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INGLÉS 2

ACT. 3. WRITING TASK FORUM

PRESENTADO POR:

ELIZABETH HERRERA CELIS CÓD. 37559993


YEISON MONTOYA BLANDÓN COD.  71 351 713
JHOAN MILERTH CHAMORRO COD.  1085285805
LAURA PAOLA OSORIO COD.

:
TUTORA:
SANDRA MILENA MENDOZA

GRUPO: 90021_472

UNIVERSIDAD NACIONAL ABIERTA Y A DISTANCIA UNAD


ESCUELA: INVIL- INSTITUTO VIRTUAL DE LENGUAS
PROGRAMA: NACIONAL DE INGLÉS
MARZO 2017
OBJETIVOS

 Crear un perfil personal apoyados en los contenidos de la unidad 1.

 Planear una recomendación laboral de un compañero de grupo a partir del estudio de

la Unidad 1 y 2, donde se desarrolla la temática de Imperativos, recomendaciones

con “should”, verbos modales, subjuntivo, pasado simple, expressing wishes and

desires (would like).

 Escribir una recomendación grupal para una oferta de trabajo y crear una

conversación a partir de una situación posible en la vida que implique pasamientos

abstractos de comunicación teniendo en cuenta el vocabulario en los contenidos del

curso.
DESARROLLO DE LA ACTIVIDAD

Giving advice & Getting a job

Stage 1
Fill in the form

Fill in the gaps according to your own information and upload it to the forum. Write enough
information in the last four items:

ELIZABETH HERRERA CELIS

Full Name: My name is Elizabeth Herrera Celis

Age: I am thirty eight years old

Occupation: I am an assistant in medical office

Marital status: I am married

What do you study: I am studying business administration.

Free time activities: I love to swim and I like to go to the cinema in my free time

Interests: Currently, my mean interests is my family, to improve my job performance


and to finish my studies.

Skills: One of my skills is to learn new things. I am proactive, responsible, intelligent


and very analytical. I have knowledge in health area. Also, I have fasilities for the work
in team and I adapt fast to the work environment.

Work experience: I have worked as nursing assistant by about 10 years in the health
sector, and during this time I have acquired experience in the management of public
health with emphasis in ophthalmology.

Years of experience: I have about 10 years of experience in the sector of health.


YEISON MONTOYA BLANDÓN

Full Name: My name is Yeison Montoya Blandon


Age: I am 32 years old
Occupation I work at the francisco valderrama hospital in the systems area
Marital status: Married
What do you study: Systems engineering
Free time activities: Play soccer and read the bible
Interests: Finish my studies perfection and start a specialization in the area of computer security
or international business
Skills: I have skills as a good leader for business, I also undertake ideas in the area of systems
for sport
Work experience: In administrative processes process in the systems area
Years of experience: 12 years in the health area, 3 years in a bicycle store, 1 year drugstore, 1
in musts and cars laundry
JHOAN MILERTH CHAMORRO GUERRA

Full Name: Jhoan Milerth Chamorro Guerra.

Age: I am twenty six years old.

Occupation: My occupation is student and farmer.

Marital status: I'm single


What do you study: I study agronomy

Free time activities: I like football; I also listen to a lot of music

Interests: My interests are to be a better person and a great

Professional, useful to society and never lose humility

Skills: I am very skilled in the development of mathematical

Calculations; I have a great retentive that helps me to save

More and better knowledge

Work experience: I have experience in the agricultural

Sector, I also know the work of georeferencing


Years of experience: My experience in the agricultural
Sector is already ten years, in the field of georeferencing work

For three years.


LAURA PAOLA OSORIO

Name: My name is Laura Paola Osorio Romero


Age: I’m 22 years old
Job: I work as a Health and Safety resident HSE
Marital Status: I´m single.
I study Industrial engineering
Free Time Activities: I like walking my dog, he’s a Husky. His name is Pulgas. I
like to watch movies and TV series. I also like to go out with Friends for dinner and I
like traveling.
Interest: My main interest is learning, I love learning and I want to grow day by day.
I want to succeed personally and at work.
Abilities: I’m very patient and I have a god control of myself. I’m hardworking and
responsible. I’m never angry or bad tempered. I’m optimistic and can get along
well with anyone. I can learn new things easily end faster.
Experiencia laboral: I’m HSE tecnologyst . I have worked as a HSE resident for
four years.

