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Action Notes
EXT. THE KNEE - EVENING
EDA sits on a log in front of the fire, sipping cocoa
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Action Notes
LUZ walks IN from around a snow-covered boulder, slouched over
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Action Notes
LUZ turns and shuffles toward EDA
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Action Notes
LUZ ACTION H/U
CAMERA PAN WITH ACTION
Dialog
LUZ [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ holds her hands in front of her as she walks, counting on her fingers
Dialog
LUZ
Okay. I?ve identified the smells of [...]
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Dialog
LUZ
Okay. I?ve identified the smells of
three different types of rocks
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Action Notes
EDA sits drinking cocoa.
Dialog
LUZ
Okay. I?ve identified the smells of [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ holds her haends out to her side
Dialog
LUZ
I sorted all the twigs from big to [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ extends her arms
Dialog
LUZ
I sorted all the twigs from big to [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ reacher into her pocket-
Dialog
LUZ
And I found your glove.
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Action Notes
-and pulls out EDA's detached hand (with glove)
CAMERA PAN STOP
Dialog
LUZ [...]
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Dialog
LUZ
AND your hand.
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Action Notes
LUZ/EDA START POSE H/U
Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing [...]
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Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing
went!
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Action Notes
EDA's detatched hand waves to her
Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing [...]
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Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing
went!
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Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing
went!
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Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing
went!
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Action Notes
EDA sets down her cocoa
Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing [...]
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Action Notes
EDA grabs her detatched hand
Dialog
EDA
I was wondering where that thing [...]
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Action Notes
EDA pulls her detatched hand away from LUZ
LUZ pulls her hand back
CAMERA ADJUST
Dialog
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Action Notes
EDA pops her hand back into place and "screws" it tight
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Action Notes
EDA ACTION H/U
LUZ stands looking down at EDA
Dialog
LUZ [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ holds her hand out to her sides
Dialog
LUZ
So...what now?
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Action Notes
EDA holds her hand out in front of her
Dialog
LUZ
So...what now?
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Action Notes
EDA bends her wrist back and forth, testing it
Dialog
LUZ
So...what now?
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Action Notes
LUZ looks slightly off the side, past EDA
Dialog
LUZ
So...what now?
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Dialog
LUZ
So...what now?
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Action Notes
AMITY antics back, charging up her wand with a spell
EDRIC and EMIRA stand by AMITY with legs bent, ready to move
CAMERA PUSH IN THRU SCENE
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Action Notes
AMITY launches her spell at EDRIC
EMIRA steps forward
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Action Notes
AMITY/EDRIC/EMIRA START POSE H/U
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Action Notes
EDRIC dodges AMITY's spell
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Action Notes
EMIRA steps forward, making a spell circle
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Action Notes
EMIRA completes her spell circle. In response, a patch of ground snow rises up
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Action Notes
The patch of snow launches into the air, forming into the shape of a giant hand.
AMITY makes a spell circle.
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Action Notes
The patch of snow launches into the air, forming into the shape of a giant hand.
AMITY makes a spell circle.
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Action Notes
A MAGIC SHIELD appears in front of AMITY.
The SNOW HAND hits the shield and breaks into chunks of snow that scatter.
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Action Notes
Scattered snow chunks fall.
EMIRA steps back.
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Action Notes
SCATTERED SNOW settles.
EMIRA stops with her arms crossed.
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Action Notes
AMITY swipes her wand to the side, "wiping" the magic shield away.
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Action Notes
Magic shield fades.
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Action Notes
AMITY lowers her arms slightly.
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Action Notes
AMITY waves at LUZ.
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Action Notes
EMIRA looks up at LUZ
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Action Notes
EDRIC leans back and makes a spell circle
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Action Notes
GROUND SNOW rises up in a giant wave
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Action Notes
SNOW WAVE smacks AMITY.
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Action Notes
AMITY falls. SNOW WAVE settles on top of her.
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Action Notes
AMITY pops out of the snow mound, displacing snow.
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Action Notes
SNOW settles. AMITY settles.
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Action Notes
AMITY looks over to EDRIC.
EDRIC puts both hands on hips and laughs.
