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Practice 1 : At the Funfair

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Last Saturday, Aiman go to a local funfair at her


neighbourhood.
He was fascinating by the variuos stalls and activities.

He see a colourful clown giving out sweets to childrens.

Aiman want to ride on the Ferries wheel but he had to waiting


as there was a long queue ahead of him.
He look around and see the mini-train.

Many children was waving to the crowd from the train as it


chugge along.
Aiman also see a huge castle-themed attracktion.

He walk towards the game stalls to trying his luck at winning


some prizes.
After spent a few hours there, Aiman going home.

He were having an enjoyabel time there.

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Practice 2 : A Local Holiday

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It were a beautiful sunday morning.

Kevin and his family goes to Cameron Highlands for an


holiday.
They want to visit the bharat tea Plantation.

The drive down to the plantation was challenging as the roads


are narrow and winding.
At the plantation, Kevin seeing many workers were
plucked tea leaves.
Then, they throw it into baskets strapped onto their
backs.
Later, Kevin and his family visit the tea faktory.

A guide explaine how tea leaves were processing and packed


into boxes to be sold.
Kevin’s parents was eager to sampled the various types of
tea.
They sip their delicious tea while enjoyed the beautiful
scenery at the tea plantation.
Kevin or his family truly enjoy their day at the tea
plantation.

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Practice 3 : Going Camping by a Waterfall

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Last weekend, Amin and his fellow Scouts go on an overnight


camping trip with Mr. Ramu, they Scoutmaster.

They bring variety of food, beverages and camping gear on


their backpacks.

The path to the campsite were uneven, so the climb were


tough for them.

However, when they reach the campsite, they was spellbound


by the beauty of a nearby waterfall.

The water were crystal clear that it dazzled like


dymonds.

Amin and his friends put down their gear and Mr. Ramu brief
them on their various dutys.

They pitch their tents and settle in.

Later, they building a campfire and sitting around it.

They truly enjoy their night over the stars.

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Practice 4 : Visiting grandparents

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Alif and his family visit his grandparents during the shcool
holidays.

Alif were looking forward to the visit because her


grandparents lived by the sea.

Alif’s grandparents lives in a big house with an huge


compound.

They were delight to saw Alif’s family.

Since they had arrive in the evening, everyone go to the


beach to watch the sunset.

The next day, Alif’s whole family pluck fruits in her


grandparents’ orchard.

Everyone feast on ripe, sweet fruits below a huge tree.

Alif but his family enjoyed the beach and the orchard for three
wanderful days at his grandparents’ house.

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Practice 5 : A Gotong-Royong in School.

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Last Saturday, many pupil and their parents gathering at


Aisyah’s school compound.

Aisyah’s school had organise a gotong-royong to cleared and


spruce up the school grounds.

Mr. Abu, the headmaster, welcome everyone and


thanked to them for sacrificing their time to lend a
helping hand.

Then everyone goes to their designating areas.

Some collect unused or broke desks and chairs.

Others clean the clogged drains or tends to the flowers and


plants.

Meanwhile, Aisyah and our friends distributes cold drinks


to everyone.

After the gotong-royong were over, the volunteers were tired


but satisfied because the school looks really clean and tidy.

As the saying goes, many hands made light work.

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Practice 6 : Helping and old lady

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One fine afternoon, Tiara is walking home from an park.

Suddenly, she see an old lady slowly crossing the rode.

A white car were speeding into her.

The old lady did not noticed the danger she is in.

Without thinking twice, Tina rush towards her and quickly


pulling her to safety.
Both of us were badly shaking.

The old lady were trembling as she know that she had almost
lost her life.
The old lady thanked to Tiara repeatedly for reacting so
quickly and save her life.
She tell Tiara that her house was nearby, so Tiara walks her
home.
Tiara are relieved that an old lady was safe.
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Practice 7 : Saving A Cat

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It is a baeutiful Sunday morning.

Lisa was watered the flowers in she garden.

Suddenly, she hears a cat meowing near the rambutan three.

Lisa look up curiuosly.

To her surprise, she sees a cat up in an tree branches.

She recognise the cat as Timmy, their neighbour’s cat.

Lisa quickly calls the fire depardment.

A few minutes letter, a fire engine arriving.

