
The swain continues to recall the movements of the person in question - who
turns out to be ‘A youth to Fortune and to Fame unknown :’(p. 131, St. XXX, 1. 118)
- he says that ‘One morn I miss’d him on the custom’d hill’ (p. 131, St. XXVIII, 1.
After this comes the ‘Epitaph’. But whom is the swain addressing? Who is
asked to read? It must be the ‘kindred spirit’ who had inquired about the youth’s fate
(verse 96); but he must be the same person as the one who appeared unexpectedly in
verse 93, addressing whoever was speaking at this point, with the words:
This must be Gray himself. If this interpretation were accepted, the first
twenty-three stanzas (92 verses) should be placed between inverted commas, since
they are the words of the dead youth. Gray speaks the next five lines; whilst the swain
to Gray speaks lines 98 to 116; and Gray must then have written the ‘Epitaph’ of the
dead youth, referring to Gray's faith in virtues and greatness of God. There are elegiac
elements in the poem. The poet feels that like the poor forefathers he too may be
forgotten. He feels that some unknown poet may come in future, and will write about
him,
The ‘Epitaph’ was perhaps inspired by the inscription in the church, which is
strong, sincere and clear. His manner greatly plain; a noble grace, self-
taught, beyond the reach of mimic art, adorned his calmer temper, nor
pity softer, nor was truth more bright, constant in doing well, he
sympathizing he wiped off the tear from sorrow’s clouded eye. With
kindly hand, and taught her heart to smile. Here lies a youth, borne
down with love and care, joy left his bosom with parting fair, and
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when he durst no longer hope, he died.
The whole poem is informed by deep and highly personal and melancholic
feeling. In 1742, when he began the Elegy, Gray was saddened by his quarrel with
Walpole, the death of his mother and of Richard West; and worried about his future
and his material prospects. These private concerns nowhere .explicitly enter the poem,
but they serve to crystallize what would otherwise be a purely generalized emotion. It
is this that gives to the poem its half-articulate romanticism, as in the image of him as
the "hoary- headed swain" may recall him. The poem begins by describing the
approach of the evening. Evening brings with it silence and darkness. The darkness is
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an inspiring force for weeping thoughts. Gray is deeply concerned about the plight of
In the various parts of the poem, where despair is shown in varied imageries
are described hereafter. The very first stanza refers to this darkness
The dead people cannot be woken up from everlasting sleep and they can no
longer enjoy the family gathering. These villagers were very humble; they had no
ambitions and never committed crime. There are no monuments erected in their
memory, and nobody remembers them because they had no money. The poet believes
that his forefathers of Hamlet could have become as great as Milton and Cromwell,
but no opportunity was given to them. Such great people lie at the bottom of
wilderness and the grave. There is an element of pathos in the following lines:
they had great love for honesty and truth. They remained away from the busy life
those virtues wishes. Even then, the poet feels that they should not have been
forgotten after their deaths. Only their goodness is left. Gray perhaps is thinking of his
own death, that people may also forget him. This very feeling is expressed in the
following lines:
his poetry. To begin with, love for nature. Gray expresses this feeling and has treated
nature as a bright force, which has the power to heal and comfort us. We are living in
a materialistic world and we definitely need some kind of consolation and nature can
concerned with the freedom of poetry. This democratic element is essential for
flowering of poetic genius, because you cannot compose poetry in slavery. Love for
middle classes, middle ages and the past is an important element, traceable in Gray's
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poetry. In the Elegy, we find loving sentiments, which express the futility of life and
ultimate decay -
The fame of Elegy was spread to all countries, and has exercised an influence
on all poets and critics and they have remarked on the great Gray and his great poem
The Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard. General Wolfe is said to have remarked
on Gray's deathbed, that he would rather be the author of the 'elegy' than the
conqueror of Quebec. Palgrave, who would have excluded the Elegy from his Golden
Treasury, on accounts of its length, had to make an exception in its favour on the
insistence of Tennyson.