EMIRA laughs, clutching her stomach
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Action Notes
EDA looks offsceen, arms crossed.
LUZ stands giggling with one hand over her mouth
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Action Notes
LUZ lowers her hand
EDA looks at LUZ
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Dialog
EDA
Hey.
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Action Notes
EDA antics down
Dialog
EDA
Hey.
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Action Notes
EDA stands, holding out her hand
CAMERA ADJUST
Dialog
EDA [...]
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Dialog
EDA
I know my lessons seem
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Action Notes
EDA places her hand on LUZ's shoulder and makes quotation marks with her other hand
Dialog
EDA
?weird?
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Dialog
EDA
?weird?
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Dialog
EDA
?weird?
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Action Notes
EDA extends her free hand out
Dialog
EDA
but this is what elemental magic is * [...]
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Action Notes
EDA steps forward
CAMERA ADJUST TO FOLLOW ACTION
Dialog
EDA [...]
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Action Notes
EDA leans down
Dialog
EDA
Making a connection with [...]
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Action Notes
EDA straightens up with a ball of snow in each hand
CAMERA ADJUST STOP
Dialog
EDA [...]
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Action Notes
EDA crushes the balls of snow. Bits of snow fall
Dialog
EDA
Making a connection with [...]
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Dialog
EDA
Making a connection with
nature!
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Action Notes
Bits of snow fall OUT
Dialog
EDA
Making a connection with [...]
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Action Notes
EDA turns to LUZ with one hand on her hip and the other hand palm side face up
Dialog
EDA
The earliest witches [...]
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Action Notes
EDA/LUZ START POSE H/U
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Dialog
eda
Human witches need
to understand it too...
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Dialog
eda
Human witches need
to understand it too...
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Action Notes
EDA START POSE H/U
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
You want to learn a second spell?
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Action Notes
EDA leans slightly in toward LUZ
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
You want to learn a second spell?
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Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
You want to learn a second spell?
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Action Notes
EDA/LUZ START POSE H/U SC 117
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Action Notes
LUZ holds up her fist
Dialog
LUZ
With all my heart.
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Action Notes
LUZ settles
Dialog
LUZ
With all my heart.
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Dialog
EDA
Then you have to learn from the
Island.
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Dialog
EDA
Then you have to learn from the
Island.
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Dialog
EDA
Then you have to learn from the
Island.
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Action Notes
EDA walks LUZ IN, pushing her forward with her hands on LUZ's shoulders
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
So sit haere.
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Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
So sit haere.
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Action Notes
LUZ stops in front of the ROCK. EDA walks to the other side of LUZ
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
So sit haere.
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Action Notes
EDA gently pushes LUZ down onto the rock
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
Now, LOOK--
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Action Notes
EDA gestures out in front of her
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
Now, LOOK--
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Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
Now, LOOK--
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Action Notes
EDA/LUZ START POSE H/U
CAMERA MULTIPLANE PAN
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Action Notes
LUZ START POSE H/U
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Action Notes
The WIND blows LUZ's hat "ears" and hair. Flecks of snow blow through.
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Action Notes
LUZ START POSE H/U
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Action Notes
LUZ START POSE H/U
EDA stands next to LUZ. She antics her hand up.
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D) [...]
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Action Notes
EDA turns and points her finger back toward camp.
LUZ looks up at EDA
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D) [...]
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Action Notes
EDA walks away, pointing back toward LUZ
LUZ looks straight ahead
Dialog
EDA (CONT?D) [...]
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Dialog
EDA (CONT?D)
--And think about what the Island
is trying to tell you.
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Action Notes
EDA out
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Action Notes
LUZ takes in a breath
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Action Notes
LUZ action H/U
Dialog
LUZ
<deep breath>
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Action Notes
LUZ lets out a deep breath
Dialog
LUZ
Alright, Luz.
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Action Notes
LUZ looks up, clenching her fist
Dialog
LUZ
Look!
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Action Notes
LUZ squares her shoulders and holds out both fists in front of her.
Dialog
LUZ
Look with everything you?ve got.
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Action Notes
LUZ squares her shoulders even more and holds her fists out stiffly to the side
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Action Notes
LUZ holds her fists up
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Action Notes
LUZ straightens and pulls her fists in toward her chest
Dialog
LUZ (CONT?D)
FOCUS!