A fireman carries a ladder to the tree and uses it to climb


the tree.
Timmy were afraid when the fireman approach it.

However the fireman manage to calm it down and he bring


Timmy down from the tree.
Lisa returnes the cat to her neighbor.

They thanking her for helping them to saved the cat.


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Practice 8 : Burglary

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One night, mike and his older sister, Nancy, are staying at
home alone.
Mike is upstairs in his room, study.

Suddenly, he hears his dog barkings.

She looks out his window.

To his horror, he saw two mens climbing on his front


gate.
Mike quickly run out of his room to looks for Nancy.

He founds her wacthing television in the living room.

Mike quietly tell her what he had saw.

Without delay, Nancy call the police and both of them lock
themselves in a room downstairs.
After a while, we heard an police siren.

The policemens were able to catched the thieves.

Mike and her sister come out from the room and they was
very relieved.

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Practice 9 : Food Poisoning

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Ahmad and Arif is in their school’s football teem.

One evening, after their football practise, they were walked


home together.
On our way, they see a rojak stall.

The stall were next to a big monsoon drain and they were a lot
of flies.
Since they are feeling hungry, they decide to have some
rojak.
The boys sit at the rojak stall and ordering the rojak.

The next day, Ahmad wake up with a stomcah ache.

He should not went to school.

His mother has to taking him to the clinic.

He teld the doctor what he had eating.

The doctor give him some medicine and advise him not to eat
at the rojak stall again.
He has learnt his lessen.

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Practice 10 : Incident during a cross-country race

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Last Saturday. Ju Ann’s school helded a cross-country race.

She were excited to participated in the race.

She was one of the better runners in school.

All the pupil gather at the gate.

When the whistle blow, they starting running.

Halfway through the race, Ju Ann see her friend, Julia in her
side.
She is not looking at where she is going.

She trips and felling down.

Julia help Ju Ann up and they walk slowly back to school.

Julia take Ju Ann to saw a doctor at a nearby clinic.

Although they do not finish the race, Ju Ann were happy.

He was glad his friend had stopped to help her. As the saying
goes a friend in need is a friend indeed.

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Practice 11 : A Playground on Fire

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It was a bright Saturday morning, a prefect day for


outdoor activity.
Rajan and his sister jog near them house.

They decide to jog around the playground before going house.

As they are running, they smell smoke.

We saw a men burning rubbish in the playground.

There were a thick cloud of smoking.

Without deley, Rajan call the fire department.

He know that people were not allows to burn rubbish.

A little while later, a fire engine arrive and the firemen


quickly putted out the fire.
One of them give a stern warning to the man who starts the
fire.
Another fireman praise Rajan and his sister four their quick
action.

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Practice 12 : A Visit To The Zoo

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During the school holidays, Iman and his cousins visits the
national zoo.
They where excited to seeing a lot of animals.

They stand at the lion’s enclosure and watch them eagerly.

The lions are growling loudly and walked around


majestically.
Later, they walk past the mischievous monkeys which are
trying to snatch food from the visitors.
They stop to watch the colourful birds two.

They was lucky as they see a peacock dancing and


spreading it’s beautiful, spectacular tail.
After looked at all the various animals, they go to see the
seals performing tricks.
It really is an unforgettable day for Iman and her cousins.

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Practice 13 : A Day at The Beach

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It was the hot day.

The sun were shining brightly into the sky.

The birds was singing and they was a brisk breeze


blowing.
Jonah and his family are spending a day at an beach.

They are resting on a mat and enjoying them lunch.

Jonah see many other picnickers who are resting, playing


and swimming.
Some beach-goers are strolling over the beach of fine white
sand.
Jonah and he brother was building sandcastles.

The sandcastles were impressive and looked like a


fortress.
Jonah’s parents was rested near a big shady tree.

They was enjoying the beautiful scenery of the beach who


looked calm and peaceful.
After spending a few hours in the beach, Jonah and his family
went house.
It’s was a wonderful day for everyones.

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Practice 14 : Blackout
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One evening, Encik Ali and her family were watching


an interesting movie in television.
His childrens are enjoying the movie.

It is raining slightly inside.

All of a sudden, the electricities in the house go out.

There is total darkness on the house.

