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In general, people are more willing to accept the advice of friends than they are to follow advice from

family members.
I agree that it is a sad truth but although it is certainly correct that most of the time we resort to, ask for
and follow the advice of our friends than those of our family. An act that at a point could be harmful for
our lives since sometimes we usually choose evil friends and in reality, they are people full of envy, they
want bad things to happen to you or they are your friends for material istic or popularity purpose.
Perhaps we should also point out the fact that, sometimes your friends are not in the complete capacity
to give you good advice, simply because they are in the same stage of growth as you and do not have
much experience, people with a lack of character, or boys in bad habits who They do not know how to
make truly good decisions that contribute positively to their future. Now if they will be yours? 
On the other hand, the advice of your friends is not bad all the time, in fact some turn out to be very
good. It is only a matter of being selective and critical .Moreover remembering that sometimes your
family is your blood and that they will always provide you with the best possible advice that they
believe is for your benefit and future, you should  not   forget the experience that your parents
have/possess.
To sum up, I recommend that you create a balance and when you need advice, ask your family and
friends after that, you compile the really good words, they tell/inform you to make an excellent
decision.

Great work Laura! 

4.5 out of 5.  Please develop your “Conclusion”


further and in greater details for your next writing.
 

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