Stage 2

Writing a recommendation paragraph

Write recommendations to a possible employer picking up one of your mates information,


highlighting the interests, the skills and the work experience. In order to succeed in this
activity, study Unit 1 & Unit 2 located in Knowledge Environment. Minimum 7 lines.
ELIZABETH HERRERA CELIS

For me it is a pleasure to introduce you to Mr. Montoya. Currently he is working at the


Francisco Valderrama Hospital in the system area and he would like to be part of your
company because it could allow him grow professionally. Specially, he is going to start a
specialization in the computer security and the new acquired knowledge would help without
doubt to protect your company's databases. Besides, his experience in administrative
processes would be useful in the area of processes where you have lately had drawbacks. If
you are interested, I could schedule an appointment between you so that he personally
comment to you more about his experience and his salary aspirations. I know that he has
worked in the health sector for the last 12 years, but I do not know any other details that you
are probably interested to know.

YEISON MONTOYA BLANDÓN

To Whom It May Concern. By means of the present we make your acquaintance the lady.
LAURA PAOLA OSORIO Labor in this express from January 1, 2016 until December 31,
2016, performing in a satisfactory manner in the position of head of the hospital. His
responsibilities were to oversee the branches of our company. I note that during the time, Mr.
LAURA PAOLA OSORIO was working for our company always observed an attitude of
improvement, initiative and responsibility, distinguish themselves equally by their values of
honesty and respect, so I have no impediment to recommend it Widely.

JHOAN MILERTH CHAMORRO GUERRA

Mr. Carlos doors.

Director cead pasto.

Best regard.

I speak to you in a very respectful way, I have the knowledge about a very capable and totally
professional person who can occupy the vacancy that the university presents to work in the
development of student practices, I know that this field is key in the development of this
component And therefore the profile that manages the engineer fernando gonzales fits
correctly in the wide alternatives that it is wanted to work, having already made my request I
hope to make the right decision and everything is in favor of development based on the
practice.

I say goodbye and appreciate the attention paid.

Best regards.

LAURA PAOLA OSORIO

Miss. SANDRA MILENA MENDOZA


Head manager
Microsoft Corporation
Washington d.c
 
Dear Mss. Mendoza.
 
It’s a pleasure for me to introduce to you a great person and an excellent candidate for the job
of management assistant that you need in your office of Chicago. 
Firstly I’ll tell you about her great human values. She’s very responsible, Honest and
Punctual. She’s that kind of person whom you can trust whatever you want, and you can be
sure she’s won’t disappoint you.
In the other hand, she’s a great worker.  She has a wide experience at management in
different companies. She’s proactive, creative and analytical. She’s also very organized and
has excellent abilities for dealing with people, what maskes her an ideal person to be in a
leadership position.
You can be sure that your company couldn’t find a better person to hire .
I hope you can make a good deal with her so that your company can get the benefits of
having this great woman in your team.
 
Stage 3
Select a role

From the roles for the collaborative work select one of them and explain your strengths
and weakness related.
Roles Student Strengths Weakness

COMPILADOR
REVISOR: Since it Yeison Montoya Blando One of the strengths of the One of the disadvantages is
ensures that the writing
reviewer role is that it that it does not allow you to
complies with the rules
of presentation of the allows us to comply with evaluate not compile jobs.
work; Required by the
each of the points of the
teacher. Taking into
account the work guide guide; this leads us to
and the evaluation
obtain buna qualifications
rubric.
about the work.
EVALUADOR Laura Paola Osorio Responsible, hardworking Tight agenda at work. Low
and punctual. Good use of management of systems
grammar and writing skills.
ENTREGAS: I am Elizabeth Herrera Celis Responsible Distrusted
going to assume the Honest Shy
delivery role, alerting on Punctuality Irritate
delivery times, sending Commitment The indecision
the final document by
the specified
environment and
indicating to the other
classmates that the
delivery has been made
ALERTAS: From the Jhoan Milerth Chamorro.
roles for
the collaborative
work select one of them
and explain your
strengths and weakness
related

Stage 4

Write a group recommendation for a job.

Imagine there is a job opportunity for a group of 5 people. Write a group


recommendation in which you highlight all the participants’ skills to get that job. Be
creative and in a minimum of 10 lines ask to be employed by the firm, business,
enterprise, etc.

ELIZABETH HERRERA CELIS


ELIZABETH HERRERA CELIS
Dear Mr. Thomson. We would like to introduce ourselves as the team you might need for the
recruitment company. We are an interdisciplinary group thus we can work in different areas.
Allow me to introduce each team member. Firstly, Mr. Montoya is the system engineer of the
team. Currently, he work at the Francisco Valderrama Hospital in the system area. He has
developed skills such as leadership for business and entrepreneurship in the system area,
especially when it comes to sport. He has work experience in processes in the system area.
Secondly, Mr. Chamorro is an agronomy student. At the present time, he is a student and a
farmer. He has experience in the agricultural sector and works related with georeferencing.
Besides, he can development mathematical calculations and also he have a great retentive.
Mrs. Herrera is an assistant in medical office and also she is a business administration
student. She has worked as nursing assistant by about 10 years in the health sector, and
during this time she has acquired experience in the management of public health with
emphasis in ophthalmology. Finally, Mrs Osorio, Firstly I’ll tell you about her great human
values. She’s very responsible, Honest and Punctual. She’s that kind of person whom you can
trust whatever you want, and you can be sure she’s won’t disappoint you. I hope you can
consider each of the members to be part of your company. I am sure they will bring their
experience and skills to perform successfully within your company.

