Persuasive Writing

Hi mom, you look beautiful today. Actually I want to ask you for a wish. I want a car.
Life in the college without a car is very difficult. Our class are located at the blok E
which is at the top. Meanwhile, our hostel are at the very bottom. It is very far to go
from hostel to my class. Furthemore, if it is raining at that time, I would be all wet
from top to bottom. Things inside my bag such as books and laptop will maybe wet
too. If the books and laptop get wet, it will surely be broken and unuseble. Plus, if I
have my own car, i would be able to go back home myself. Dad would not have no
pick up me anymore and then send me back when the holidays are over. I can drive
on my own. Thats why I really hope that you would buy me a car. Just a cheap one
are also fine as long as it is useble.