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Many students wonder how it would be possible for them to improve band score in
writing and speaking. They have a vague idea of what is lacking in their skills that
restricts their score to below band 7. Sentence structure is an essential element of
assessing skills, especially in writing. If you can improve the structure of a
sentence, you would see the difference it makes.
This example explains how sentences are though correct grammatically but are not
impressive enough for good band score as it contains simple sentences that lack
connectivity and flow.
Moreover,
On the other hand,
In contrast to this,
In addition to this,
However, etc.
Note: Avoid using these connectors excessively which would otherwise lower the
impression of your writing.
2. Use of synonyms
One of the effective means of improving a sentence is when you replace normal
words with synonyms to improve quality of writing.
For example,
Replace “like” with “such as”
Replace “help” with “assistance”
Replace “give advice” with “provide suggestion”
Replace “I want to tell you” with “I would like to inform you”
Note: Using vocabulary or synonyms incorrectly brings negative impression. Hence,
always use the words about which you are comfortable with and learn the complex
vocabulary thoroughly before using in your writing.
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