Encik Ali’s daughter were afraid and she hugs her father.

His wife and son slowly walk to the kitchen and they get some
candles from the kitchen cabinet.
She then lighting three of the candle.

She leave one in the kitchen, one the dining room and
bring one to the living room.
The room was quiet bright now.

The family sit down and both Encik Ali and his wife tell them
stories about their younger days.
About an hour later, an electricity were on again.

As it is getting late, they decides to go to bed.

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Practice 15 : A Blood Donation Campaign

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A ‘Blood Donation Campaign’ were held at the


taman kencana community hall last week.
Many residents around that area go to the hall to donate theirs
blood.
One of them is Encik Hassan, who had been donated
blood for a few years.
He feels proud of himselves after donating his blood.

He said that donating blood is a noble act or it can


save someone’s life.
He persuades other people to donate their blood.

There are many adults and students come to join the


campaign.
None of their were afraid to donate them blood.

They are in fact happy and ready to donating their blood.

The donation drive lasts from 9.00 am to 5.00 pm.

It wre a successful event as the hospital staff feels happy that


a lot of blood had been collected for the hospital’s ‘ Blood
Bank’.

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Practice 16 : Injury

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It was a cheary Sunday morning.

Musa and his friends are playing ‘sepak takraw’.

They was practising for the ‘Inter School Sepak Takraw


Competition’ that will be took place soon.
Unfortunately, Musa accidentaly hurted his left knee when he
somersaulted to kicking the ball while playing.
His coach take him to the klinic.

The doctor bandage her knee.

In a day or two, Musa were fit and well to played again.

He plays well in the finals and his school win and emerge as
champions.
His headmaster, teachers but parents was proud of him.

Musa and his friends was indeed very happy.

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Practice 17 : Mother’s Day

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Mother’s Day ws coming soon.

Raisya plan to buy a present for her mother in the special day.

She wants to buy his mother a purse.

However, she does not have enough moneys yet.

So, she decides to save her pocket money daily onto her
piggy bank.
Instead of buy food at the canteen, she bring her own food
and drinks to school.
After one month, she had save enough money.

She go to the supermarket and buys a leather purse for


her mother.
On Mother’s Day, Raisya give the leather purse to his
mother.
Her mother was surprising and touching by her gift.

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Practice 18 : A Fun Raising Fair

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Last week, Iman’s English teacher ask the class to


did a project.
Miss Sheila ask them to brought some materials to the class
the next day.
There were very exciting.

Miss Sheila teach Iman and his classmates on how to maked


a Beak Book.
She give them clear instructions to followed.

Later, Miss Sheila instructs them to write an story in the Beak


Book.
The pupils which wrote the good story would be given a
present.
The next day, Miss Sheila announce that Iman write the
best story.
He gave her a present and asked him to read his story to
the class.
Iman were on cloud nine because his effort was
rewarding.

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Practice 19 : Tripped While Cycling

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One morning Vinesh wake up late because he play


online games the night before.
He shower quickly and get ready for school.

He cycle as fast as he could to school.

He is afraid of being scolding by his teacher.

While he was cycled, he did not saw a big stone in front of


him.
His bicycle trip over and he fall off his bicycle.

His knees was badly injured and he were crying loudly in


pain.
He tryed to stand but he should not do so.

Luckily, a kind-hearted passer-by see her.

He quickly sending Vinesh to a nearest hospital.

Then, he informe Vinesh’s parents for the incident.

He had learning his lesson.

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Practice 20 : A Snatch Thief

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One morning, Zaim are jogging in the park near him


house.
There was also several other peoples exercising there.

He jog pass their.

Suddenly, when he were near a isolated area, he saw a


snatch thief sprang out from a little bushes.
He tries to attack a lady joggers.

Without thought twice, Zaim immediately blow the whistle he


kept in his pocket.
He run fast along the lady jogger.

The thief did not realised that Zaim were nearby.

He are very shocked upon seeing Zaim and he run for his
life.
Later, Zaim accompanyied the lady back to her home
safely.
The lady praise Zaim for his quick an brave action.

She thanked to him for his help.

Zaim felt happy because he had done a good deed.

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Note :
“Never stop dreaming,
never stop believing,
never give up,
never stop t r ying, and
never stop learning.”

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