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FEEDBACK Writin4 Daniel-Vargas 184270 0
FEEDBACK Writin4 Daniel-Vargas 184270 0
For me she was the prettiest girl in my all school. One day I ran into
her, but I was very shy at that time and didn't know what to say to
her. Later I was playing my guitar in a school’s room and she
approached me and told me that I played the guitar very well, so I
started to play more music for her and that way I fell in love with her.
When I came back home, I told my mother that I had met a very
beautiful girl and I wanted to introduce her to her. My mom doesn’t
had (didn’t have) problem with her. My mom was happy too. Then I
went to sleep and woke up to go to class. My mom made me
breakfast and like every day I went to class. When it was recess
time, I camenear her and asked her out. she accepted my
appointment. We both went to the movies and watched the ice age
movie.
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