No short poem has perhaps been the subject of so many commentaries and
studies as the Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard. The Elegy, appealed to the
are neither noble nor great, and who have achieved nothing of note, it may have been
gratifying to reflect that those who are noble, those who have achieved greatness, will
come to the same dusty end as themselves. By abasing the great ones of the earth and
seeming to ennoble the humble, Gray unintentionally ministered to envy and jealousy,
But it remains a fact that those poets greater than Gray have also admired the
Elegy: Byron, Tennyson and Edward Fitzgerald. The ornate and studied language, the
lapidary phrases, perhaps also the flavour of Miltonic diction, no doubt account for
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this admiration. Like many readers, they were less concerned with ideas than with
language; and one suspects that it is, in the main, the beauty of the language that has
made the Elegy so popular. Gray’s contemporaries were naturally not insensitive to
the ideas and the sentiments. Professor F.C. Green praised too highly the ‘mellifluous
and haunting melancholy’ of the poem, or its author as “the champion of oppressed
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humanity, the sweet mediator of divine compassion.”
The crucial fact about the poem, of which by no means all discussions of
Elegy take account, is that we possess two distinct versions of it: the version which
originally ended with the four rejected stanzas in the Eton MS, and the familiar,
revised and expanded version. Many of the difficulties in the interpretation of the
poem can be clarified if the two versions are examined in turn. As has been stated
above, Mason’s assertion that the first version of the poem ended with the rejected
stanzas appears to be fully justified. In this form the Elegy is a well-constructed poem,
in some ways more balanced and lucid than its final version. The three opening
stanzas brilliantly setting the poem and the poet in the churchyard, are followed by
four balanced sections each of four stanzas, dealing in turn with the lives of the
humble villagers; by contrast, with the lives of the great; with the way in which the
villagers are deprived of the opportunities of greatness; and by contrast, with the
crimes inextricably involved in success as the ‘thoughtless world’ knows it, from
which the villagers are protected. The last three stanzas, balancing the opening three,
return to the poet himself in the churchyard, making clear that the whole poem has
been a debate within his mind as he meditates in the darkness, at the end of which he
makes his own choice about the perfectibility of obscure innocence to the dangers of
The conclusion of the first version of the Elegy ultimately failed to satisfy
Gray, partly perhaps because it was too explicitly personal for publication, but also no
doubt because its very symmetrical and order represented an oversimplification of his
own predicament, of the way he saw his own life and wished it to be seen by society.
A simple identification with the innocent but uneducated villagers was mere self
depiction. Gray’s continuation of the poem may lack some of the clarity, control and
authority of the earlier stanzas, but it does represent a genuine attempt to redefine and
justify his real relationship with society more accurately by merging it with a
dramatization of the social role played by poetry or the poet. As Gray starts to rewrite
the poem, the simple antitheses of rich and poor, of vice and virtue, of life and death,
which underlay the first version, are replaced by a preoccupation with the desire to be
remembered after death, a concern which draws together both rich and poor, making
This theme, which runs counter to the earlier resignation to obscurity and the
expectation of ‘eternal peace’ hereafter, leads Gray to contemplate the sort of ways in
which he, or the poet into whom he projects himself, may be remembered after his
death, and the assessments he gives in the word of the ‘hoary-headed swain’ (p. 131,
St. XXV, 1. 97) and of the ‘Epitaph’ also evaluate the role of poetry in society. The
figure of the poet is no longer urban, urbane, worldly, rational Augustan man among
men, with his own place in society; what Gray dramatizes is the poet as an outsider,
burdensome. The lack of social function so apparent in English poetry of the mid and
late eighteenth century is constantly betrayed by its search for inspiration in the past.
phrases and diction borrowed from Spenser, Shakespeare and Milton. The texture of
The metrical form adopted was that which Richard West had used in his
Monody on the death of Queen Caroline; Gray uses it only in this poem; it is the verse
form employed by West. As the poem is unlike any other that Gray wrote, one might
Nothing could have been more natural than that Gray should make his poem a
veiled tribute to West; to describe the poem as dying young, as West had died; but, to
mingle in his description, and in the ‘Epitaph’, certain traits which were not
specifically West’: these may have been introduced to conceal from the public the
Besides the Elegy, which though begun in 1742 was finished ini750, Gray's
poetical works includes has odes, On Spring, On a Distant Prospect of Eton College,
On Adversity, On the Death of a Favorite Cat (his friend Walpole's) and the two
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Pindaric Odes The Progress of Poesy and The Bard. His studies in Icelandic and
Celtic languages resulted in two imitative poems The Fatal Sisters and The Descent of
ignorance is bliss, it is folly to be wise”20, is the last line of the Eton Ode. The ode on
the Favorite Cat shows that the melancholic Gray was not devoid of humour. "A
favorite has no friends"21 is a quotation from the poem, which also contains amusing
lines.
