Reply 1:

I appreciate your effort! You have put forth the right reason for exposing the Mr. Muir and telling truth
about him. I really think that these activities have affected the recreation a lot and it has divided the
people. I wanted to add one thing that now is the time because USA has evolved and recreation
activities are for social harmony. One of the goals of leisure activities is to bring people closer. Sierra
club has great impact on recreational activities therefore its time to mobilize people to discourage
people like Muir and such behaviors. You have done great effort.

Well done!

Reply 2:

You have said right about the impact of Sierra Club. You have projected its impact on other organization
working for recreational and environment conservation activities. But you have taken right stance when
you said “I personally do not believe the current status of these groups should be labeled as racists”. I
support this argument because I also think that there are few racist in such organizations which need to
pointed out. But these groups are doing great work for recreation and environment conversation. I am
very impressed with your writing.

Nice work!