Nurin Syafirra Binti Sharulfizam (2019221118)

Shahmi Faiz Bin Shahar (2019647436)

KAD1113A

Topic : Benefits of Doing Part Time Jobs for Students

Thesis statement : Having part-time jobs can help student to achieve extra money. Not only
that students can improve their working experience skills. Interacting with different kinds of
people.

Topic sentences 1 : Earn extra pocket money

Supporting Details : 1) Spend for myself to buy basic essentials for education.
2) Lighten the burden of the family and not relying much on parents.
3) To keep as an emergency money for the future.

Topic sentences 2 : Improving skills

Supporting Details : 1) Gain working experience which help to shows dedication in doing
your job. Mastering at whatever you doing and can easily deal with customers.
2) Time management skills give you responsibility on coming work or
school on time.
3) Learn how to balanced your social life , personal life and
professional life. It help you to push yourself to become an open-minded person because
you learn to respect and be professional in front of people especially on customers.

Topic sentences 3 : Interact with new people

Supporting Details : 1) Make new connection in the work place such as high rank people
who can be your networking after graduate and when you want to find a good career.
2) Making friend in work place who could possibly become your
lifelong and help you cope the stress being a student.
3) Meeting new people from diverse background can enhance your
communication skills with people.

Conclusion : In conclusion, Students who take part time jobs can really give a good impact
on their life. For example, they can learn how to be independent and how the society work.