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Cole Ruid
Ms. Schaner
6 November 2019
Higher Power
Going into the idea of a cultural experience was, if anything, a trivial concept for me to
grasp. I have always been open-minded, open to new experiences, and (in recent years
especially) seeking means by which to grow my cultural palette. Until seeking another
experience for this very project, I thought that I had seen it all. I thought that I would have a hard
time taking anything new away from any experience I would attend. This notion of mine was
proven wrong in one short weekend. Growing up, I was never truly exposed to religion and what
it means to people. I had not pondered in depth about why Christians felt so compelled to follow
something they had no solid evidence for. However, I had been raised on respect for religion in
general, even if I was not religious myself. In fact, I have taken part in some religious activities
in the past. Being a counselor at Camp Sunshine (a summer camp for those with developmental
disabilities) required me to participate in prayer and certain worship songs. I spoke of God with
my campers for their sake, even if I did not believe. But even through this respect of religion I
found myself reluctant to agree to a weekend at a church retreat, something I had been invited to
by a close friend. The retreat took place on October 25-27, 2019. It would include no phones, no
familiar faces, no notion of the time of day, and me being an odd man out. My reluctance proved
to be irrelevant at the end of the weekend as I walked away with an answer to a question I had
not even known that I had: why is it that so many people follow Christianity?
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Looking back on my thoughts before attending this retreat- effectively named “Teens
Encountering Christ” (TEC)- I was honestly nervous. My friend who had invited me to sign up
for TEC, like everyone else who attends, was a regular churchgoer; but she knew that I was not.
She assured me that my agnosticism would not be germane to how the rest of the attendees (or as
we were called, candidates) viewed me. Even with that in mind, I still fretted about everything
from “What if I accidentally let ‘Oh my God’ slip?” to “Would it be disrespectful if I wore a
shirt that said ‘Science’ on it?” All of these sophistries, of course, were based on stereotypes and
radicalist images of Christians in my mind. Why I had these preconceived images is a question
that even I cannot fully answer. Perhaps I was not as open-minded as I thought I was. Was it the
media that gave me such a perception? Social media outlets are known for radicalism, and this
may be the culprit of many misunderstandings about religion. Having never learned in depth
about modern Chritianity and what most Christians believe, the media was my only tool to build
what turned out to be a severely distorted picture of these individuals. Nevertheless, I told myself
that if it came up in conversation, I would be completely honest and say that I did not identify
myself as religious or even go to church. Whether this would make my fellow candidates taciturn
or not, I did not want to lie and inevitably be caught in the lie. To my surprise, this had almost no
effect on people’s view of me when I inevitably told a few of my new friends. I was also worried
about what activities would take place over the weekend as we were not allowed to know about
the schedule for the weekend whatsoever. However, this was part of the excitement, and I will
admit I did enjoy the aspect of the unknown. A downside for me, though, was that I did not know
if I needed to mentally prepare myself for any religious activities that I was not used to taking
part in. Certain activities, like saying grace at meals or attending a church service, were things I
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was used to taking part in occasionally. My fear was that I would be placed in a new situation
and not know how to respond or act. An example of this was the very first night, just before bed.
All of the candidates were given an opportunity to participate in an Ash Wednesday type
ceremony, in which we each received an ash cross on our foreheads to represent our sin. This
was an incredibly new experience for me and some of my fellow candidates. Even those who
regularly attended church seemed to be a bit uncomfortable. At first I felt quite a bit awkward
and out of place, but after talking to others who also did not know about the ceremony, I felt
better about it. Though it did make me question overall devotion across the religion. To call
oneself a Christian, how devoted must one be? Does it simply take identifying as a Christian? Or
does it take more, must one be an avid follower who knows The Bible cover to cover, and goes
to church three times a week? During the ceremony, I told myself that this is a normal instance
for most Christians. Me not being a Christian and not knowing the reasons behind most of the
events that took place, though, is exactly what made this a cultural experience in my eyes. I am
not normally a part of the Christian culture, the culture including everyone who shares the belief
system of Christianity. My belief system is quite different than that of a Christian, so I sought to
The weekend at TEC taught me a great amount about how and why people follow
Christianity. Over the course of the retreat, there were a number of “talks” given by different
members of the volunteer crew. These were extremely open speeches during which the speakers
would go into detail about different hardships and struggles that they have faced in their lives.
