The picture depicts a girl standing on a beach, though we cannot see her face.

She has long beautiful brown

hair, and she is wearing a jean and top. She might be in deep thought. I reckon that she is in a walking posture.
This picture might have taken by a professional photographer.
Avoid

Review:

- Grammar is correct
- More sentences than required
- Use advanced lexis and grammar
- Focus on the action more than description