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Preliminary Essay Outline Zakaria

This preliminary essay outline examines how sharing food pictures on social media can negatively impact social life in three ways: 1) It can rudely interrupt others' dining experiences and make them feel unwelcome or jealous. 2) It wastes restaurant workers' time as customers photograph their food instead of eating, and servers must reheat plates for pictures. 3) Overuse of social media is hurting in-person social interactions and privacy as people focus on their phones instead of engaging with each other.

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Preliminary Essay Outline Zakaria

This preliminary essay outline examines how sharing food pictures on social media can negatively impact social life in three ways: 1) It can rudely interrupt others' dining experiences and make them feel unwelcome or jealous. 2) It wastes restaurant workers' time as customers photograph their food instead of eating, and servers must reheat plates for pictures. 3) Overuse of social media is hurting in-person social interactions and privacy as people focus on their phones instead of engaging with each other.

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PRELIMINARY ESSAY OUTLINE (5%)

Question (copy & paste from the instructions):

THESIS STATEMENT WITH THREE POINTS:


Topic/subject + controlling idea + main points 1, 2, and 3(write in full sentence).
Sharing food pictures on social medias impacts negatively our social life, it can affect our
nutrition concept, waist restaurant workers time and unconsciously interrupt human habits.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1:
Topic sentence (relating to the first main point outlined in your thesis statement)
Instagramming pictures of our meals in restaurant can be rude and aggressive act.

Supporting ideas (2-4) + explanation/ specific examples (personal examples or from


reading). Write in point-form- format.
1. This practice makes others feeling bad and that they are not welcome to dine with you.
2. Scrolling other’s food pictures makes you losing the want of eating.
3. Food instagrammers are making their followers jealous and feel unlucky being enable to
have these expensive dishes.
4.

BODY PARAGRAPH 2:
Topic sentence (relating to the secondmain point outlined in your thesis statement)
Taking pictures on restaurants blight on customer service.

Supporting ideas (2-4) + explanation/ specific examples (personal examples or from


reading). Write in point-form- format.
1. Instead of enjoying their food and socialize with each other, customers are wasting time
photographing and sharing.
2. Using Smartphone on tables increase wait time in restaurants.
3. Instagramming food can be a free advertising for restaurants, however; servers are wasting
their time reheating the food.
4.

BODY PARAGRAPH 3:
Topic sentence (relating to the thirdmain point outlined in your thesis statement)
The abuse using of social medias is negatively affecting our social life.

Supporting ideas (2-4) + explanation/ specific examples (personal examples or from


reading). Write in point-form- format.
1. Privacy is despairing with sharing every single detail of our life into social media.
2. Non Smartphone users are bothered by seeing others relaying on their phone for everything.
3. Social Bridges are unconsciously burned by the use of social medias, and the warm contacts
are turned colder and colder.
4. The challenge is to convince Smartphone users that these practices are annoying their way
of living.

CONCLUDING STATEMENT: Paraphrase the thesis statement

Hurting people feelings, wasting food business time and changing our social life are the main
reasons stop intagramin food.

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