YEISON MONTOYA BLANDÓN

Respected SANDRA MILENA MENDOZA, We are heading before you present as a team
that your company is applying to be hired.

We are a group with good honors, with simplified actions, of a natural nature with objectives
of providing institutional services to the public and private sectors, seeking to reach a level of
improvement.

Our staff is trained by the systems engineer YEISON MONTOYA with high level of
experience in the hospital and financial sector, has great experience in information systems
and excellent management of networks and telecommunications

In the mining sector we have Mr. JHOAN MILERTH CHAMORRO He has a long
experience in the agronomy mining sector. He is now a farmer. In addition, you can develop
mathematical calculations.
In addition we have the professional ELIZABETH HERRERA Student of business
administration is in the capacity of managing and directing companies at national and
international level with a long experience in the hospital medical sector.

To finish we have the professional LAURA PAOLA OSORIO although very young and
enterprising with great thirst for competitiveness to face each of the requested areas that your
company needs. This in the working group that is interested in providing services anywhere
in the country.

JHOAN MILERTH CHAMORRO GUERRA

Dear Mr. Thomson.


We are a working group made up of four people, each one focused on their responsibilities
and with extensive knowledge useful and applicable to their company, first of all that Mr.
Montoya our engineer and who currently works in the hospital Francisco Valderrama in
charge of the entire area Of systems, for my part and Mr. Chamorro, a student of agronomy
who is currently studying the tenth semester of study, knowledgeable of extensive
agricultural techniques and who works as a farmer, nevertheless manages the field of
georeferencing, Mrs. Herrera is a physician's office assistant , Currently a student of business
administration and has worked as a nursing assistant during her years of work has led her to
gain an experience in public health management with an emphasis on ophthalmology, and
last but not least is Miss Osorio , A woman with wide and excellent human values, among
them her Responsibility, honesty and punctuality, is full of confidence and can never doubt
his talent, not being more I hope he can make a correct decision since our group is very
applied and professional with its activities.

LAURA PAOLA OSORIO

Miss. SANDRA MILENA MENDOZA


Head manager
Microsoft Corporation
Washington d.c
It’s a pleasure to me to present to you our work team, which is all you need for that job.

This team is made by five people highly prepared and talented. We have more than six years
of experience working as a team. We have also had great success at every job we have gotten.
We have an impeccable record and the best recommendations of our satisfied clients, not
only in the United States but also abroad.

All of our members are professional and qualified. We have made important alliances around
the world that allow us to get logistical support everywhere.

Let me introduce the members of our team:

Firstly, Mr. Montoya is or system engineer . He has wide experience and skills such as
leadership for business and entrepreneurship in the system area. He’s got excellent values and
aptitude for team work. Secondly, Mr. Chamorro is an agronomy student. Nowadays is
altering his studies with practical experience as a farmer. He has experience in the
agricultural field and works related with georeferencing. Besides, he has great skills for math
had he’s got a great memory. Mrs. Herrera is a business administration student, with more
than ten years of experience in medical assistance and health care field. She’s really god at
dealing with people thanks to her empathy and ability to understand people’s needs. Finally,
Mrs Osorio, despite She’s the youngest member of the team, she shows great values like her
great responsibility, honesty and punctuality.

I hope you can consider our team to be part of you company. You can be sure you won’t be
disappointed and hiring us will be your best decision.

Best regards.

CONCLUSIONES
 Esta tarea nos permitió escribir un perfil laboral con habilidades y logros utilizando
nuestros conocimientos previos siguiendo los parámetros orientados para esta
actividad, de una forma sencilla y creativa.

 Escribir en Ingles implica repasar y estudiar los temas para luego plasmar nuestro
conocimiento en cada una de las Etapas de esta actividad, además permitió conocer
los logros de cada uno de los compañeros en su desempeño laboral, así como su
experiencia laboral, para luego crear una recomendación laboral, explicando porque
está calificado para pertenecen a la empresa contratista.

 A partir de cada una de las Etapas de esta actividad se puede concluir que se obtuvo
conocimiento importante para nuestro desempeño académico, esencial para competir
en cualquier ámbito laboral.

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