even being such an austere critic and biographer, who criticized Gray's Pindaric Odes
The Bard and The Progress of Poesy. He criticized these two odes saying "Glittering
writes in The Lives of the Poets, "the churchyard school abounds with images which
find a mirror in every mind and with sentiments to which every bosom returns an
echo". ‘He attacked Gray,’ says Boswell, ‘calling him a dull fellow, in fact he was a
reserved and might appear dull in company; but sure he was not dull in poetry. To
which Johnson replied, ‘Sir, he was dull in company, dull in his closet, dull
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everywhere. He was dull in a new way, and that made people think him great.’
production? Shall we explain it by saying that to make Gray a poet of this magnitude
is absurd; that his genius and resources were small, and that his production, therefore,
was small also, but that the popularity of a single piece, the Elegy - a popularity due
in great measure to the subject - created for Gray a reputation to which he has really
no right?
To which Matthew Arnold aptly remarked that though Gray’s production was
scanty, and whatever he produced was not always pure in diction, it was true in
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evolution. Still, with whatever drawbacks, he was alone in his age. Gray said himself
that ‘the style he aimed at was extreme conciseness of expression, yet pure,
perspicuous, and musical’.24 Compared, not with the work of the great masters of the
golden ages of poetry, but with the poetry of his own contemporaries in general,
Gray’s may be said to have reached, in style, the excellence at which he aimed; while
the evolution also of such a piece as his Progress of Poesy must be accounted not less
Gray himself, however, maintained that the Elegy was not his best work in
poetry, as high was the praise due to the Elegy1, it is yet true that in the other
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productions of Gray he exhibits poetical qualities even higher than those exhibited in
the Elegy. He deserves, therefore, his extremely high reputation as a poet, although f
his critics and the public may not always have praised him with perfect judgement.
Gray, a bom poet, fell upon an age of prose. He fell upon an age whose task
was such as to call forth in general men’s powers of understanding, wit and
cleverness, rather than their deepest powers of mind and soul. As regards literary
production, the task of the eighteenth century in England was not the poetic
interpretation of the world; its task was to create a plain, clear, straightforward,
efficient prose. Poetry obeyed the bent of mind requisite for the due fulfillment of this
task of the century. It is a sentiment that very universally prevails, that poetry is a
light kind of reading, which one takes up only for a little amusement, and that
sentiment would be apt for all the other work by Gray except his Elegy To this
The sentiments would bear hard on some of your best things, and on all
Gray’s except his ‘Churchyard Elegy’, which, he told me, with a good
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deal of acrimony, owned its popularity entirely to the subject, and that
prose.25
truth and beauty, not interpretative. Gray, with the qualities of mind and soul of a
genius poet, was isolated in his century. Maintaining them and fortifying them by
lofty studies, he yet could not fully deduce and enjoy them; the want of a genial
Nothing could be more perverse, and yet, no doubt, it was inevitable. For quite
apart from superficial mannerism, the very texture of Gray’s thought and sentiment
must always have been uncongenial to Johnson. The tender, shallow, and somewhat
willful melancholy of the Elegy, with its facile philosophy and gentle egotism, can
never have appealed much to one who ‘hated’, as he told Hannah More, ‘to hear
people whine about metaphysical distress when there is so much want and hunger in
the world’: a world, as he said on another occasion, ‘bursting with sin and sorrow’.