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Action Notes
LUZ holds her right hand up close to her face and makes a talking "mouth" shape. She talks out the
side of her mouth.
Dialog
LUZ (V.O.) (CONT?D) [...]
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Dialog
LUZ (V.O.) (CONT?D)
Focus? On what? On how you?ll be
stuck in the BABY CLASS?
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Action Notes
LUZ looks at her "mouth" hand
Dialog
LUZ (CONT?D)
No! Don?t think like that!
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Action Notes
LUZ holds up her left hand close to her ear in a "mouth" shape and makes it "talk". Again she talks
out of the side of her mouth.
Dialog
LUZ (V.O.) [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ looks at her left hand as she continues to make it "talk"
Dialog
LUZ (V.O.)
[...]
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Dialog
LUZ (V.O.)
Face it. You?ll never get your
second spell following Eda?s
lessons. And you?ll never be study
buddies with ANY of your friends--
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Action Notes
LUZ clenches her fists
Dialog
LUZ (CONT?D)
No!
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Action Notes
LUZ presses her hand to her temples.
Dialog
Don?t think like that!
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Action Notes
LUZ slouches down, letting her arms drop in front of her
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Action Notes
LUZ sits up and looks offscreen
Dialog
SLIGHT BOOM
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Action Notes
AMITY stands with her spellbook open in one hand and her wand in her other outstretched hand.
A BROKEN PILLAR lets off SMOKE near her.
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Action Notes
SMOKE fades
AMITY lowers her wand and spellbook.
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Action Notes
CAMERA ADJUST to reveal EMIRA and EDRIC walking by. EDRIC holds a round wrapped package and a cloth
bag.
EMIRA holds a silver tray with a lid.
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Action Notes
CAMERA ADJUST STOP
Dialog
EMIRA
Getting better, Mittens.
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Action Notes
AMITY turns to look at EDRIC and EMIRA
Dialog
EMIRA
Getting better, Mittens.
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Action Notes
EDRIC/EMIRA ACTION H/U
Dialog
EDRIC
Course, if you wanna beat our [...]
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Action Notes
EDRIC/EMIRA stop
Dialog
EDRIC
Course, if you wanna beat our [...]
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Action Notes
EDRIC holds his bag up.
Dialog
EDRIC
wean yourself [...]
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Action Notes
EDRIC lowers his bag and walks away
Dialog
EMIRA
Now come eat this gross camping food.f
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Action Notes
EDRIC OUT
EMIRA lifts up the SILVER TRAY and grabs the top of the cover
Dialog
EMIRA [...]
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Action Notes
EMIRA pulls the cover up, revealing a turkey covered in lemons, roses, and a sprig of garnish.
Rose petals fall out of the cover.
STEAM spills out from around the turkey
Dialog
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Action Notes
STEAM dissipates
Dialog
EMIRA
Now come eat this gross camping food.
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Action Notes
EDRIC leans IN
Dialog
EDRIC
Only one sprig of garnish?
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Action Notes
ROSE PETALS fall out
Dialog
EDRIC
We're really roughing it
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Action Notes
AMITY stands holding her wand and spellbook, looking forward
Dialog
alt/
Coming!
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Action Notes
AMITY walks off
CAMERA PAN WITH ACTION
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Action Notes
CAMERA PAN STOP
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Action Notes
AMITY puts her spellbook and wand down inside the tent
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Action Notes
AMITY stands and walks away
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Action Notes
AMITY OUT
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Action Notes
LUZ sits looking forward
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Action Notes
LUZ sits up straighter, eyes wide
111 Rough Seq07 DanaNotes Page 157/164

Action Notes
BOOK/WAND H/U SC 128
CAMERA ZOOM
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Action Notes
LUZ START POSE H/U SC 129
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Action Notes
LUZ slouches down and places one hand beneath her chin
CAMERA PUSH IN
Dialog
LUZ [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ looks up, balling her fists
Dialog
LUZ
I?m going to need to know [...]
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Action Notes
LUZ straightens and looks back toward the SPELLBOOK
CAMERA PUSH IN STOP
Dialog
LUZ [...]
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