Writing Evaluation #1

Hi, i’m Fred, i’m going to Paijan, it’s a small town that is near to Trujillo,
my father was born there, in this place my father’s family have a farm
and ranch.

In my personal opinion, i like this place because my family have two cars
there, and one is mine, so when i went to paijan, i enjoy driving my car,
but the other car belongs to my brother, while my car is blue, his car is
red, also my family have a 3 motorbike, my brother and I always have a
race in the way from farm to beach, but my sister doesn’t like the race,
her biggest fear is we have an accident, so she drive slow.

I’m staying in my grandmother’s house, this house is divided in 3 parts,

one part belongs to my father, he always says: this part belongs to us

The weather here is beautiful, because in the morning allways is sunny

and windy, but in the afternoon sometimes the weather is cloudy and
rainy.