Admiring the work of Gray, specially referring to Elegy, Edmund Gosse says,
every generation, and of metrical skill that in each line proclaims piece
of English verse, our poem of poems, not that it is the most brilliant or
more balanced perfection than any other or all the qualities that go to
Cleanth Brooks has recently devoted a chapter to the Elegy in the collection of
Studies in the Structure of Poetry that he has called The Well Wrought Urn (1947),
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and this is the most elaborate discussion that Gray's poem has received. In this book,
he seems to be forcing a meaning on Gray's words that is not really there and the
poetic 'structure' that he uncovers does not amount to very much. Gray is trying to
cheer himself up on the face of a bitter disappointment. The "anxious ears and endless
wishes"27 are not poetical ornaments but his own private demons.
provides a clue to the inner conflict in Gray's poem. The opposition between the
natural, almost animal life of the village and the futile artificial life of the proud."28
This picture of the heartless insincerity of high life - the hypocritical funeral anthem,
the flattery of the expensive epitaph, the brazenness, the poetical reflection of the
proud and luxurious, is a picturisation of his own recent dependence on Walpole, the
° Prime Minister's son and his realistic recognition of poverty. His heart is pregnant
with celestial fire, but chill penury soon represses his noble rage and freezes the
In the ‘Review of Gray’s Odes’ (1757), Goldsmith writes, “we would only
intimate that an English poet - ‘one whom the Muse has marked for her owncould
produce a more luxuriant bloom of flowers by cultivating such as natives of the soil,
than by endeavoring to force the exotics of another climate.”29 That is to say that,
such a genius as Gray might have given more pleasure, and acquired a larger portion
of fame, if, instead of being just an imitator, he did justice to his talents, and ventured
to be more original.
as a mood which Gray felt more than any other men. It is more popular, perhaps, than
any other English poem, because that sort of feeling is the most diffused of high
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dogmatisms of learning. He says, “The Churchyard abounds with images which find a
mirror in every mind, and with sentiments to which every bosom returns an echo.”'
Other poets cannot hope for such success: a subject so popular, so grave, so
wild, and yet so suitable to the writer’s nature. A Criticism on the Elegy (1783) by
one of his contemporaries; "Delicacy recoils at the publication of internal grief. They
profane the hallowedness of secret sadness and suppose selected and decorated
expression compatible with the prostration of the soul."31 He had not written in
entirely as an act of private Katharsis. The poem was a protest, not only against his
own personal misfortunes but also at the social order that had made them possible;
whatever Gray was doing he was not writing with his eye on a phenomenon object.
The descriptive inaccuracies, therefore, do not matter; and also literal accuracy would
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Gray’s principle model. Gray points the same contrast as Pope in his Epistle to
Burlington between the 'useful toil' of the villagers and the pomp power: As Pope
says -
In this concept of a scared silence, positive and rational, both the public and
the private conflicts of Elegy, finds their solution. It is not the silence of death, though
it resembles death, but of 'eternal peace'. The Christian humanity, that is to provide
the Christian Charity that, is the implied prescription for the social ills of Augustan
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England parallels the solvent of his personal difficulties.
presentative or reflective class; yet one whom the world will never forget as the
author of the Elegy - a production of sentiment dignified and temperate rather than
profound, yet so wide in appeal and so nearly perfect in expression that it is perhaps
the best known and best loved poem in the English language. Thus, in conclusion of
the chapter, we can say that Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard has the classical
perfection packed with highly subjective exploration of the philosophy of life &
death, where, death is said to be the ultimate conqueror. In the words of Bagehot, in
Gray’s Elegy describes a mood which Gray felt more than other men,
but which most others, perhaps all others, feel too. It is more popular,
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perhaps, than any other English poem, because that sort of feeling is
on death and on life. Other poets cannot hope for such success: a
nature.33
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Notes
Charles Mills Gayley and Clement C Young, English Poetry: Its Principles
stanza numbers and line numbers are mentioned below the quoted lines.
1902)62.
2 Arnold 65.
3 Doughty Oswald, English Lyrics: In the Age of Reason (New York: Russel
7 A.L. Lylton Sells, Thomas Grav: His Life and Works, (London: George
9 Sells 172.
12 Garrett 99.
13 Garrett 102.
14 Sells 181.
18 Sells 172.
19 Robert Dolsley, ed., A Collection of Poems in Six Volumes, Vol. II, The
21 H.W. Herrinton, English Masterpiece (London: Peter Owen Ltd., 1957) 756
22 Wain 95
23 Hugh Skyes Davies, The Poets and Their Critics: Chaucer to Collins,
24 Davies 238-9.
25 Davies 222.
26 Sir A.W. Ward and A.R. Waller, The Cambridge History of English
28 Bateson 135.
29 Davies 222-3.
30 Davies 225.
31 Davies 235.
32 A. Pope, The Poems of Alexander Pope (New Haven and London: Yale