Then they would wrap up their talks by telling about their first experience at TEC and how much
of an impact it had on their well being. Many of those who spoke were non-religious before
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attending, and quite a few were struggling with depression. But, after attending TEC,
experiencing the welcoming community, the closeness with Christianity, and the amazing bonds
they could make in just a short weekend; it was enough to ease them out of their rut and
introduce them to faith. Hearing these testimonies was an incredible eye-opener for me as they
showed me just how much of an impact Christianity has on its followers. As I looked around
during and after these talks, I saw how much empathy the community had for the speakers.
People who were complete strangers cried for each other and consoled one another. To see how
open, honest, and vulnerable each of the speakers were, even in front of an audience full of
unfamiliar faces, was tear-jerking to say the least. I found myself asking questions to myself
about, well, myself. I found that I was able to relate with some of the struggles that were spoken
of, whether I had previously acknowledged them or not. Hearing how the speakers dealt with
such struggles was refreshing for me to hear and helped me grow a bond with these people I had
never met before. The talks also showed me just how much of an impact Christianity can have on
individuals. Hearing about how much of a positive outlook the speakers had after finding
Christianity showed me why people follow the religion at all. Christianity can give hope to those
who have no hope left and, as I saw from the talks and the community, bring happiness when
“It’s really nice having a big group of people that have gone through the same stuff I
have,” says a former candidate, “and the community is super welcoming, and very judge-free.”
(Goodemoot). This former candidate had her first TEC quite some time ago, but she has kept
returning for the community. So many attendees have great things to say about the welcoming
community because the outside world is not nearly as accepting. This brings me to my next
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question: what is it that makes the community inside TEC different than outside? Is it because
everyone who attends TEC has at least one thing in common, the commonality being
Christianity? Is it because we are forbidden from bringing our phones, causing us to make
friends and physically interact with each other? One of the main things we were told as
candidates was to “bring the energy of TEC to the outside world”, but the difference in
communities is so distinct that I feel as though it would seem out of place to be as happy as we
are inside TEC. Have we, as a society, almost normalized being sad and antisocial? Should this
normal world? A common religion may be part of it, as found in this study on antisocial
lifestyles: “Weak bonds to society and individuals, self centredness, low empathy, and lack of
religious belief are all associated with substance misuse and an antisocial lifestyle.” (Shepherd).
A similar article provides statistics: “Of the 178 most methodologically rigorous studies, 119
(67%) find inverse relationships between R/S and depression. Religious beliefs and practices
may help people to cope better with stressful life circumstances, give meaning and hope, and
surround depressed persons with a supportive community.” (Bonelli) The situation described in
the article is almost parallel to the events that take place at TEC, a supportive community to help
its members cope with their own life struggles. Outside of these communities, we are back
forced into antisocial tendencies. These tendencies can be difficult to break, but breaking them
can bring groups of people out of a dark mental state. Religious organizations do not have to be
the only reason for these tendencies to be broken, all one would need is willpower.
While I still do not plan to attend church anytime soon, it would be a lie if I said I have
not been impacted spiritually and emotionally. Knowing more about faith has opened my eyes in
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multiple ways. In the future, I plan to continue attending TEC as a volunteer worker, perhaps
continuing to grow spiritually. If I continue to attend and invite others along with me,
Christianity may become a bigger part of my life. In any case, the ideas will forever stay with
me. Human interaction without the help of a device is one of the deepest connections one can
make, and I challenge myself, along with the reader, to make more of these connections. I also
challenge myself to be more accepting of others, and to be less antisocial when it comes to
making these new connections. Religion, regardless of one’s beliefs, is an amazing thing that
brings people together. Christianity is just one part of the spectrum, but anything that can bring
individuals together and bring happiness in that capacity is doing good in the community.
Optimism, sociability, and overall kindness should be a part of everybody’s lives. Faith is truly
an amazing thing, and if faith gets you all three, then Halleluia.
Works Cited
Bonelli, Raphael, et al. “Religious and Spiritual Factors in Depression: Review and Integration
of
Shepherd, Jonathan, and David Farrington. “The Impact of Antisocial Lifestyle on Health.” BMJ