Ana, I am going to put the correction in CAPS for it to be easier for you:

The first writing claims that unmanaged tourism is not sustainable let alone beneficial for
small communities.(presenting) OK, PRESENTING A … a plethora of arguments, the first
essayist places great importance on the outcame OUTCOME AND an the detrimental effects
unsustainable tourism brings. Notwithstanding, the second text sheds LIGHT a light on the
criticism that tourism endures such as being an ¨rapacious predator¨ of smaller cities.

Advocating NOT RIGHT, ANA. PONDERING on the downside of tourism, the first text states
some consequences that leave us baffled and taken aback. Therefore, I am convinced that
not only does unsustainable tourism affect small towns but also its dwellers by fore FOR
example, destroying its wildlife and disrupting communities when holiday season
approaches. On a lighter note, the second essayist PROVIDES INSIGHT gives an insight
into the criticism tourism endures. Although there are countless COUNTLESS TRAVEL
AGENCIES of travel agencies which promote sustainability, kudos to them, the majority of
holiday makers present many territories as places WHOSE which alluring ambience is only
transient.

Tourists ARE SOMETIMES sometimes are kept in the dark about unsustainable tourism
hence why IT IS ESSENTIAL TO UNDERSTAND THE FIRST TEXT TO UNDERSTAND…
the first text is essential to understand what happens in those cities that leave us spellbound
and not turn a blind eye to the quandaries that they suffer. Local cultures can suffer as the
needs of tourist are given priority. For example, HANDCRAFT artesanal shops could be
demolished to make way for retail development. In addition, the negative effects on the
environment such as, poisoning the sea with sewage or denuding wildlife are well
documented.

Never had it occurred to me that tourism could put communities in jeopardy and how THEIR
its inhabitants face the peril of losing their territory.Although I am no globetrotter, and I
certainly do not regard myself as someone who lives out of a suitcase, it seems to me that
those small, quaint cities affected negatively by tourism HAVE embroiled themselves in this
predicament by resorting to it as a MEANS medium of income.