“Hi Good Morning, hope you are doing well.

When I started reading your draft by looking at the title, I

didn’t understand your topic moving on the introduction helped me understand what you are going to
talk about in your paper. First of all, I would like to tell you that you have chosen a very unique topic and
can be an interest of many college students. Also, I would like to tell you that you have chosen a very
interesting question for your research analyses. Excellent points: Opening statement and introduction
Excellent transition from paragraph to paragraph Used research perfectly in order to explain the
analyses Perfect division of paragraphs Good point: highlighting effective words to stress on Excellent
vocabulary Sincere use of intertextuality and discourse community Very explanatory study overview
Interesting research method very interactive with the audience Perfect Appendix Perfect citations in
descending order Followed proper MLA format Overall after reading your research I would like to tell
you that you have done a great job and your paper is perfect. It’s a final draft material you just need to
review it for correct punctuations and verb tenses. Else it’s a 100/100 paper. Congratulations and best of
luck! I would like to hear more from you thank you!”

-student